The Wang Family's Immortal Cultivation Biography

The writing is very good and the writing style is smooth. Novels about cultivating immortals, especially family novels, are difficult to write and can easily become eunuchs. It is recommended that the author write his own characteristics. The personality characteristics of each character should be vivid and the details should be grasped. For example, two evil cultivators were killed, and the loot was not included. The protagonist jumped over the level twice. Some are simple and easy. The protagonist has not used the golden finger since he got it. You can write more about the psychological changes of the characters. I hope this book becomes a hit.

It's well written. Good luck to the author, but the number of words is too few and there aren't many updates. I have to keep reading [face covering]

I've only read four chapters so far, and I think it's average. Of course, I can't see much from these chapters, but I can already see at least two family novels that the author has borrowed from. The origin of the development of the Pig's Foot family, the geographical environment and surroundings, the story of Cangli (now renamed), the surname and generation of the Pig's Foot family, and the Wang family at the top of the Green Lotus, which the family characters borrowed. I guess there may be plots and settings borrowed from different novels in the future [laughing][laughing]

Still quite excellent

A very wonderful book, five-star praise, go ahead

A very comfortable novel about family cultivation of immortality, Golden Finger is OK, Twin Spiritual Roots, except for being a bit of a noob, everything else is pretty good!

It's very good to watch, but I wish there could be more roles for the protagonists

This book is very good⊙▽⊙

Hahaha, just have a golden finger, otherwise how can you become an immortal?

A novel about being born directly into the Jindan family. It's pretty good, but the updates are too slow. I hope the author will update a few chapters every day.

Still good! A tie is too low, right? What's going on! Getting worse

This book is very well written, I hope it won't be discontinued

Awesome, keep it up

I need to keep some books.

Support support support!

It's very interesting. I've been watching it for so long and realized that I forgot to comment. . .

Come on, author, come on!

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad. The author needs to follow quickly.

It's okay, let's see what happens next

It's quite interesting. It's no longer the cliché plot of the seriously injured clan leader, but there are too few.

Come on first! The overall idea is good. The number of words increased by adding more water, but it loses compactness. If it is not compact, it will not be exciting.

A very good novel about cultivating immortals, come on, author!

It's good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, but it's a bit lacking. Good luck, author (ง•̀_•́)ง

Very good novel

Hurry up and learn the various arts of cultivating immortals! If you are anxious for revenge, don't be so anxious😄

This is no better than those so-called 9 o'clock ones

Can you not become an alchemist? Isn't it good to be a formation master?

Overall, it's okay.

Oh oh Nohara Shinnosuke