My Daughter************

This book is better than those books. Those harem stories were disgusting, but this one was different. I felt happy when I read it and even wanted to go~ Very beautiful novel

The author's writing style is very good and the details are very deep. Especially the yandere feeling after redeeming the two harems directly deepens the whole character. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, this book will definitely become a god. In addition, the two harems are all lolita, which perfectly piqued my interest. It's great.

It's rare to read a Western fantasy novel. After reading it all the way, two words, comfortable! No matter the plot or the character setting, it is difficult to find thorns without deliberate effort. If you find "thorns", you can be a little patient. The author will pick the thorns for you immediately at the end of the article or in the following chapters. It is not difficult to see that the author is a perfectionist and understands the reader's mentality very well, so he will do things for himself. The published article must have been repeatedly polished by himself. Writing in this way will inevitably consume a lot of energy on his own. I hope the author can stabilize his body. Of course, it would be better if he can stabilize his creative enthusiasm. Finally, my son... No, this penguin has platinum qualifications [Like] Oh... Ahem... Well... This author is an LSP, please criticize.

How to say it? I read it from beginning to end, and I didn't feel any discomfort. On the contrary, I found it interesting. The illustrations are also very good, and the author is very diligent in updating. In short, it is worth reading. [Praise]

It's really well written. You can't lie to me if you say it's so sweet! !

First of all, the subject matter of this book is very good and very attractive. It combines various elements of online games and NPC villains. Secondly, the story advancement is also excellent, steady and steady, neither impatient nor impatient, and very comfortable. Finally, I think the most outstanding part is the design and portrayal of the characters. It's a glimpse of a leopard in one tube, and I'm very much looking forward to what's to come. Of course, update soon! Fine update! (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎

The book is very beautiful, and it is a rare book. And originally I had no interest in loli, and I even felt that liking loli was a bit perverted, but after reading the book Penguin and Salted Fish, I felt that it was not unacceptable. By the way, which chapter is the book club group in? I want to add it.

After reading The Black Dragon, it is a very good book. It feels like I read Douluo Dalu in primary school (although I am exhausted now). Although the author does not use many colors, his settings are very stable, the emotional lines are also very delicate, and the characters are also very stable. Five or six months ago, I felt that my strength was a bit broken, and now there is no book that I can continue to read. I basically put it away after reading the latest chapter, and read the new book, and then I lost interest. This one feels like I can read it until the end or it will collapse (I hope the author can have a good ending and don't write it) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

A very good Western fantasy novel. The author even drew a map by himself, and there is also fried squirrel for 500 yuan. Although it is the author's debut novel, it is not bad in all aspects, especially the extra chapter that I didn't even read before the group disbanded. It's such a pity. It is not easy for the author to face the pressure of taking the postgraduate entrance examination while facing the doubts of his family and the bad words of keyboard warriors. Of course, I also hope that this book will be updated and will not be unfinished.

It's quite good, which book is "The maid is too strong, the villain lord just takes action" [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh], this book is well written and has clear logic, except that 500 yuan is a bit expensive, everything else is good [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Yes, very pretty, and I like the yandere

The logic is quite clear, the plot is clean and unobtrusive (you can write it slower, it doesn't matter, I feel comfortable watching it anyway), the elements that should be included in Western fantasy elements are also written, and there are no major problems in the important parts. (I like it very much) The only thing that I think needs to be written in more detail is the characterization. At this point in the novel, I personally think that you, the author, are fully capable of writing it. You can make each character more distinctive (currently: some characters among players, awakened demi-humans, and humans in important positions) to make them flesh and blood. For these, you can intersperse your extra chapters into novel chapters. Extras can be mainly written about some of the players' characters or the daily stories of awakened demi-humans, and secondly about the protagonist's leaders in a certain field (military, scientific research, finance...) Or the stories about outstanding enemies. It can not only supplement the setting but also deepen the reader's impression, that is, remember to release the news in advance when you write. (Emphasis added) Finally, I think it is not easy for authors to write books. Please bear with me and do your part if you can. At least I can give you a free gift. Especially for minors under the age of 18, please think carefully before making comments. (I don't mean to insult you, I'm even talking to you as a reasonable adult) Okay, that's all. The above only represent my personal views. If you don't like it, don't criticize it, and strive to be a civilized person. [Eat melon]

It's great. Although it has shortcomings, the flaws outweigh the good points. I can give it five stars! Author click me! I'm your dog!

I unknowingly read the latest chapter. To be honest, this book is really good. The character settings, maps, and NPC pictures can be presented, which makes me feel more involved. I can also feel the author's care in character settings and stories. The war is also described very well. I can feel the cruelty of the war. It is really immersive when I read it. I really felt after the death of Duke Beifeng. The astringent part is that I really didn't expect such an operation. I drove seriously at the beginning. I really thought it was pure milk [face covering]. I feel pretty good about the relationship between NPCs and players. As an extremely realistic game, this may really happen, but I don't know how it will develop in the future. I also look forward to how the plot of the Abyss players will develop. I also like Xinghai and Big Stone Saraken. For me, who has few friends and doesn't like to communicate, I really have an indescribable feeling. In short, I hope the author will work hard! I am very optimistic about this book [Like][Like][Like]

A book that I personally feel is good. If you look slowly, you can find that many things have foreshadowing. A quick read, it's also a good read. (This should be called a cool article, hehe) In short, I think it looks good (≧∇≦)

It's beautiful, a thumbs up from this colonel.

It's deeply rooted in people's hearts. It's a lot of fun to watch, but it's a bit rare to read it in one sitting. The most important thing is that this is my first novel with picture explanations. There is a map, which makes it easier to understand what the story looks like. Moreover, it is a harem novel. I like [smile][laugh][laugh][laugh]

The fried chicken looks good (○｀ε´○), support the author, a big injustice for 500 yuan. (I heard that it is no longer the era of 500 yuan, but 3,000 yuan.) Come on, aim for five hundred.ヾ(@゜∇゜@)ノ ——————(The dividing line between emotions) I have one wish: I hope that mankind will be free from worries. " I have a sword to cut off the injustice in the world. "This sword establishes the mind for the heaven and the earth, establishes the destiny for the living people, inherits the unique knowledge for the saints, and creates peace for all generations. " "After this sword is passed, the human race will have no worries. " "I am... Human, Zhang Ziliang. " "Gentlemen..." "Listen to the dragon's roar! " I've just been stabbed. Those of you who have read this book, I'm going to stab you. I found out that both books are by the same author (I like both books very much), hahaha, come on, 3,000 yuan. (You are actually a lolicon, and so am I. You and I are stinky... We are like-minded.) (If it weren't for the fact that your name didn't have salted fish, and you didn't have the killing glyph, I would have suspected that you were a salted fish account.)

A good book is very interesting, as long as it is not targeted by the platform, this book will definitely last forever. When the simple words collide, they are like the famous autumn roller coaster, racing fast and furiously, making them very sick and coughing. Actually, I'm not a lolita fan...

This book is highly recommended. It's so sweet (it's really sweet). It's both decent and villainous (pig's trotters seem to be villains) and their IQs are all online. The context of the novel is clear, and the author has illustrated it (do all authors nowadays write like this?), Ensuring that you can read it clearly and move it quickly (the author has a side job). Now the plot is about becoming emperor, and there are basically no big problems (except for Wu Bai (the novel's plot, you will know it after reading it) doge) I hope that the author can continue to work hard. Apart from other things, because of the high output and the writing (I have a sworn relationship with gambling and drug addiction (explicitly stated)), I cannot give this book a five-star rating. Note: The above only represents my personal views, please don't criticize me if you don't like it, thank you for your cooperation (learn from the author and use a shield)

It is indeed written very often, especially about war and people's hearts, but one thing is that there are too many people in the harem, which makes me, a pure lover, very uncomfortable to read. Doesn't pure love smell good? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] At first, I thought it was a pure love book [I'm almost crying] (but the harem is also very satisfying to read [smile])

This book is quite good. The writing is good, the plot is smooth, the main plot is clear, and the characters are reasonable. The male protagonist is a harem but not a stallion. The success made me understand the fact that what I hate is not the harem but the stallion. It seems that the author will choose the friends who support him in the comment section to play the roles in the book. The author worked very hard and even did the illustrations himself. All in all, I still recommend everyone to watch it.

How can I put it this way? I feel very good about myself. I can drive sometimes, but I have a good grasp of the scale and hand-drawn maps myself. The content and combat power are not bad at the moment. The plot is also good. I suggest you give it a look.

I give it five stars. It's well written. It's the first time I've seen a novel on Tomato that can draw a map and a picture of the protagonist. It's very professional. Keep up the good work. I hope that there will be more and more novels with detailed settings like this, and the authors will read hard!

This book blends battle with daily life, and has some funny passages that you will never tire of reading. Witnessing the protagonist's step-by-step growth always gives people an inexplicable sense of accomplishment! All in all, it's a very good book.

This book is very good! No matter what the protagonist or the supporting character does, it is not poisonous to me. This book is no longer a novel to me. I really like this book. Before it was finished, I read it for the second time. I witnessed the birth of a king. I just wanted to shout, "Long live King Winter, and witness the immortal empire!" Winter is coming, and whatever the sword points at is my target! The empire is about to rise, and my desire is to serve him! My belief is that the King of Winter is the top of the Kingdom of God! Separated from each other in this world, Xiwei Golden Lion, I am willing to serve him! This is a book that I like very much. I will definitely read it several times in the future.

After reading enough of those time-travel novels, I changed my taste and suddenly felt that this novel is so amazing. From three perspectives, I like the character of the male protagonist very much. He is not indecisive and has personality, and he does not procrastinate his mother-in-law. From this point on, he has crushed many novels, and in the novel The villain is also very lovable. It is not too disgusting but makes you feel extremely comfortable. In addition, the novel has a strong story line and a compact overall structure. The plot is not procrastinating and has no hydrology. It is great. I like this novel very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on!

This is a book that I have had on my bookshelf for a long time. I must have had some thoughts when I first read it. However, in the whole book, what impressed me most was the spirit of each character facing the past. It feels a bit like reading, but... Really, this is the second completed book I have read this weekend. I am yearning for the world in the book and want to be a part of the story. I am still a little disappointed, but move on, boy (this is for myself, please leave it if you don't like it)

When I first came into contact with it, I was put off by the title of the book, thinking it was a stallion novel or a mindless novel. But seeing is not necessarily believing. This sentence is a good proof. The cold but benevolent Xiwei, the redeemed Loli, or the 17,000-year-old Roy, the delicate emotions, novel routines, hypocritical protagonists and magnanimous villains, this is also a very attractive place, with the color of online games, the joy brought by the fourth natural disaster, or the meaning of the player's name. The more important point is that the author is willing to put effort into the work, illustrating pictures, drawing maps, emphasizing the level range many times, adding readers' suggestions, etc., Or the fried squirrel tail bought for 500 yuan. Although it is really unfair, his love for the work really makes me admire him. It is really an excellent Western novel.

This book is very well written. Pay attention to the foreshadowing and the logic will make sense. There is no reason to give up the book because it seems that you can't bear it. When reading a book, you will always encounter some settings that make you uncomfortable. But as long as the problem is not serious, don't be so malicious and speculate whether the author is intentional or not. Don't blindly follow the trend and criticize. The author took the time to write the book. It's not long, and there will always be some unfamiliarity, but others have written it carefully, except for those who are not careful. You can criticize those who are not careful. Think about it if it is a book that you wrote carefully, but because it is unfamiliar and has not made the transition, it is criticized by readers and scolded by readers. You must feel uncomfortable and sad. How many people can survive and continue writing? Even if you survive it, you will definitely not have much enthusiasm for becoming an author and writing, and you will definitely not be careful about the rendering and perfection of characters. Think about it, do you like to do things that make you happy or do you like to do things that make you sad? You must have a certain amount of determination when reading a book. If you are infected by some readers' comments that make you feel bad, don't read the comments. Use your own mind to read novels and put yourself in a happy and pleasant state. This is the fundamental purpose of reading novels. Instead of being led astray by other people's thoughts and letting a book that you loved before become dusty. Summary: I like this book very much, please continue to develop it. In addition, I wish the author smooth sailing in his studies and a bright future.