People Are Pirates, but They Are Still in the Straw Hats

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After reading The War on the Top, tell me your thoughts. Pirates fans have watched one after another, and few have survived until this point. The reason is that factors such as Ace's regret, the end of his father, the balance of power, etc. Are really difficult to control, and the author has done a very good job. This alone deserves a five-star rating. What's even more rare is that the author's writing style is really good, the integration of the characters does not seem abrupt, and the characters basically retain their own personality traits. Everyone knows that there are problems with Tomato's ratings. Readers on the free platform generally have a low level of education and like to read cool articles. If you don't start invincibly, many people will not be happy. If you are not happy, they will give you bad reviews. So I hope the author will continue writing and don't care about the rating. Support you! Also: The author really responds to every comment!

The author writes very well, come on^0^~ Just write it according to the author's imagination. We are all looking forward to seeing the author's Straw Hats become more interesting with the addition of the protagonist. 😉 The other one is those who say it's the same as watching the original work again. #If it's not close to the original work, can it still be called a fan?#

Well, how can I put it this way? It's very stable and not as broken as other books. At least I think it's pretty good-looking. There are many stories about protagonists with explosive combat power in One Piece, but there are very few about daily life. I hope the author can write more daily and funny plots. Come on, hurry up! ! !

The book you wrote is truly as beautiful as the golden ratio of Venus, a miracle. I can't wait to cry and scream. I will rush out from under the Five Elements Mountain, run all over the Five Mountains, climb Mount Everest, run and cry, and kneel in a spiral. I will cry for your beauty until my soul is shaken out of my body, my internal organs tremble, and my tears form the Yangtze River, the Yellow River, and the Pacific Ocean, which nourishes the whole of China! ! ! Without the book, do you think I would still care? I have practiced swordplay in Kunlun Mountain for six years, and my heart has long been as cold as the snow in Kunlun Mountain. But when I opened your book, tears instantly flowed down like a Huangguoshu waterfall, across my face, wet my slippers, and my feet became sore. I just want to say update soon, my treasure! ! !

Come on, the author's writing is very good, and the setting of the protagonist is very suitable for me. More people will definitely read it. I just hope that people will not go crazy like some authors, who will let themselves go when there are more people [blowing kiss]

Really like this book! ! ! Due to some reasons, I didn't finish reading One Piece, and now I don't want to read it anymore. I just opened this book to see if this fanfic would change some of the plot. In the middle, I wanted to use this book to recall the plot. After reading too much, it was completely I like this book, I like the interaction between Em and his friends, and I like to reminisce about this drama... In short, I like this book very much, and I probably won't follow other fanfics in the short time. Well... I can express my other feelings with five stars.

It's good to read. I personally think this is one of the better books about pirates. The characters are not too bad. Some places are funny and some are particularly irritating. This book is still recommended. (This is definitely the longest book review I've ever written)

It's really good! It would be great to be able to write an original plot with Fuanliu, especially if it doesn't change the character of the original character! The foreshadowing of the protagonist is about to be revealed! Looking forward to the author's Wano chapter! I hope a lot of writing can be devoted to the original characters and the main cast. In the end, it looks really good! Write, write, write! I must see the most exciting Wano Country chapter! Rush forward! Emmmm, what can I say? From the current writing, I feel like writing this Wano Country chapter... I'm a bit sorry for the foreshadowing, it still feels a bit off.

I skipped the first few chapters and read a lot of One Piece books. Among the books I read, the one about following the protagonist group is the best. I think this book has at least an 8.5 Rating and is highly recommended for people who like this aspect. (Close book reviews for better consumption)

This book is really good. I think it is almost my favorite among the pirate fanfics I have read. Besides, with such an active little Fengfeng, how could I not push for more chapters? Anyway, I will stay with you until the end, hehe (ง ื▿ ื)วIf you are moved, please add one more update for me (smiling evilly) (What I am saying is that I think no one will say that I am ignorant or ignorant for no reason, right? If you say it, then I am right☜(ˆ▽ˆ))

So why does this book have such a low rating? If it hadn't been for a shortage of books, I spent an hour looking for the pirate article in the square and I really couldn't find it [face covering] [face covering] (Also update it quickly, I'll finish it in a while) The rating has gone up a bit, author! ! ! (But I saw very few of them until the end)

The author is really cute [sending my heart] Don't worry about those who say it's not good for no reason, just absorb those meaningful comments and improve it. The writing is pretty good and you can read it. The inner monologue of the protagonist is quite cute! It is a rare pirate novel that starts with a low-level combat power. It can be read as a development novel (the reader develops the protagonist step by step [laughs crookedly]). It's really good.

A must-read for Haimi. It's still good after the early and middle stages. Maybe it's due to various reasons such as the recent book shortage. Anyway, this book is quite suitable for my taste. The author is super active. He replies directly to Tomato every day without missing any book reviews or paragraphs [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It is indeed a good fanfic. Other people's boarding flow is all about this system and that system. It's a bit tiring to read. This one doesn't have daily battles and there are a lot of them. It's a good fanfic (but the author is a little slow in updating [please update])

This book is quite interesting, I think it is good. Although it has elements of passion, it is not passionate enough. I always feel like it has stopped when I read it. It is recommended that the author polish the passionate scenes, which will leave a deep impression on the readers. Of course, the daily part is written very relaxedly, I think it is very good here. Why do the protagonists always have to dress up as women and have a female body? I can't accept it. Other than that, the settings are all fine. Overall, this book is a fun and relaxing book. PS: It felt like there was a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, which made me very interesting when I watched it. But why did the author answer these questions in the comment area himself?

After reading Chapter 259, let me tell you my feelings. The author did not dare to make major changes to the magic (even though Ace survived the war) , maybe because they are afraid of writing it down, just like Moria's Invisibility Fruit. If you don't kill him, he will fall into the hands of the Blackbeards sooner or later. It is better to kill him there, and then the fruit is reborn in the ship. Even if it is not given to Sanji, it can be sold to other people or kept in the ship for follow-up. Secondly, the main reason for giving four stars is that the author is a pure TM Riddler, writing little by little about the protagonist's life [angry][angry][angry] Yes. . . . Let's just say that the protagonist's life experience is more awesome than Luffy's. It's awesome. The issue of combat power is not bad. But now you have to arrange an opponent for Luffy, which makes Blackbeard awesome. Thunder Fruit, Shadow Fruit, Power Fruit. Are you going to write some more phantom beasts for Blackbeard in the future? But you wrote the awakening of the fruit too simply. However, I am very satisfied with the plot of Wano Country. In fact, I was thinking about it. I feel good about arranging a fantasy beast type or natural type for Sanji or Nami. After all, your world is yours. If you write it boldly, I don't think there is any problem. Nami and Usopp are still a bit weak.

The author replied to me, let's discuss whether you can intersperse a fan theater version in it. It mainly talks about the Red Earl in the form of Bat Fruit, Phantom Beast Species, and Vampire. He once defeated the Four Emperors by one person and defeated Kaido with one hand. Is it ok I already thought of the name "One Piece: Bloody Terror"

It's well written, but I wish there were more details. The pace feels too fast. I want to see the protagonist use stripes and He Dao, and see the world through, and add some serious fighting.

Whitebeard sat in the middle of the deck, his eyes closed tightly, and the blood on his body had been cleaned away. He still kept the smile he had when he died. He just sat there quietly, as if he was just taking a nap, and you would hear his cheerful and cheerful laughter again at any time.

So far, it's great to see Em resolve her knot. The plot is very good, but the writing in the early stage is average and there are a little too many ellipses. I even removed it from the bookshelf twice because of this, but it got much better later on. In this article, the Straw Hats lost some of their naivety and became much more decisive in their killings. I quite like them personally, and their character design didn't collapse much. With Em's help, they also made up for a lot of regrets. The protagonist also has some flaws, but most of them are achieved through his own efforts, which is very good. Although this book has been completed, I am looking forward to a sequel about Em and Xiaomai reaching the present day. I wonder if there will be one. I remember Em said he wanted to take Mai to have a look.

That's great. If you don't criticize your official position and it's not vulgar, I'll give you five stars! One Piece fans are basically adventurous, and they are all fans that match the original characters. Come on, I like it!

The self-pleasure of a middle-grade author. The carnival of a group of second grade readers. Poetry and distance will never end.

It's okay. As a time traveler, I don't have to talk too much. This pig's trotter can also have its own style and scenes. It's not like other novels that reveal the superiority of a time traveler in advance.

It is a very good Kagofunaga novel. The characters are full-bodied and their personalities are very consistent with the original work. The plot did not change much two years ago, but it is really exciting two years later, especially Wano Country. The author incorporated a lot of his own ideas, but it is not abrupt at all. The foreshadowing made the development of the entire plot become a matter of course. Also, the protagonist created by the author is a very novel angle. Most of the fans in Tomato are like being on a collision course. They are either someone's brother or sister or someone's daughter. This book is easier for me to accept. The protagonist has his own plot line and does not rob other characters of their highlight moments. I really think this book is well written. No matter what, the score should be raised to 9 points! Come on, the author is looking forward to your new book.

Shuhuang is here to read it again. I don't know what other people think, but I like One Piece, I just like the Straw Hats and their emotions. I love reading Funaguru and especially like this novel. The setting of Wano is a hundred times better than the anime. This is understandable to Chinese people. Except for Ace tricking me into tears, I have no feelings about Wano in the anime. I somehow don't understand the feelings of my childhood when I read it. For the sake of the high score given by Wano Country, I feel a little rushed later on, which is understandable. After all, it is a serialized anime, and the rest depends entirely on the author's own imagination. However, I have already become a Buddha. So many fans have stopped updating, and in the end, it is a good author. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's rare to see such an active author [exploration] five-star support [laughing]

One day, she went out to play with King Zhou. On a cobblestone path, Daji accidentally fell on a stone and had a miscarriage. King Zhou was shocked and said: "Ji, your fetus is dead! Ji, your fetus is dead because of the stone!" The minister on the side also exclaimed: "Oh, sad! Sad! Ai Kun: Wow! It's my little black boy!

After reading the book reviews, I specifically read the part about the war on the top [Eating Melon]. Although there are a lot of secrets, it is still pretty good. It has a good ending. Five-star praise. Hehehe [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The author's writing style is very good, and the descriptions of emotions and combat are very detailed.