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Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. To you dear readers.
This book must be a five-star book, it's so great, it's like experiencing Naruto from Obito's emotions, but it's more enjoyable than simply reading from Obito's point of view. And I can intuitively feel the inner feeling of a girl like Obito who is willing to be the enemy of the world for the sake of love, even if the world is destroyed, she still wants to see you again. Thumbs up, love it, amazing author
Personally, I think you should read it. The advantages and disadvantages of this book are very obvious. The advantages are that it is fast-paced, the key points are grasped well, and it is not procrastinating. It is quite enjoyable to read. The disadvantage is that some places are different from the original work, such as slugs, but I personally think it is harmless. This kind of subject matter is still very novel.
Oh my, it's so beautiful. It's just that updates are slow. I hope the author will work hard.
It's good-looking and has a good philosophy of life. Life is full of regrets, and everyone wants to make up for the regrets in their lives. Maybe they are wrong about the world, but people are human because they have their own emotions. And people who have their own emotions are not saints. They will only live for themselves. He is willing to go against the world for what he desires. This is all normal. It's a very interesting plot and the emotions are spot on. Come on!
I'll give it five stars. Although it's unfinished, at least the main characters have their own characteristics and the revised plot is okay. Some people in the comments said that the settings of White Snake and Slug are very poisonous. Actually, if you look at the books written by Naruko and Sako, they are even more poisonous. The second is their love story, which is what you said is poisonous. I think It's okay. After all, I don't think the original works of these two characters are very good. I think it's okay to change the settings a little and add a scene. After all, most people definitely laughed when they watched that part. A small number of people think it's not good, probably because they are fans of the original works who don't like the change of characters. I think the changes are really good, funny and interesting, but I don't like the ending. I don't think it's right. In fact, it should end where Kaguya is. There is no need to write and expand the world view. It will seem dragging. After all, the pace in the early and middle stages is so fast and delaying it later is contrary to the point of resurrecting my wife. It feels so weird if I can't resurrect my wife for various reasons. It ends there. It's the best. If you want to expand it, you can write about Otsutsuki's invasion after being resurrected. There's no need to be resurrected. For those who haven't read it, I'll give you a few main points to read. The pace is fast, the emotional line is stable, the main character's IQ is online, but the tail is not handled well. It's a rare masterpiece among Tomato Naruto fans.
It's really hard not to love, it's so beautifully written, it's really the best Naruto fan fiction I've ever read, I give the author a thumbs up!
It's so beautiful, and the whole process is exciting, especially when the six of them fight Kaguya in the end. Although it's not finished, I believe the author will write it better if possible. 2023.8.31
The characters are pretty good, and the plot is a bit fast. I think it was wrong for Obito to kill Minato and Kushina for Rin, but it's hard not to love a hot-blooded boy who becomes an enemy of the world for the one he loves (ps: I'm not whitewashing Obito, the world is not black and white, I just personally appreciate Obito's approach of becoming an enemy of the world)
It's not their fault, it was the wrong era that created them. The Sharingan, which can reverse time, cannot change the regretful ending. Companionship is the longest confession of love. Even if it is just a shadow, you still have the right to embrace love. "The world only knows that I, Jiang Tian, turned black, but no one knows that Jiang Tian, who begged others to let Ling go on the battlefield a few years ago, also had light in his eyes." These sentences are very well written. To be honest, this is the first masterpiece that I think of as a god after Shuang Shenwei, "Windbell Flower", its flower language is: Eternal waiting, a lifetime commitment, loving only one person in my life, being moved by one person, loving one person deeply, missing one person, I am waiting for the wind to come, and waiting for your return. This sentence is for all book lovers and protagonists! May we not have to be alone in our unrequited love.
Oops, this author has to say that the writing is very good, but there is no solution to this kawen technique. When you see the most exciting part, you will be cut off [punch out][punch out][punch out]
As for this book, my opinion is that the writing is very good, and it can be ranked in the upper reaches of the Naruto books I have read. The plot is a bit fast, but it is not harmful. The author, please give it a try, keep up the hard work, and update it quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! And the protagonist must not be bitten by Naruto in the end!
Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. To you dear readers.
It's very good, but I felt empty after reading it. In short, it's good. I really want to see Obito and Jiang Tian guarding the ninja world side by side.
I finished reading it in one sitting today and was very emotional. At first, I was attracted to Jiang Tian because he wanted to start the Four Wars with Obito. One is for Ling, and the other is also for Lin. This is also a cool point, I watched it with gusto There are some shortcomings in the first half of this book. I read that book friends are arguing about it, but I like the second half the best. I like Jiang Tian's warm daily life in Tsukiyomi World and Obito's arrogant look. At the end, I was shocked by the author's innocence. They fought against the enemy together. This paragraph was placed at the end, which I did not expect. The author's inspiration was so wonderful that it has become an art. The last article is very interesting, as if telling us that the protagonist's life has just begun and is not over yet. Yes! Naruto will never end, and no one's story in this story ends. This work will always live in our hearts, and it also shows that it is not unreasonable for him to be popular for so many years. Kishimoto's character description, everything, proves that he is an excellent cartoonist. Finally, I love Naruto, I love Naruto So what if it's true or false, so what if it's a virtual character? Who can prove that our current world is real? The second dimension is never virtual. When I fall in love with it, it becomes real!
Woo woo woo woo ≥≤, it's really beautiful (●°u°●), goodbye divine book [cry][cry], come on the author [like], look forward to your next work, I won't say anymore, I'm going to cry (இдஇ; ) [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
This is the best Naruto novel I have ever read.
I personally feel that the writing is really good, and the love between a boy and a girl is vividly written. I also want to have such a vigorous love, but this society will not allow it at all...
I can only say that it is very good. The completion of the Ninja World Chapter is very high (the author said it himself, don't criticize), but there is a bit of water in the back (well, the author admits it). Emm gave this score because he thought the writing was very good, and the plot was very delicate, and the connection was smooth and smooth. I personally gave it a 9.2, But Tomato does not have a custom score, so so be it, the protagonist is the Obito template. Some of the settings in the early stage were unclear (maybe it was because the old books had restrictions at the time), which did not affect the plot or anything. This is why I personally think that more than 75% of abandoned books are due to this. It's non-toxic, and it's a rare traditional fanfic that can be read in one sitting. (The pits have been filled in) There is just no extra story (I want to watch [Eating Melon] (ง •̀_•́)งCome on, come on, come on!
Both are equally crazy about women, but one is a commoner and the other is an Uchiha, and they are known as the two heroes of the ninja world. They dance wildly in the ninja world just to see her whom they miss.
The pace is very fast. Chapter 58 enters the fourth battle, which is a little bit knife-like. Some of the details are a bit deviated from the original work. The Kingdom of God line at the end feels like a hydrology, but overall it is still very beautiful.
Although the ending is a bit watery and the writing is not good at the beginning, overall the author has made great progress and is very attentive. If nothing else, this can be said to be the best Naruto fanfic I have ever seen. She is not as invincible as in those system cool articles, nor is she as brainless as the time traveler, nor is she brainless to lick the protagonist group, nor is she brainless to be black. The author is very serious about portraying the image of each person, and uses his own rational cognition to depict a new world, so I give this five-star praise [crying]
Although this book is very different from the original work, I really like the character Jiang Tian who is as crazy about love as Obito, who dares to love and hate, is loyal, and can do anything for the girl he loves.
When it looks so good, it must be updated with a million words. The author is great, the author is great. Can you add a supporting role for me? If it doesn't work, don't force it. Always support you. From your biggest fan. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] I wish you good health! Longevity Nanshan. Millions of updates per day.
This book is really sweet, no knife The ending of Naruto's remnants of war, the ending of Naruto, the ending of Naruto [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]No
Overall, it's good. As a bookworm, I have a few issues: 1. The time is too exaggerated. Although it speeds up the plot, it is not suitable for people who are not familiar with the original work, but the problem is not big; 2. The heroine and Lin are resurrected too late, and the last chapter is only touched upon. I originally had a lot to say, but I couldn't say it when I put my hands on the keyboard. This kind of villain novel is very suitable for me. Although it is a bit regretful, I like it very much.
It's very, very good to watch, but I felt the ending was a bit rushed after watching it, but overall it's still very good to watch (I actually finished watching it, but I turned it on double speed, so maybe I lost a little time)
The previous content is quite good, with rich plots and strong visuals, but if the last chapter can be written better, it will feel better and get more positive reviews. I think there should be more details, or um, the plot where the protagonists get married happily together is fine. Anyway, the happy ending in my heart is like this [smile][smile][smile][smile][top post][top post][top post][top post][like][like][like][like]
The content of this book is still average, but the emotional expression is relatively strong. I really like to listen to songs and books while writing novels. When I listened to this novel, I listened to колыбельная, which made me feel very sad. And my novels are indeed of this type, so I still prefer them.
The overall content is quite good, but I feel a little embarrassed that the names of two girls that a boy likes have the same pronunciation -_-|| But the ending is quite good, everyone who should be together is together.