Dragon Ball************

The author was horrified to discover that Yamosi's timeline was wrongly written and was written ten thousand years ago. Today, his head suddenly became clear. Majin Buu has been sealed away for thousands of years! Later, I read the original work and found that when the old Kaiojin was sealed by Beerus, 75 million years ago, the layout was clearly before Beerus took office. . Whis had just become an angel, but a huge loophole appeared. It had been modified to hundreds of millions of years ago. In ancient times, it could only be modified to hundreds of millions of years ago. The timeline of Beerus sealing the old Kaioshin was probably not long after he took office! The author is here again, and he expresses his deepest apologies for the dozen or so chapters that started earlier! I really have never written a novel before. In reality, I stopped going to school after I finished junior high school. I really just tried it casually! Dragon Ball, I read the little comic book when I was in elementary school in 2004! I couldn't afford it, so I pooled my money with my classmates to buy it, one dollar for you and one dollar for me. The author himself only received one dollar a day from his parents! Everyone takes turns to watch, Later, CDs, then my family bought a computer, and now I have a mobile phone. I have never given up my love for Dragon Ball! Keep following updates! , I wrote this novel some time ago because the number of words in the online fandom was too small and I was not happy with it. Think about whether you can write a book based on your own preferences! To be honest, I have borrowed from a lot of works, but try to create my own! Just like the elves. There are a lot of fan comments, and other non-Dragon Ball fans have also appeared, but I really haven't seen it! Just a whim to explain the existence of Chuanchao! It has been on the shelves for so many days. Thank you to all readers for your great contributions, support and gifts. Every time I finish writing, I will carefully read the comments, book reviews, chapter reviews, and paragraph reviews! Go and improve your own shortcomings! Extract fan suggestions! The happiest moment for the author is when he sees good reviews! I can't help but feel excited. I am very satisfied that everyone can be satisfied! In reality, I still open a small store, and I have to work and sell during the day. I update a lot when I have nothing to do, and there will be less when things happen, just like yesterday! It's been a busy day! I hope that all readers will continue to support it and make the author more motivated! The author also promises that the content must be exciting and strive to be the first Dragon Ball fanfic with the most words and the most exciting content on Tomato! After all, it is a niche book, so I don't think it will receive many recommendations. I can only trouble all fans who like this book to recommend it so that other fans who like Dragon Ball can see it! The author continues to code and update,

Okay, I hope there won't be too many harems (about ten) [shy] The speed is also very fast

The author has the qualifications of a prime minister, just like me [laughs evilly] It's a very interesting book, I personally prefer this kind of book [laughs] But author, will the protagonist accept No. 18? [Thinking] If so, the author would have just written that the protagonist saved No. 18, And No. 18 Would stick to the protagonist like candy. [Blows a kiss] After all, the original book is because Krillin saved No. 18, And No. 18 Chose to be with him [Pout]

Come on, this good author, I predict this book will reach over 10,000 yuan

It's really great, and I think it fits Vegeta's character quite well. He's always very kind to his women, and he's arrogant in front of others. Although his combat power has improved, it hasn't collapsed. Please don't leave negative reviews without looking carefully.

Otherwise, it would be a pity to deal with No. 18 As well, giving it to the Nose Stars |･ω･｀)

Come on, don't give up, you can write a book in the Ultimate series in the future, I am also a fan of Ultimate

Good looking. Cheers, author.

The plot is okay, it's the Empress Dowager's palace, you can take it as you see it, if you don't like harem stories, you don't have to fall into this trap.

It's okay. It would look better if I didn't use official characters and added Bunsen.

I'm saving four stars for now, I'll wait to read more, and I'll upgrade it to five stars if the later chapters are good. Bulma in another time and space was okay, but if she really took in Chi Chi, I feel that there is a bit of a gap in the wife's attributes.

A very good book

I didn't like the content of the first few chapters, but it became more and more exciting in the following chapters. I loved it. This is my first time to rate this book. I really like this book. Come on, author.

The cover looks a bit like the one on the notebook [laughs crookedly]

It's pretty cool. Will there be a Heroine 2? Will there be a Dragon Ball Hero after Dragon Ball Super? Come on, write more!

The driving speed can be good, but other things are just okay. This should be the reason why you wrote it for the first time. I hope you will review the content before writing the next one, and your writing will get better and better! But don't change the speed, haha! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Dragon Ball Legend World

Very beautiful, wonderful

There is an original plot and it is generous, support it! But when I see the elves, I don't really like them. Thanks [eating melon]

The author has some suggestions at the end of Chapter 26. You can read them when you have time. In fact, everything is okay, but there are some minor problems. In fact, the heroine has special skills and fighting ability, and the tragic heroine in the original novel can win. After all, the most trustworthy distance is zero distance [take a closer look]

Good looking author, come on

This book is pretty good so far. I highly recommend it. At least it's not the kind where the main character is awesome and the supporting characters are awesome.

This writing is really awesome! Although the combat power is a little bit broken, the impact is not big. The author works hard to update [Love] [Love] [Love]

What is the group number? The author will come back soon

Can anyone tell me what the fan group number is?

I personally like to watch it, and I don't care about you!

This book is good, let's see what I think. I found a lot of books that still suit my taste. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Very nice new book for newcomers

Good looking ah ah ah ah

It feels pretty good and looks pretty good.