The Male Protagonist of Black Lotus Always Wants to Attack Me

[Sending Hearts] Shamelessly give yourself a five-point score

Ahhhhhh, I finished reading it in one morning, it's not enough. The relationship between Xie Yun and Lin Yi is completely natural. Where is the black lotus? This is obviously our little cutie. Junior brother, you are too cruel to kill me.

I can't hold it back, and I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's almost 20 chapters away. I gave it five points because the author's writing style is very good and the writing style is also very witty. But when it comes to the plot, I can't say enough about it. By the way, I think the male and female protagonists are more love-minded. I read it carefully and understood it, but I still think the emotional development of the male and female protagonists is too blunt, and in fact, the male protagonist is too emotional. The main character's presence is not strong, and of course it can be viewed as a coming-of-age story with a single heroine. That's how I view it. One thing to say is that the character of the heroine is actually not lovable, but she is indeed just an ordinary person at the beginning. The setting is actually reasonable and understandable, but in the end the heroine is too drifting with the crowd, and she does feel like she is being pushed. To be honest I really hate this feeling. It may be related to my personality and I never like to be passive. Although the heroine has had a hard time along the way and has witnessed her growth with my own eyes, for Xie Yun, I always feel that she is still a little bit behind. But maybe for the author, this is the best arrangement the author has given them. If there is still something missing, I will insist on finishing it. I will finish reading it. It's a newcomer's work. The author needs to work harder. I really agree with the author's writing. She actually deserves a five-point rating, but for this story, it is far from meeting such expectations. But everyone has different preferences and the rating should be more objective, but I want to give the author this five-point subjectively. This article may not be to my liking, but such excellent writing should not be buried. This review is true, I still can't help but say it! It sucks! There are a lot of holes that have not been filled in. Although the ending is good, it is not explained clearly. My poor couple Lin Zhi and Xuan Nu are just like this. The ending is more or less hasty. By the way, the author does not have an outline to let himself go. In fact, the later plot has nothing to do with the introduction.

I hope that the male protagonist can change the nickname for his senior sister in the future, because I don't call him sister for the next year, and my mind is a bit wild. This book is in line with my taste. I really like this book. This is the first time I have written a review and scored a novel since I read it on Tomato. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on, and present better works to readers!

A very wonderful book, the heroine is well portrayed!

I watched Xie Yun grow up slowly. She had love, friendship, teacher-student relationship in this strange world. She had a bond in this world, so she worked hard to shoulder the very heavy responsibility and protect the Xiulan World. From the beginning when she had nothing to do with herself to later becoming the number one sword cultivator with the world in mind, she has experienced a lot and grown a lot.

I really like the setting of this book! The heroine travels into the novel and starts tasks one after another. Each task is a short story, and the heroine is also growing step by step. The female protagonist is cold-hearted but also a foodie, while the male protagonist looks pitiful but is actually a sinister person. Not to be missed!

I really like this book. When I first read it, I thought it was going to collapse. After reading it slowly, it became really fascinating. I hope you can follow your own ideas. Come on (´-ω-`)

At first, I always thought that the male protagonist was the master... When I saw the female protagonist and the junior brother together, I was still thinking... Would the junior brother hiccup..., Ahhhhh

It's okay, the writing is okay, but the plot feels a bit weird. Many plots start and end inexplicably. But it's much better than many novels. The characters are well detailed, but the plot control is still a little bit poor. I can look forward to the future. The score of this book is too low. It is better than many books with a score of 9.3 Or above.

It's pretty good... Many books written in very simple terms are read by many people. This one is pretty well written, but the traffic is low... Tomato is so confusing.

I thought Master was the official spouse, but then I saw the title and it turned out to be the male protagonist

I like reading this book very much I don't know when the author will finish it My heartstrings pulled by this novel are so impatient. But I still admire the CP of the heroine and the master... I wonder if there can be a side story about the two of them?

It's so good-looking, I really like the heroine and the hero, they are the perfect match! ! ! I will always love Yunyun and Junior Brother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is my second favorite male protagonist in so many years of reading novels (the first favorite male protagonist is Jun Yan) Yiyi is so cute ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I hope there are more emotional scenes, I really like it so much😍 It will satisfy me!

It's quite interesting, but I still don't understand where the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist come from.

The book world view is huge: The world is big, but this big world is made up of every little one of us. The transformation of the heroine, her integration into the world, is actually like everyone in reality. When you can't find your direction, look at the world. The wind is blowing, the rain is falling, and every life is moving forward. Finally: Come on, the author who writes female videos like strong men is super cool!

The first chapters are well conceived, and each character's appearance is described in detail, and both men and women have a strong sense of emotional connection. Unfortunately, the later chapters are unclear. The first chapters are really beautiful and attract me to keep following them~~ Big boost to the author💪💪

It's quite good. It's not like some novels where the plot is all about love.

The plot feels okay, and the male protagonist's charm is indeed not obvious. But if it is viewed as a story about a heroine, and the male protagonist is a powerful little wife on her way to upgrade, then it seems reasonable. Personally, I feel that the only flaw is that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not clearly described, and there is always a feeling that they suddenly start to fall in love so much that they can't help themselves. And it's true that the heroine is very strong, but she feels like she's cheating the whole time.

All I can say is that it's so beautiful. I look at the title of each chapter every time to decide whether to continue reading. Usually, if the author is so concise that several chapters have the same title (I guess it's because he is too lazy to think of titles), I will abandon the article. But the article is so beautiful that it lures me to read chapter after chapter (without skipping a chapter). It's so addictive that I can't stop reading. Come on, support you, update quickly [love] [love] [love] Such a beautiful and wonderful article should be discovered Brothers and sisters who like Dawen, please brush up your ratings together.

The heroine is great and the plot is interesting

Very exciting, is the male protagonist reborn? Also, does the heroine have a vest?

Oops... How should I put it... The heroine is a little too smooth (? After all, she is the chosen one, but every time the heroine goes to a place and wakes up a few months later, it feels uncomfortable to skip the plot in between... There are still some holes that seem to be unfilled. But overall it is okay. There are not many emotional scenes and the plot is full.

I feel that this book has a great world view and a lot of foreshadowing. As a person who is not into reading, I really feel that it is good. [Sending Hearts] I hope the author doesn't end up with a bad ending. The type of stories I've read before almost didn't fill in the holes in the end and ended up being unfinished. [Cover face]

A very good story about a female protagonist. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is confirmed clearly and neatly. There is no female rivalry, no mutual suspicion or bloody misunderstandings. The female protagonist has gone from being a bystander at the beginning to resolutely protecting the public, and her original intention remains unchanged! Very exciting! The rating is low!

This book is indeed very good, and it feels more and more exciting. I hope the author will keep writing. I'm waiting for updates every day, and I hope the author can keep writing.

The exciting part is gone after seeing it. Author, do you know how uncomfortable I am [I'm about to cry]

It looks good, and it's not laggy at the moment.

I am on the wrong CP, I have nothing left😭

I stayed up late watching it, my thoughts were a little confused and my brain couldn't keep up.