In the flow of mortals, a young man accidentally traveled to another world. He was helpless and relied on a golden finger that could automatically complete the incomplete skills to pick up leaks and climb up step by step to swim in the other world.
Reader comments
To be honest, the writing of this novel is really weird [face covering] There are occasional mistakes and omissions, there are a lot of repetitions, and the dialogues between the characters are all glued together. It would be more comfortable to read if they can be divided into sections. Secondly, it feels very weird that you can still chat while fighting, especially it is very long-winded!
Many plots and routines are very mindless. The book seems to be okay, but don't take it too seriously, otherwise you will get a heart attack from anger. The whole world of the novel is not like the world of cultivating immortals, but very much like the world of martial arts. [Covers face] There are still a lot of poisonous points! The protagonist is targeted everywhere in the sect and has been tricked. Outside, there is a battle between good and evil, and a huge bounty is offered by the devil. Even the people in his own sect want to assassinate the hero. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have died and been reincarnated a hundred times.
Come on, author,
No female protagonist, 5 stars.
It's an ancient way of writing, and it's unremarkable.
It's okay, but it's a bit lighter, without the feeling of danger. It's like many fragments combined. Although life is quite real, it lacks the sense of a protagonist.
To be honest, the writing of this novel is really weird [face covering] There are occasional mistakes and omissions, there are a lot of repetitions, and the dialogues between the characters are all glued together. It would be more comfortable to read if they can be divided into sections. Secondly, it feels very weird that you can still chat while fighting, especially it is very long-winded! Many plots and routines are very mindless. The book seems to be okay, but don't take it too seriously, otherwise you will get a heart attack from anger. The whole world of the novel is not like the world of cultivating immortals, but very much like the world of martial arts. [Covers face] There are still a lot of poisonous points! The protagonist is targeted everywhere in the sect and has been tricked. Outside, there is a battle between good and evil, and a huge bounty is offered by the devil. Even the people in his own sect want to assassinate the hero. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have died and been reincarnated a hundred times.
Come on, author,
No female protagonist, 5 stars.
It's an ancient way of writing, and it's unremarkable.
It's okay, but it's a bit lighter, without the feeling of danger. It's like many fragments combined. Although life is quite real, it lacks the sense of a protagonist.