The Journey of Collapse

Very powerful! Really awesome! This Yu carries a strong sense of despair anytime and anywhere, but it does not affect the development of the surrounding plot; The setting is also very rigorous, and excellent original settings have been made to fill in the poisonous points and loopholes, making the plot and settings more coherent and smooth. The small theater of various memories and Yu's words and some actions can reveal little details and plots about the previous civilization. By collecting these fragments, one can imagine the various events of Yu's previous civilization. The only thing I feel a little uncomfortable about is... I feel that the language used to describe the relationship linking process between the characters is a bit sloppy, but it is not unreasonable. I can read it and understand it. It is just to express the problem... In short, this is the respect that the younger generations of Bengsan fans look up to to the big brother seniors!

The plot is the best and overall is the best. Although it is not my favorite genre (there are heroines, Tiantian's daily life and Shura Field), there is nothing to say about its excellence. It is better than anything else I have seen. I like it!

This is probably one of the best Honkai Impact books I've read. The ending of the sword has also changed, but even if the protagonist dies, it doesn't matter, right? The protagonist is the protagonist after all, and if he dies, he is just "dead", so I suggest that we increase our efforts [laughter]

It's so sweet! Author: This is how I write the candy I am looking for. Can you take a look? The hope that was just gained and then lost again A painful misunderstanding that could not be solved until death The guilt of having no one to apologize to Just a little bit away from being missed forever A sincere confession that has always been regarded as a lie A self-sacrifice unknown to all A major contribution that is not worth mentioning in the eyes of the other party The truth is useless even if you say it No matter what you choose, it's a devil's choice. It took me a long time to realize what I had really lost. Those who always remember have long forgotten themselves A false friendship whose original intention is to deceive When there seems to be hope, there is no hope anymore The wishes that I cared about at first no longer mattered when they were fulfilled. I am not special in the eyes of the people I care about Only one person remembers the agreement between the two The oath shared by two people can only be kept by one person A bad situation that can be saved in just one step Full of resentment and grievance but unable to find anyone to take responsibility for A confused exchange without understanding the true value The two people drifted apart helplessly Willing to deceive oneself rather than face the truth The fleeting peak of life Extreme loneliness in the bustle Relief expressed because there are no more expectations Having no other choice but to accept the result Efforts that are unrecognized no matter what. Neither of them waited for the other's apology in the end. Only when I reached the end did I realize that I had chosen the wrong path from the beginning. After seeing the light, you have to continue to endure the darkness The fragile balance that sustains friendship is damaged beyond repair. Kindness that is not appreciated but misunderstood and disliked They both want each other's best interests but don't know what the other person really wants. Your own pain is just a funny joke in the eyes of the other person I found that no one was really on my side Well-intentioned deception causing more serious consequences The foundation for love never existed in the first place The basis for resentment didn't exist in the first place. Never really owned something that would be painful to lose

To be objective. The quality of this book. They are among the best among Honkai fanfics. The good thing about this book is that it has the tone of MiHoYo. This is for a new author. If I am able to write like this, if I don't have a certain talent, it is because I have done a lot of articles while writing. I can't comment on how good the writing is, but it made me feel very comfortable reading it. Although the main plot sometimes alternates with the side stories, it's not messy. This is one of the reasons why I kept reading. This is particularly rare for a student, but it is precisely because I am a liberal arts student. Only in this way can I write about that feeling, because it is easier to understand the emotion in Honkai Impact III and it is easier to write about that pure emotion. But subjectively speaking, I don't like this story very much, because it's too harsh. But let me look for a better one than this one, and I can't find it.

I have read many Honkai Impact fanfics, and in my opinion, this is the only one that can be regarded as a masterpiece. As an old captain and a bookworm of ten years, a fanfic series is considered a good book as long as the character setting is not brainless and the character setting is not too serious. However, this book is considered to be the best in terms of the character's personality or the portrayal of the protagonist, and the writing is also great. Also, you can't imagine the ending of most novels when reading them. After all, not seeing the ending is what attracts readers to keep reading. But this book is different. You can imagine what the ending will be like from the beginning, but you will still be curious about the process, and you will still be attracted to keep reading. All in all, the five stars are well deserved [Code]

It's really sweet. It doesn't have any flaws at all. It's a rare good work in the midst of collapse. It saves people who should have died, like Wendy. The plot is very sweet. I highly recommend it!

Come on, I am very optimistic about this book. There are really not many Bengsan novels that are good to read. I hope you can persevere and just follow your own pace. Also, I hope you won't get any more endings, because Miha Youdao made me crazy. . .

There's not much to say, but to sum up: the characters are profound, the writing is great, and it's a story about a powerless and lonely man creating a flawless world for them. It is said to be flawless, but after all, it is missing the most important touch. There is no ultimate beauty, he can only try his best to get closer to perfection. After all, it's just forgetfulness. When you wake up from the dream, it becomes forgetfulness.

It's very interesting. The protagonist in Paradise is very heroic. I see that there is no broken content in the whole book. The only flaw is... The update is too slow! ! ?

Tell the truth. I think this is the best Honkai Impact fanfic I've ever seen. The protagonist's plot doesn't take up too much. Unlike other fanfics, the protagonist is a mindless fan. I think the relationship between the characters is handled better. There is sadness and joy. A new book is out today, Kou Ya! !

Woo hoo, crying, Ellie is very good and worth it, Sad Frog must have a good ending woo woo, although I gave you five stars, but I don't like the knife woo woo [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's good to read. I've been reading this book a long time ago. Well, I forget when… but it's really good to read. Because I have been chasing books for a long time, I have forgotten many of the previous plots [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. For example, Su Yu's old dean and Su Yu would have really forgotten it if the author hadn't mentioned it recently, hahaha. In short, I hope the author is in good spirits when he finishes it. Well, I hope it has a good ending. Honkai Impact San is probably on a downhill slope now. I hope Mi Huyou can turn around and make Honkai Impact III's story truly the most perfect story in the minds of the captains! So damn good looking.

The plot is clear and the knives are quite delicious. The protagonist is a happy person in the later stage. As long as the protagonist does not collapse later, I would like to call this book the strongest. Author, I recognize your will [smile]

Great book! Absolutely great book! I really like the author's style, the plot is great! ....... First of all, I would like to thank the author for his great work here, so that I have the honor to see this masterpiece. Secondly, I want to thank my own hands. Thanks to them, I was able to read this book as soon as I saw it. Finally, thank you for your unswerving devotion to Honkai~~~ ... I have a hunch that once this book has more chapters, it will definitely become a masterpiece! ! ! I will always like Alicia~~~

Come on, author, this can be said to be the best book I have ever read. I have read more than 40 chapters for so long. I can't imagine it, but author, you actually took the lead in spoiling it [face covering] [face covering]

Sweet, so sweet, so sweet that I cried::>_<:: I read this book at the beginning. I originally wanted to read it, but I didn't expect to read it again after a few years. I thought about crying secretly in the quilt when I saw the knife, and it was over in the blink of an eye. It felt a bit like things have changed.

Come on, it's really good. The novel is generally smooth, the small theater is also interesting, not brainless, logical thinking is coherent, the characters are well created, and the emotional lines are well described. The five-star praise author deserves it

He allowed us to see that from a person who wanted to change the tragedy at the beginning, he later found out that nothing had changed, and began to give up on himself, become disappointed, and even commit suicide. Although he said he was unsuccessful, he never felt the meaning, and then finally determined the meaning. In order to sacrifice myself in exchange for companions (if possible, even if it is me, I hope to exchange my ordinary life for the flawless person Alicia). There is no systematic random killing, and some are just for resurrection. On the way to the goal, try to do good deeds, rather than using any means, try your best to change (damn, my eyes are really wet, reading this novel. I haven't finished it yet) but it is super good-looking and has a sense of substitution. Highly recommended [Love] [Crying] The plot of Beng San in the novel is over, and I have finished reading it. At the end, I left a few sentences Alicia, you no longer need me to take you to see this beautiful world. See it with your own beautiful eyes. Alicia, this time I am not waiting alone for 50,000 years. Now it is your turn. Just think of it as your punishment for lying to me 50,000 years ago. The price is just my disappearance. Goodbye, Alicia.

The storyline in it is very exciting. I really thought that the author who had this person in the original plot is a man from the love gate. I didn't do much about the plot in Paradise, and I was completely attracted by the author's Alicia without knowing much about the plot. The shortcoming of this book is that the author's updates are very slow and irregular, but the plot he wrote is of unexpectedly high quality [Like]

Five stars for this, I look forward to the return of the heroes. Come on, the author.

It's very beautiful, and the characters are well highlighted. They are flesh-and-blood and emotional people. The character of the protagonist has also been established, and the characters of other characters have not collapsed. Objectively speaking, the writing is very good. I estimate that it will get a rating of 9.3 To 9.6 In the end. But there is one big drawback - go faster! ! ! From the time I discovered this book to the time I finished it, it was just the time from breakfast to dinner, which is so little.

The writing is very good, and I hope the ending is perfect. To be honest, after watching Graduation Travel, I also had the idea of ​​writing a book. I want to write about the ideal world in my imagination, where no one sacrifices and everyone lives together. It's a pity that my writing skills are not good and I don't dare to start. I'm afraid that I will ruin my ideal story, so I can only temper myself and wait for my good news [note]

As a newbie who has only been in the game for two weeks, I was stunned for a while while reading the plot. However, through various fan stories, I finally understood it a little bit. At the same time, I have to say that the quality of this fan article is really high. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will not say it again and read it again.

Ahhhh, don't stop updating. It's rare to see a novel that can arouse emotional resonance. It would be great if the author could portray the characters in more detail.

This book fits my fantasies and thoughts about Honkai Impact fan fiction. The characters in this book are very vivid, and it gave me the feeling that they were doing what the characters in the game can say and do. The author, the Riddler, also laid some foreshadowing, making the whole book look more rigorous and real. In fact, I think works without knives lack soul (MiHoYo changed me). This book can lay down the foreshadowing very well, depict everything about the characters, and does not change the plot and image at will. So far, I personally feel that the plot is quite sweet, and I am very much looking forward to the follow-up plot. (This is indeed the best Honkai Impact fan fiction I have come across so far.)

The writing is first-rate, the plot is well written and the characters are well described, making it very engaging. I personally think it is the pinnacle of Honkai fandom. For one of its shortcomings, it has slow updates and few updates, but it is of excellent quality. I guarantee on my behalf that this is a very good Honkai fanfic.

Such is the origin, such is the end Alicia is a very successful character. She is kind, true, pure, and flawless. She is a collection of countless excellent qualities. It can be said that this kind of person almost does not exist in reality, but Beng San wrote her and her story into a work of art. Art comes from life but is higher than life, and reposes people's yearning for beautiful things. " "We who stay here are just a shadow of the past. We can only stay here, unable to touch your reality, and unable to accompany you to the future. When you leave here and return to normal real life, you also know very well that everything that happens here is just a story, a virtual story. It may not take long before you will forget these things, forget these words, forget... Our existence. Be proud of all that is unreal, Because we are higher than this world! " Love the door! Goodbye, Yu.

"Let the songs that no one has delivered begin to sing again. Write a new chapter for the story that has been forgotten by history. A noble and pure soul embarks on a journey. May the journey to another world be blessed with love and blessing, and may the guardianship of [Fantasy] be given to him. May the plundering beasts love you and protect you, and grant you the freedom of [empty dreams]. May the feathers of Duchen love protect his body and grant him the perseverance of "Fu Sheng". May the scroll of the painting of the world bless him with love and grant him the innocence of [stars]. May the world-devouring snake love bless his body and grant him [infinite] desires. May the Whistle of Dawn love him and grant him the will of [Rising Light]. May the Inch-Breaking Blade love you and bless you, and grant you the decisiveness of [moment]. May the love of the good Dharma bless his body and grant him the wisdom of "God's Wisdom". May the love of evil calamity bless his body and grant him the sincerity of [violent destruction]. May the Box of Foolish Plays love you and grant you the miracle of [Spiral]. May the song of brilliance bless his body and grant him the brilliance of [gold]. May the love of the deep sin bless his body and grant him the kindness of [the precepts]. May the Emberless Sword love him and grant him the ideal of [salvation]. ………"

To be honest, when I first read a few chapters, I didn't want to read it because I read too much Honkai Impact and I was a little tired. But after quitting and restarting this book several times, I felt that it became more and more interesting the more I read it, especially the extras, because I still felt a little bit stuck in the same plot. After watching it for a while, I could change my taste and understand the protagonist's personality in a short period of time. To be honest, in terms of character design, I think the author is really good at writing (although I am not deeply involved in this aspect), so let's just continue reading ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ