Dream Control: I Cut the Master of Cultivating Immortals Like a Leek

Not bad, not bad. Follow the current pace, don't be too hasty or too slow, and don't add any boring emotional scenes. People who like to watch behind-the-scenes scenes basically don't like to watch love affairs. Don't have too many plots in reality. Just write about the protagonist's realm from time to time. Let's focus more on dream construction and group portraits. Let me change it. After the monk who took away the body discovered the secret of the protagonist, the plot suddenly became very bad. Although the protagonist controlled the other party and turned the other party into his own clone, he was very unhappy. The feeling of the behind-the-scenes leaks being exposed made me feel like a lump in my throat.

Super exciting, very good-looking. I just hope I won't be a eunuch. There is a bookcase next door that has not been updated for more than a month. As a result, the heat dropped layer by layer. Basically no one watches it now. So I hope you continue to update.

This novel is very good, the content is very novel, I hope it doesn't require eunuchs [please update]

[Blow kiss][Hold face][Hold face] Love, love! So damn pretty!

I also read it. It's exciting and creative. It has elements of the book world and the game world. My favorite is the element of dreams. It's a pity that there are too few books about dreams. The dream elements of this book feel that it is in the direction of creation flow.

Must give five stars. (I personally rarely write book reviews) There are no major flaws. The book is also very interesting and the subject matter is particularly novel. However, the pace is a bit fast and not suitable for older readers⊙ω⊙⊙ω⊙⊙ω⊙⊙ω⊙ ┐（─__─）┌[Top post][Top post][Top post] Come on author! Just don't mess up. Why can't the rating go up?

The subject matter is novel and opens up a new genre. The author's writing style is also very good. I hope the author can keep updating it.

I saw the latest one and it's great! It suits my taste very well! Just a very ordinary cool article. Less poisonous It's the main god, behind the scenes. A type that combines online game streaming in a fantasy world. It's not bad. I see it very well👌🏻! Everyone has their own favorite type. I highly recommend it! I have finally read a novel for a few hours!

I followed nearly a hundred chapters in one day, and I felt it was okay, but a question suddenly occurred to me. Why are there no female monks in these sects? [Laughing and crying] Except for Tu Ling'er at the beginning, there has never been a female character like... [Look carefully] The plot after a hundred chapters is a bit confusing, a bit too routine, and not that exciting.

It's beautiful [smile] I like this book, don't be a eunuch [sending my heart] Author (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on [please update]

The story is really well written, and the plot is not watery. It ends as it should. The logic is very strong and there are no bugs. It feels better than the new book (the latter part of the new book is a bit watery). The portrayal of the protagonist is not vivid enough, and the emotional line is lacking. If it is too long, it will easily make people tired, but overall it is still good.

After reading half of it, I feel like I watched Yilin and The Reader between classes in high school. There are very few interesting ones, and most of them are very bland. The advantage is that there are no interesting points, and it is fresh. I can read it, but the latter part is too samey and a bit boring. Plus, I stopped in the middle and have no interest in coming back to read it. I can finish it if I keep reading it, which is okay.

Very good, the details of the plot are very well written [please update]

So beautiful, so great! Looking forward to the update every day! Watching it every moment! (Held by the author with a knife) ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢟⣡⣴⣶⣶⣦⣌⡛⠟⣋⣩⣬⣭⣭⡛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠋⢰⣿⣿⠿⣛⣛⣙⣛⠻⢆⢻⣿⠿⠿⠿⣿⡄⠻⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⠃⢠⣿⣿⣶⣿⣿⡿⠿⢟⣛⣒⠐⠲⣶⡶⠿⠶⠶⠦⠄⠙⢿ ⣿⠋⣠⠄⣿⣿⣿⠟⡛⢅⣠⡵⡐⠲⣶⣶⣥⡠⣤⣵⠆⠄⠰⣦⣤⡀ ⠇⣰⣿⣼⣿⣿⣧⣤⡸⢿⣿⡀⠂⠁⣸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣇⠄⠈⢀⣿⣿⠿ ⣰⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣤⣈⣙⠶⢾⠭⢉⣁⣴⢯⣭⣵⣶⠾⠓⢀⣴ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣉⣤⣴⣾⣿⣿⣦⣄⣤⣤⣄⠄⢿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣇⠈⢿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟⣰⣞⣛⡒⢒⠤⠦⢬⣉⣉⣉⣉⣉⣉⣉⡥⠴⠂ ⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣏⠻⢌⣉⣉⣩⣉⡛⣛⠒⠶⠶⠶⠶⠶⠶⠶⠶⠂⣸⣿ ⣥⣈⠙⡻⠿⠿⣷⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⠿⠛⢉⣠

The writing in the early stage was a little bit vicious, but the later part is still quite interesting. The ending is too rushed. It would be better if the protagonist's character as a dream leader could be improved a bit. For example, the side description states that the protagonist can create a large universe in his dream while sleeping and then materialize it when he wakes up. There is no need to pull the real world into the dream like before.

This book is okay. Bookworms who are bookworms can read it. The plot in the early and middle stages of this book does not have many poisonous points, and the basic logic is also there. It is more group portrait, maybe 60% are group portrait shots, and 40% are protagonist shots. The author's proportion in the later period is not enough and cannot be controlled. The plot in the later period advances and ends relatively early, but the ending is still reasonable.

Read the whole book in one go, so cool! The early and middle stages look great! I like this kind of novel where the protagonist develops slowly. The author has a lot of imagination and is very interesting to watch. The only shortcoming is probably that the post-production process is too rushed. Many things that could be written in detail are summarized quickly, which makes me a little regretful. No matter what, this is a good book, I personally like it very much, so five stars are given not only to the book, but also to the author! Come on! Let's read the author's next book [laughs][laughs]

The novel is still very good. When I read this novel, I thought it was a creation novel about creating a dream world and then making it bigger and stronger step by step. However, it turned out to be the early stage of the creation story, the middle stage of the behind-the-scenes flow, and the ending of the domination flow! ! 🤔🤔 Although I came here mainly for creation and making it bigger and stronger, I was a little disappointed when I later found out that it was not entirely a creation story, but I still like your book very much! ! Moreover, some of the themes are so innovative that if you take them out alone, you can publish a new book! 🌷It's very nice Five-star praise! !

The world view is so grand. It is a good novel. It is a novel without a female protagonist. It is highly recommended. The first and middle stages are group portrait novels, and the later period focuses on self-development. It is extremely exciting [like][like][like][like][like]

A cool business novel, the protagonist Goldfinger is in a dream space; The novel felt average at the beginning, and it was just the opening of the dream system that made people shine. But starting in the middle and late stages of writing, the author's imagination is very open, integrating elements such as the dream world, dream creations, dream wars, cross-border wars outside the dream world, etc. Cultivation of immortality is all based on imagination, which is really good!

It's really okay for new authors, at least they don't have a huge worldview right from the beginning, and it's easy for them to collapse due to their writing skills. So far, the writing is okay, the plot is relatively rigorous, and there are no pitfalls. The characters are very good and have outstanding characteristics. However, because the plot is relatively fast, the characters are not so delicate. Overall, it's pretty good. Well, I'll do my best in the future.

I really like this type of book, but this one was quite tiring to read at times. Some places were not explained clearly. People just appeared in one place for no reason, and I didn't know how they got out. I even looked back deliberately, but I didn't see it. I'm so confused right now. Can real creatures exist after the continent in the void is assimilated? Whether the dream creature enters the assimilated world is a real body or a dream body. Many of them are not explained clearly. I'm dumbfounded. ,,

A good book, good luck to the author

Not bad, very exciting! Come on!

Finally found another masterpiece.

It's good to watch. I hope others can also have the opportunity to become immortals. It's exciting not to have the protagonist's family be the only one in the family.

It's pretty good. The subject of dreams is still quite rare in Tomato fantasy books. This book is quite novel. It feels a bit like the battle for planes in The Witcher. It also introduces characters from the mythological system to enrich the plot. Overall, it's good.

The writing is good, the plot is good, and the content is novel. I hope to write more than 1,000 chapters. Please keep up the good work, the author.

This book is not bad, but the behind-the-scenes scenes are all behind the scenes. I personally don't like some real-life experiences in the middle, but it doesn't hurt if there are occasional flaws. The author is great, keep up the good work [Like][Like]

Very good. The author can write more detailed and in-depth, so that the plot will be fuller. Overall, this book seems to have only a skeleton and no flesh and blood, but the plot is very 6. Very novel... It has a score of 9.3