Online Games: Retired Genius Returns and Shocks the E-Sports Circle

The setting of this book is still very attractive to me. The psychological activities of the protagonist and the feeling of youth frustration are well described. In addition, I read it relatively late. The word count has exceeded 2 million words, so I don't have to worry about breaking the eunuch. I am currently at the end of the first volume. In the first volume, each character has his or her own characteristics. It is also in line with my imagination of group portrait novels. Some of the funny elements mixed in are not boring. My reaction after reading the first volume is probably to feel sorry for the author. Obviously there are only a few people who have read it with such high quality, so I came here to quickly rate it. I wish the author this and the next book will get better and better! Come on!

It is indeed well written, with the feeling of Ye Zi. In fact, the plot of the dungeon is better than that of Ye Zi. The Moon Lake dungeon is a good example. It is rare to have such a good work when online game writing is not popular nowadays. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. There are too many dialogues, especially those of Haozi, which are often skipped, which affects reading. In addition, the data is not clear, the equipment and characters, and the skills of the warlock in the early stage are very unclear. Although you will have to switch back to the light swordsman later, the first two hundred chapters are all warlock professions after all. In the end, I hope the author can keep writing and the work will get better and better.

I just read more than 100 chapters, so I can briefly describe my feelings. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's writing style is good, and the copy is also well designed. It looks very comfortable. Moreover, there are no unbalanced things like SSS talents or exclusive artifacts at the beginning, so as to give people the pleasure of slowly growing. The other comments in the comprehensive comment area (I can tell the difference between a real person and a computer) should be a classic online game novel worth reading. But there are also some dissatisfactions. The first is the plot of the warlock stage. I understand the author's intention in arranging it, but it is a bit too long. It wants to be promoted but suppressed for too long. The author wants to reflect the growth of the protagonist's character, but there are too many descriptions of the protagonist's indecisiveness and escaping from reality, which leads to the reader's first feeling not of growth, but of disgust. Also, I personally prefer rigorous data-based online games. But this book is pretty good for its rigor, but the data is a little lacking. You don't know the detailed attributes when you get equipment, you don't know the detailed multiplier when you get skills, you don't know how much blood you lose when fighting monsters. Although it is better to have no data than chaotic or corrupted data, I have read too many classic online game articles by great masters, and my taste has developed. In summary, it's worth watching. Suitable for slow viewing.

The writing is really good, maybe the warlock part in the early part is a bit boring, but the further it gets, the better it gets. Whether it's the emotional line that makes me envious, or the ability to make so many lovely and reliable friends, maybe these are the most precious things in life. The pace is very slow, but it's really good. I spent a few days reading during the day and listening to the book at night, and I just finished the updated parts of the whole book. I feel confused and disappointed when I see that the rest of the book is not finished. I hope it can be updated soon. I'm really looking forward to it. Come on, come on. I don't know how many times I've logged in. I still want to see the follow-up, but it's probably gone [crying]

The writing style is good, and the writing power is one of the best in Tomato. Although it is said to be in the first person, it actually looks very smooth, and thanks to the combination of the author's writing style and the characteristics of the first person, there will be a good sense of substitution, which is a rare thing recently. The plot is slow and group-based, the characters are not all the same, and it has a good sense of daily life. The protagonist is not a traditional holy lord, nor is he the current murderous lord. He is a character that is closer to reality. If you like to read simple and fast-paced novels, it is not recommended. After all, there are not many writers of this type in recent years. If you can accept this type of writing that requires more detailed reading, this book will give you a relatively good experience. In terms of online games, it can be seen that the author's professionalism is very low. The data and skills... Are relatively difficult to describe. For example, the mimicry skill is an obvious supermodel skill. Many skills and props do not have their data clearly stated when introducing them, making them look supermodel or unclear in strength. In terms of tactics, that sentence is still not professional enough. It is recommended not to delve into this part of the content (after all, these are more biased toward the preferences of data flow readers. It is difficult to write this kind of thing perfectly and accurately) Then, the author feels like someone who writes dozens of minutes for several hours of class. Some parts of the writing are confusing, and a small part of the setting is not rigorous. Many things are written directly without introduction, which may make people confused at first glance. Maybe he wants to make the text look smoother, but it still has a small impact (but it does not affect reading) Overall, as an old book, if you don't judge it from a relatively more radical perspective now, it is indeed a very good book, plus it is really ~~~~~~~~~ long! Everyone should understand the joy of being able to watch for a long time without being interrupted~ Highly recommended! But when I see the author making minor mistakes, he is a little more relaxed~

Online games, e-sports, and emotional processing are all very good. As for online games, most of the content is innovative and not cliché. The e-sports descriptions have the flavor of a full-time master. Although the emotional descriptions of Wang Mufeng are not particularly outstanding, they also embellish the article. Maybe the warlock in the first half was a little uncomfortable, but after picking up the light sword again, it felt exciting again. The only shortcoming (maybe not a shortcoming) may be that there are many full-time masters, but this is almost inevitable in online game e-sports articles nowadays. This book is definitely better than most online game articles on Tomato. I don't understand why the rating is so low. And I saw the author's love for online games and online game articles. It may be difficult to make any money from this book, but his love supports him to keep writing. I like this book very much and want to see it finished, so I wrote this paragraph to tell the author that there are always people supporting him.

The characters are vividly portrayed and the story is exciting. I highly recommend it and give it a five-star rating.

The book is very nice and the content in the game is very creative. There are 18 professions. I admire the author's imagination [laughing and crying]. There are also many funny dialogues and plots in the book. It is full of passion and humor, which makes people want to read it in one sitting. The description of the battle is hearty and hearty, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is gradually deepening (there shouldn't be any outrageous emotional entanglements in online game novels, right?). In short, the book is very good, good luck to the author!

Very nice! ! This is the first time I read this kind of online game e-sports article, and I feel that it gets better and better as you go to the end. I especially like the plot of professional competitions in the later stages. Every game is exciting, and it is not just the protagonist who is showing off. Basically, everyone in the Fuchen team has their own highlights. The single female protagonist is a plus point for me, and the emotional scenes between Zhuzi and Fengfeng are also very natural, slightly undercut but still high in sugar content. (Actually, I quite like microblading, as long as it's he [shy]) I don't know how to praise it, but I really like this book! ! (It's almost over and I can't bear to leave it [crying])

It was my first time to read an online game novel, and I was very lucky to choose this one. I started watching videos and saw the full-time master, and suddenly I wanted to read an online game novel, so I searched for it. I couldn't find anything I wanted to read for a long time, and it was so bad. I accidentally saw this book on a recommendation. The content was really slow at the beginning, but the fact that Zhu Zi might regain the light sword made me keep reading, and I got to know Feng Feng later ( Personally, I still like to read novels with female protagonists, because the simple plot advancement is too boring, and the emotional line is definitely the spice of the plot, which is indispensable! It is like the intermission after boxing, which cannot be left out. Of course, there should be no more female protagonists. It is very annoying to see one falling in love with each other! ) The first person is really weird at first, but it doesn't feel like it anymore. Then speaking of my favorite plot, it has to be Fengfeng's first appearance. I really like the subsequent seven parts of the plot, which made it easy for me to get involved. Fengfeng's distress signal to Zhuzi, Zhuzi's self-righteousness, Fengfeng's despair that Zhuzi did not invite her to form a team (under the strong methods of her mother, the only one who can rely on The person I relied on, but like my mother, made a decision for myself without permission) This feeling of despair is very real. I gave up the struggle at that moment. Now thinking about it, my chest is still tight, but the ending is good. Zhuzi took the step that many people took. At that moment, I was more anxious than Zhuzi, thinking that I must be faster, phew~ Our Brother Hui is also very awesome, hahahahaha. I don't have much else to say except for typos, which are harmless. Overall, I like it very much! Must give five stars! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ @ Gu Nai

(Spoiler alert!!!) I've almost finished reading, so I'll give you some thoughts. It's purely subjective, and there may be some places that I don't remember very clearly. Generally speaking, this book is a relatively excellent e-sports online game article. The level of some online game copies is relatively high. The author's ability to build a world view, create copies, and recycle foreshadowing is very good. Several books are quite interesting. This alone is worthy of high marks. Let's talk about the e-sports part next. There are obviously more problems in the e-sports part of this book. In the early part, the content of the protagonist's close-quarters combat warrior is too protracted and redundant. It can be understood that the author wants to express the tangled state of the protagonist who wants to escape, but is a bit unwilling to do so. However, delaying for too long to make a decision will give the impression that the protagonist is too indecisive, which will slightly discourage him from giving up. The transition from regaining the light sword to the high school competition in the mid-term is considered a relatively mediocre part. The few e-sports club members created at this stage, except for a few passers-by, are not well balanced. The arrow god and the warlock girl put a lot of ink into it, but their performance in the competition is like pure To make up the numbers, I wrote about the girl's superior observation skills but only a little bit. I wrote that the God of Arrow is from the youth training, but if I pull out the data from other youth training, I feel like I am casually scorning him. Of course, there are also quite good characters, such as the Paladin junior and the old club president, which are relatively three-dimensional. The part about returning to the professional arena in the later period is very exciting, with flesh and blood, love and tears. The biggest shortcoming of this part is that there is too little description of the role of the coach. In many games, it feels like there is no difference whether there is a coach or not. Then let's talk about the emotional part. The emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists are very delicate, and the interaction between the two people is very fresh and natural, not too greasy. Especially in the different stages from acquaintance to love, the author has a very good control over the sense of distance. However, the section where Zhuzi learns that he is not qualified to compete in the professional competition actually conflicts slightly with the previous portrayal of the protagonist. I know that the author is trying to create a plot effect, and wants to echo Zhuzi's rescue of Fengfeng from the sorrow of his original family, a two-way rescue, and also wants to reveal the cohesion of the Stars generation, but after experiencing high He regained his love for games and e-sports in the school competition. After experiencing an injury in the qualifying round, he understood the importance of teammates. After all these things, Zhuzi should have grown up. He should not and cannot completely deny himself in a moment. He may need some time to quiet down, but running away directly is no different from a few years ago. Although it seems that I have a lot of opinions, overall this plot can be considered to have flaws. Finally, let's talk about games. Some novels rely on existing games or events to build a game world. Although such a game has a strong sense of déjà vu and is relatively balanced, it is easy to see that the author pays more attention to the dramatic conflict of the novel and builds a more biased one. In the fictional game world, this will lead to several problems. One is that the competition system is too single. Although the author tries to use a variety of different maps to give everyone a sense of freshness, too many bamboo one-on-two, 2v2, and 3v3 losses and the final comeback through team battles will indeed make people feel a little boring. The second is that the author failed to control the balance of the game very well. Some skills are too powerful, naming and criticizing Mimicry (there is no CD for other skills), the Thief's stealing attribute (can be stacked infinitely), and the Blade of Destruction (high damage, but it can also suck blood), etc., And very importantly, as a large-scale game with e-sports events, the protagonist team fight After a year of competition, there is no mention of professional balance or skill balance at all. I really can't understand this. The last point is that there are too many deus ex machina on the field. It is this point that has greatly reduced the necessity of the data analyst coach in this article. As a result, it seems that most of the players win by on-the-spot tactics or explosive seeds. Although there are a lot of problems, in general, this novel is still a very good e-sports online game novel. I hope the author can write better and better in the future.

Yes, the data is quite good, and there is no random writing. It can be seen that the author is really careful, does not pile up materials, and the ideas are quite clear. It can better stimulate readers' imagination of the following content. Maybe the author's own game skills are also very good.

Apart from the Lost Leaves novel, it is one of the few e-sports novels that I have read. The characters are vivid and vivid, and the game settings are very novel and reasonable. There are no super monsters, and it is not an invincible and refreshing novel. If you just want to be simple and happy, then this book is not for you. What I like most about this book is that in today's fast-paced era, there is such a novel that can slow down. Whether it is the ups and downs of the protagonist's experience, the ups and downs of the plot, or the suspenseful and immersive description of the battlefield, this book is a masterpiece. Each of us is going through ups and downs in our own lives. We may not have the top talents of the heroes, but strong teams will also be upset. The road is fifty-fifty and the sky is four-nine. There is a glimmer of hope in desperate situations. Each of us should be a miracle and control the path of our own life.

There is no system or alien fusion. In my opinion, it can be read well in Tomato (if you like system novels and alien worlds, I didn't mention it, dog head). Although there are some boring points in the middle and late stages of the usual online game novels (skipping in the middle), the author not only writes about the big world of the game, but also writes about the duel between competitive games. I think it is quite enjoyable here. In addition, the bond between people in reality is also well written, and there is no stallion story about meeting someone and carelessly throwing themselves into their arms. There may be some minor points in the article. For example, some people may think that the reality line is unreasonable, but you have read online game articles, right? [Sneaky smile] (dog head +1) Overall, this is an online game and e-sports novel that is very enjoyable to read and handles both the game and the emotional line very well. The flaws do not hide the flaws. If you want to read online game novels and are book-hungry friends, it is worth giving it a try. Finally, brother Gu Nai, come on!

Great, I finally finished reading this book. I actually refused it at first because it was in the first person. Then I saw the ratings and comments, which made me interested in reading it. As you can see, I finished reading it. Although there were some skips in the middle, it is still a relatively in-depth book about online games and competitive games. From being banned before entering the professional arena to returning to the arena and winning the championship, this book allowed me to see the story of Gu Nai walking towards his ideal step by step. In it, there are all kinds of care and help from friends, brothers, lovers and elders. Goodbye Gu Nai, there is a long way to go, we will see you in the next story.

It's really good-looking, but it's first-person and slow-burning. I was a little uncomfortable reading it at first when I was used to the fast-paced and cool writing, but I patiently kept reading, it's really good-looking! Many scenes are also very touching. The author said that this book will have a perfect ending. I am looking forward to it. I am looking forward to the author's different online game world (like the full-time one)

After reading it, my stamina has increased. I haven't read many or few online game novels, but the only ones I've read are The Lost Leaves Tetralogy + The Master, and then this one. Overall, it feels like watching Master Avatar, but in terms of character creation, perhaps due to the author's setting, there are many characters, which makes the image not as distinct as Master Avatar, but it is still a very good online game novel. What deserves the most recognition is the author's understanding of e-sports and the description of the battle scenes, which gave me an immersive feeling. I really don't know who won the game until I read the rest of the article. It was like watching a live broadcast. Finally, I hope that the author can spare time for the second part, first complete the World Championship, and then think about Fuchen's lineup for the new season. I really hope that Ling Xiao will go to Fuchen, hahaha I would like to add that the author's emotional lines are indeed well written. Whether it is the protagonist's, the wilderness's, or the Shuanglin's, they are all very good. Hurry up and publish the second part! ! ! ! ! !

To be honest, this is the only online novel that I have read. The last one was a full-time master. As a result, I overread it yesterday. I didn't dare to go to school today and asked for leave directly. To be honest, this novel is already very well written, but it is a pity that it has always been tepid. I hope the author will continue to work hard. When the ship comes to a bridge, it will be successful. I feel that this novel can be written as a second one. Maybe I prefer this kind of subject matter.

I have been reading this book for a long time, maybe a year or two. It is a very high-quality online novel. At the beginning, I would think it was similar to The Master, but it is actually different. Too many things happened, but I think it is completely comparable to The Master. From the emotional aspect, the details of the game, the fighting and the game are all perfect. I don't know what to say. I can only say that this is an online article that I don't regret reading. It may be uncomfortable in the early stage, but it is really comfortable later on.

It's really good to read, it's rare to finish a novel, and it's very exciting and complete. The first-person narrative is also used in the impressive novels I read in the early days. I feel that it is really well written, closer and fuller, the group portraits are also very charming, and the character descriptions are also very rich. I can't help but yearn for the world in the book, that generation with shining stars, and that legendary Dust Team. I am looking forward to the World Championship. I hope the author will be inspired to write another book in the future, or add some extras [Sending my heart]

The author's writing style and plot content are really the best e-sports online game articles I have read in recent years. The battle scenes are very well described, making people immediately feel like they are picturesque. The rhythm is also very clear and will not make people feel dragged out. The interspersed emotional lines are also just right, adding a touch of warmth to the dull transitional plot. The group portrait part is also well written. Although the few members who joined later are a bit short, it still makes people feel a little unfinished. I really dreamed back to the time I read Lost Leaves and Butterfly Blue. It was full of passion. I hope to see the author's next online game e-sports article. Come on!

What I personally feel is quite good is that it is not a mindless story, nor is it the kind where the protagonist takes the whole place by himself. It relies on the cooperation of teammates and some of his own operations to make him die. It is a good combination of traditional online games and e-sports.

∑Hey, I haven't rated it yet? Then come and give it a five-star bite! I really like the story that is sometimes dull and sometimes ups and downs! The daily life is very warmly written, for example, the recreation of the paradise is a very shocking plot! I want to keep following up! The story of Little Bamboo continues! And my journey has not yet begun! (Second 2 jpg)

Boredom is unavoidable when writing in the first person. The first time I saw the first person was Ye Zi's Unparalleled in the World. The author has done a good job in arranging the plot without making it too boring. However, there are some flaws in the treatment, but they are not important and are still very interesting. Come on, author! ! !

The plot and writing are both good. It's just that I'm not used to the first person. It's not common to write in the first person nowadays.

A good book is a good book. The details are carefully drawn, and the emotions are not obtrusive. It looks very organized. But is it a bit too fast to enter the professional arena and win the championship immediately after promotion and relegation? I think it is a bit too fast to adapt quickly in the first season? I felt something was wrong and I couldn't adapt so quickly just relying on the coach's training. So I feel that the latter part is a bit unreasonable, but after all, the book has been finalized and it is not easy to change it. I just feel that the author knows too little about e-sports. If I want to write suggestions about e-sports in the future, I would like to go and watch more games. Although the game is fictional in the article, the real game is still very useful for reference.

It's very good-looking, the characters are very interesting, and I like the character's profession. The character's personality is also quite good, and the character's name is also interesting and interesting. I personally think it is very good-looking.

There are only two online games that I feel are very interesting. The first one is "Full-time Master", but this one's fighting and tactical cooperation between teams really attract me as an old game fan. The details are quite exciting. You can guess that you will definitely win, but the process of coming back from this desperate situation is really unimaginable. I can only say that it is very exciting. It is useless to say more. Take a look for yourself.

Relaxed and happy style. Reading books makes me happier. I think (just I think) if it is dropped at a critical moment, it can be a little less jokey. Currently, there is no problem in playing against ordinary players. You can take it seriously when you return to the competition later. This is relatively realistic, and the gap between the same professional players is not so big that it can be played casually. So far it looks pretty good

Nothing else. It just looks great. I started chasing it very early. It's just that the updates felt a little slow in the middle, and then I didn't watch it for about a year. I recently started watching it again. The author's writing is indeed very good, and this book really suits my taste. Will the author write new books?