When a Reborn Heroine Meets a Book-Wearing Heroine

This is my favorite Lily. Overall it's not bad, but the content is a bit simple and crude, the span is a bit wide, and some details are missing. If the details are explained clearly, it may make it easier for people to devote themselves to the scene and be immersed in it.

Lily! YYDS! So sweet that it hurts your teeth! [Full] [Full] [Full]

It's really beautiful. The interaction between Qiu Ya and Yan Xingmo is so sweet, and the deputy CP is also so sweet, so sweet. Moreover, the plots are also very complete, there are no pitfalls, so you can feel free to snipe blindly. The author is also very silly, and there are many interesting jokes in it. I guarantee that I will laugh to death after reading it. I have never read an unfinished novel before, except for this one, because it is so good!

Come on, author! For some people who only read a little bit and then directly comment and give some low ratings, you don't need to care about them. Don't take such words at ease, just write well! It's enough to have these little cuties like us~[Send heart][Send heart]

Lily Don't worry about the cookies, you won't lose anything if you get them The writing is delicate and gentle, I believe it will get better and better in the future (✪▽✪) Daily question: Did Sister Qiu lose her character today? Author, when will you see me [crying][crying][crying]

It's beautiful, it's a rare Lily article (￣y▽￣)~*It's just that there are a few updates and it's not enough to read.

How should I put it? The writing is very poor.

It is also essential to highlight the character's form, expression and side profile. I read the first few chapters here, and the character's background and personality are not well explained (the same is true for Teacher Qin. After all, the protagonist is studying in a "high-end" "university". Snobs like this like to find faults and find trouble. A more extreme "teacher" probably won't be hired. Even if he is hired, there will be reasons and backgrounds, which I haven't explained yet.) The heroine's emotional line is not done well, so I can't just skip it. But it's just the beginning, and it's still easy to write, so take your time, come on! ! ! [Learned][Learned]

Lily yyds's okay.

First of all, the emotional description is really rough, and the overall story also feels like the writing style of an elementary school student, which is mindless and refreshing... Just... Author, your writing is indeed sweet, but this does not mean that the writing style can be ignored. I really haven't read much, so I gave it five stars. Secondly, the author, your writing style... If you know a little about the overall story, you will know everything. If you say it is nice, it will be classic. It's a bit ugly, the story is old-fashioned and not very interesting. I only read a few chapters. If you want to say that the later part is good, then let me ask, the first part is not good. Except for some patient people who will look back, some people will quit directly, and a few people will jump to read it. In this fast food era, if you can't make people's eyes light up from the beginning, half the battle is lost. I don't know what the story is about, but I can probably guess it. Author, don't you really think the story is too cliche? Of course, I'm not saying that the subject matter is not good, but that your plot is very cliche. For example, if the teacher learns that the heroine is going to his class, even if he goes to the theory, he will not talk to the principal in such an arrogant tone, unless it is to experience life. Secondly, even the teacher hates a student. , And you won't go to the principal to make trouble, and the emotional line, it takes a very love-hungry person to fall in love with each other at the first meeting (it is true between friends). Moreover, when I watched the small theater, I said that the heroine was cold. Can you tell me how cold she looked in the few chapters I read? And it's unreasonable for you to be in the infirmary. Two people who have never met each other have only met for a few days, and they stand up in a hurry just because of a joke... It's simply outrageous! Moreover, since ratings are very important to authors, then read more and improve your writing skills, even if it is not for readers or novels, but for yourself. After all, there are not many people like me who can say that the writing is not good but give it a five-star rating, and if the writing is good, I will not worry about writing.

Before watching: Lily Yeah After reading: This is written... Forget it, why read novels to use your brain (IQ minus 999, happiness plus 999)

Is this book what I thought it was?

In terms of language, the author should add a colon after the verb before writing his inner thoughts. Without you explaining what is on his mind, the reader will easily think that this is what someone said. It can also be "someone (adjective) thinking: what is in the heart". The sentences will flow more smoothly. When we want to reflect a person's psychological state, we don't want to describe a single expression, just a frown. We can write actions, for example: She pushed up her glasses irritably. Someone (adjective) (verb) (noun). This is my personal suggestion. I hope the author will adopt it. I hope the author's book will reach a higher level and gain more book fans and fame.

Baihe Wen, Xiaobai Wen, the vocabulary library is a bit shallow, and some words are inappropriate in some places, such as the relationship between Qin Yu and the heroine in a certain chapter. There is no need to say anything about the next breakdown. It would be much better to write it directly, and there is no need to pursue gorgeous words. Maybe... I didn't think about it at the time. After being poured cold water on me, I asked her whether the treatment was not good. I took her to the infirmary to have a look, otherwise she would catch a cold. Would it be better to write it like this? Don't introduce a bunch of characters. After you see it, you can learn the identity from outsiders' words. It's annoying to introduce a bunch of people, and some people may skip it. Good luck to you every year.

I think there are too many small theaters by the author. Those who don't know think it is some kind of chat conference. It depends on the content, not extras, just occasionally. And the heroine is really a bit of a saint. Some people are targeting her, but she doesn't know how to fight back. How can she be so weak when she has a vest? She is exposed casually. All I can say is this The waistcoat is not perfect, and some people threatened it, and even chose to compromise. It was okay once. Others threatened to compromise a second time. I really can't understand it. I can only say that the writing style needs to be strengthened. The first time I wrote it, it was already very good. What I said can only be regarded as a review. I can still give stars.

The writing style is too immature, the transitions are stiff, and the protagonist's character is shaped by classic old routines. Although I haven't seen much of it, the previous ones are a bit industrial saccharine. The villain is really brainless and over the top. The content and plot are average, the logic in some places does not make sense, and the portrayal of the protagonist and supporting characters is not good enough... The above only represents my personal opinion

Big boost to the author 💪

Although Tomato is widely circulated in mainland China, this is the first full-length novel I have read. Many firsts in life will become eternal classics. Our first toddling, our first babbling, our first lifting of chopsticks and pens, our first carrying of schoolbags to school... Maybe a few years later, we can already run in the wind, but those first times have already been engraved in our hearts. We have experienced wind and rain, seen the rainbow in the sky, and looking back, the remaining warmth still warms you and me...❤❤❤... Hui Chang Hui Chang likes the small theater session, it's very interesting! 😍😍😍

Well... Let's put it this way, the plot of this book is a bit too childish, and the narration is a bit dry. The setting is good, and it is good to let readers guess. But if you keep asking readers to guess, readers will lose interest and jump into the trap that many new writers fall into. Then I thought... Is it a little serious to make up the word count? In the first few chapters alone, there are a lot of four-character idioms praising Qiuya. There is no foreshadowing at all. It's all about writing whatever comes to mind, and I lose interest after reading it halfway. Actually... I would like to make a small suggestion, don't describe everything, describe something useful, don't just write about what you say, what you say, it looks really uncomfortable, and the content before and after does not match. I was very confused. One moment there was a big difference in strength, and another moment they were about the same. I completely abandoned the less detailed settings at the end of the writing. Well, let's just say, I didn't criticize you. It's just that the writing was too... Just a small opinion. Thank you for reading my review. I wish you a happy life~

Why? You update when I'm in school. When I went on winter vacation, you didn't update me. Why? ! ! ! I'm going crazy (╥╥). [Cry][cry]

My man just likes to look at lilies, what should I do?

Not bad, keep up the good work

It seems like it's been around for a while, but overall it's pretty good, except that the number of words in each chapter is a bit short [face covering]

Very good. The small theater at the back is also great.

It's really beautiful and the author is very active. It's the first time I've seen such an active author. As for the rating, it's very unreasonable. Just make random comments if you don't understand.

Well, this is simply a sweet lily, and it doesn't feel like mindless licking. It doesn't feel like licking a dog like other writings. Anyway, the overall evaluation is that it is very well written. Come on💪

Five stars, come on

The lilies in my hometown are infinitely better.

Hey hey hey, every time I look at it my mouth will water.

Yes, but the characters are a bit slow to come out. There are a lot of them as soon as they come out. It may also be because I stopped reading for a long time before reading the follow-up. The shortcoming is that before the 40th chapter, it was a bit separated from the book () and it was not that close, and the story clues were unclear. But it's okay. Students understand your pain. Keep up the good work! Quick update (kneeling) [crying]