Spring Things************

Damn it, Yukino is my [anger][anger], even Hachiman can't compete with me [anger][anger]

Not bad, but isn't this a Harmono fanfic? Why should Yinglili be added as the losing dog [laughing evilly], can you not let Yinglili be the losing dog?

It's very interesting. I hope the author doesn't run away.

Let me give myself four stars first. Although I feel that the writing is pretty good, I still found a lot of shortcomings when I looked back. First of all, the author's evaluation of this book is: a parody of spring things. The plot of the original Harmono is very exciting, and many times the author cannot think of a better plot than the original. But the problem is that the original work was written more than ten years ago, and many of the jokes and elements were also from a long time ago. So the author thought of deleting these old jokes and incorporating some newer ones (the author's composition is very complex), so as to make everyone feel more involved. As for the question about the great teacher, I will give a unified reply here. There is no great teacher in this book. Although many people hope that I can add the great teacher, in the author's humble opinion. O-Sensei and Yukinoshita can only choose one or the other, because the author believes that O-Sensei is still the best match for Yukinoshita, so if O-Sensei is included in the story, it will be difficult for the author to take care of both. Hope everyone can understand. Regarding the writing style, the author often reads Japanese light novels, so he is somewhat influenced by them. Originally, the author wanted to write this book in the first person... Above, if you think this book is pretty good and more to your liking. Then come and poke me (ecstasy)

It's so beautiful, why so few people watch it [what]

There's no problem so far, it's very annoying I want to ask: odd, even, many or none? Where is the great teacher?

How can I put it this way? I have only read about twenty chapters so far. I think Tennis is very toxic. If it weren't for the rare chance of seeing a comprehensive comic book, it would be impossible to get four stars. But I will still read it and see what happens next. If it is not too toxic, I will change it to a five-star rating. After all, it is not easy to come across a comprehensive comic book.

It's good, but the update is very slow. If it's stuck, you can also learn from other people's anime fan fiction, as long as you don't copy them all, after all, they are all in the same routine, as long as they show the character's personality.

I just said a few words. If the author sees me and replies, thank you. I came across this book at 520, and it was ranked third on the recommendation list. At that time, I added a bookshelf, read two chapters, and then started to read it. During this period, I can understand that the author stopped updating. After all, there are only two ways to write fan fiction: the boss or the power of love. If the author has no money, he will lose the desire to write, which is normal 🙂 Maybe I'm the kind of person who gets the three-minute heat [face covering] I can't hold on anymore. I read the gray serialization in the upper right corner of the novel every day, and I feel uncomfortable. I think I should let it go now, it's still too late, but I always feel a little empty in my heart, so I can still wait, wait for you to come back, until I don't use tomatoes anymore. ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

It will definitely create a new craze for fan fiction. There are so many types of comics that I can't understand their own logic. I have to measure it. I believe that since the author dares to take the quality, he will have a good future.

Don't know what to say

Where is the great teacher? I hope there will be a great teacher

I think it's okay, but the 23 or so pictures may cause some people to feel uncomfortable. I remember in the original sentence, it seems that Tuanzi has already made up his mind to change himself here, so Tuanzi didn't help them.

The writing isn't top-notch, but it's still top-notch. But perhaps because it is written by a fan, the author's writing style cannot be displayed, and the author's writing skills are too much, and the level of writing has naturally declined. Still hope to work hard. [Praise]

A knife doesn't count as a knife, a knife doesn't count... Pfft - author, please pay me Yinglili! ! ! [Angry][angry]

Harem or single heroine? It's rare to see Yingli Liyong once, so the author should just accept her [crying]

Let me put it this way, I see that the comment area is all talking about evaluation and so on. I just want to say that no one urged me to update it? I also hope that the author can write well. It feels OK so far. It is very good to write according to the author's own ideas.

I have to say that this is a very good book among Harmono fanfics. In fact, the poisonous point of Harmono fanfics lies in Yukinoshita's mouth. Some books treat him like that, but I personally think it's better to fight back. Because if you hold on to this point, it will sink. Yukinoshita's emotions are the real thing, very real. So it's not a big problem for the author to write this way

Support me, it's very interesting. Also, is Yinglili destined to be a loser [laughing evilly]

Can there be a single female protagonist? ! ! Please

What a great author

A comprehensive comic can actually break my defense. ◝₍ᴑ̑ДO͝₎◞

Everything else is okay, except that Yinglili suddenly joined and left the game as a loser. Finally, Tuanzi is no longer a loser. Yinglili's unexpected appearance once again made me feel regretful.

I think it's better written than others of this type.

It was really well written, at least the writing style and plot exceeded expectations. But the rating is a bit low... Could it be because the author updated it too slowly [I almost cried]

Why is the rating so low?

It's nice, but there are not many people there.

Very good, good luck to the author

Come on, it's very good

Yinglili cannot escape defeat