Quick Travel: the Yandere Villain Is Targeting Me Again

A bit sparse, but nice to look at. The subject matter is somewhat novel, but there are a lot of bad sentences, which will be perfect if I revise them later.

I stopped updating because something happened yesterday. I will update every day from today on.

It looks good and the content is good, but the words are always wrongly written, making it easy to get into trouble, and there are also issues with punctuation. My words may be a bit harsh, so I would like to apologize in advance. Good cheers, author! [Love]

It's still pretty good looking, but there are no punctuation marks and it's hard to tell.

Very nice, I recommend it.

It's okay, I quite like reading this type of book (give you a like 👍)

It's very interesting. I like this book very much, especially the first one about the ancient world.

If you correct the bad aspects of this book, I will give you five stars. For example: symbols, there are still some places that are not clear. You also said that you forgot to add one a few years ago, but you did not change it. I think it's better to take this book seriously and revise it. Don't read the comments all the time. As long as you can write a good book, don't ask for anything else. I didn't watch it for long, so don't blame me if you're wrong.

It's really pretty, but the gender is always wrong and the punctuation is not quite right. It would be better if I corrected it (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ

The content of the article has also been improved. Overall it is very good, but sometimes it is unclear.

The ending of each world makes me cry to death But... There will be a new world Great author, come on! !

I really like this book. I also like Naixing very much. I am a loyal fan of Naixing. I love you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I read it a long time ago, and then I remembered that I didn't give it a review [shy]. The author's writing is very good, but I can't remember the content, but it must have appeared in my book circle a long time ago and it is definitely not vulgar (not sure). Don't look at the low score, because most people like to read cookies now, and are not interested in forced love. There are so few people, so the score will be low, so go and read it. If you don't like it, come back and criticize me. I don't read the comments anyway [star]

I really like the storyline, but sometimes the sentences are hard to read. Very good. This must be my first time writing. [Like][Like][Like]

It's quite nice, I recommend it. I just suggest that you pay attention to typos and punctuation marks and correct them for better reading [smile][laugh]

It's pretty good, but there are too many mistakes in punctuation and gender, but overall it's pretty good.

Please write him and her correctly, thank you! But if this is what the author did intentionally, then just pretend I didn't say it.

Very nice. I like this book very much. 👍

Come on, author, the writing is very good.

One word summary - good looking

Um! The author is very direct👾hehe!

The author writes very well, keep up the good work [blowing kiss]

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Personally I think it looks good (*σ´∀`)σ

Not bad, not badヾ(^▽^*)))

Yes, this comic reminds me of an old friend (also a comic)

Really highly recommended, the content is also great!