One Piece: Wudang Byakuya, Deputy Captain of the Straw Hats

The writing is great. The plot has its own ideas and the meaning of the original work, which allows the plot to proceed reasonably. However, it seems that it suppresses the sparkle of the original work and then shines the light of the author's original work or the protagonist's participation. It feels a bit awkward, but it does not affect the overall story. There is also the story about Usopp's strongest experience in this book. Some readers think that the absence of the story about the departure of the Merry ship has a huge impact on Usopp. But I think that the reason why Usopp is emotionally violent is actually his inferiority complex and the incomprehension of his companions. First of all, what abilities did Usopp have before the three-color Haki appeared before that episode? What methods do you use against your enemies? Traps, the enemy's carelessness, self-made props, little cleverness, but the lack of his own strength are enough to illustrate Usopp's own fragility and weak growth. At the same time, the Merry suffered too many scars, causing him to be unable to hold on. Its imminent collapse was a huge blow to Usopp, because the ship was already his companion, and it was a ship gifted by his best friend. However, the ship had been scarred by the lack of care of his companions. It was not until the last moment when the captain said lightly that he wanted to change ships that Usopp collapsed. But in this book, Usopp has seeds that allow him to grow and gain strength, dual guns with magical effects, a deputy captain who understands him, the spirit of the Merry ship materialized, and the runes enchanted by the protagonist to the Merry ship. It's hard for me to imagine that Usopp would have feelings of inferiority and his own powerlessness, and there would even be no possibility of the Merry ship being destroyed, because the ship spirit has materialized, and its body no longer plays a huge role. Merry is the incarnation of the Merry ship. Merry is here, and the Merry ship is there. Merry is already a part of the pirate group, so who can hurt Merry at will? Okay, I have explained this point... There must be nothing wrong with this book with a five-point rating. After all, the book is very good.

This is the best book I have ever read. The brilliance of most of the other pig's feet overshadowed the brilliance of Luffy and others. But this one doesn't have that which is really good. Come on, author! (By the way, the author is much more diligent than the pirate novels written by a certain traveler next door. Keep it up)

The ups and downs of the plot are meticulously portrayed, and the most important thing is the provocative plot. The plot is ups and downs. The characters are meticulously portrayed. The most important thing is the provocative plot. The protagonist's combat power will not collapse. It is not an invincible and refreshing novel.

As a fan of One Piece, I found it quite interesting. The prophecies about time travel are clear but not annoying. I hope to interact more with other Straw Hat friends. I feel that the protagonist and Luffy love each other very much [laughing]

Come on and write, I'll give you all the money I saved from reading the book. I think what you wrote is the most comfortable book I've ever read!

A very good pirate fanfic. I once fantasized about cultivating immortality in One Piece, and now I'm halfway there [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's really hard to find a normal one piece novel. It's not one of those "cool" novels that think on the third leg [face covering]. Normal writing is a luxury. The author writes very interestingly. In the OP, partners and friendship are the most important, and the harem is a piece of cake.

It's very interesting, author. Come on [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]. I recommend more female protagonists, including Empress Nami and Robin... [Adoration] Author, I suggest that the protagonist can practice on his own for a period of time and be separated from the protagonist group. After all, there are more than a thousand episodes of One Piece, which is too much.

It's a great ship-following story. The protagonist is very involved, giving people the feeling that he is a member of the Straw Hats. Moreover, the protagonist has also improved the overall strength of the Straw Hats. The reason for improving the strength is very reasonable. Don't worry about being brainless. After all, this is a 9.4 One Piece story.

Among the One Piece fanfics, I personally think that the second creation is the most unique, the best in character portrayal, and the author who best restores the two core values of "freedom" and "blood" that are the true meaning of navigation. I really admire the author. Since the Alabasta chapter, the author has taken me away. Entering a world of "New One Piece" that relies on the world view of the original work, and has a chain of butterfly effects due to the butterfly Pig's Knuckle White Night. Compared with the original work, there are countless wonderful things in the subsequent chapters, including blood, tears, and moving people. It can be said that it suddenly comes to light. Big boost for the author, the story of One Piece with Byakuya is getting better and better. The last thing I want to say is, the ending is approaching, please don't let it be a bad ending, please don't be a bad ending, please don't be a bad ending. Thank you [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Come on Fans of Luffy's mother + controller + fujoshi were very satisfied, happy and a bit tearful. In the cocoon, Luffy told Ace that he had been praising him all the time. I really hit it, the sugar was mixed with glass shards

Hahahahahahaha, this is the most interesting of all the stories I have ever read. The other books are either too self-centered or the women can't walk. Only this one made me laugh like an aunt the whole time. You know, I'm a straight man! ! !

After reading more than 300 chapters, I finally understand why the score is above 9 points. The author is really serious about writing. Each character is written according to the personality in the anime. There is no situation where things fall apart as soon as he writes. This is what I like the most. There is no focus on who the heroine is, or the partner. I think this is what I imagined. One Piece fanfic, because One Piece is an anime that has not been updated, so if you have watched the anime, it may seem a bit too fast, but overall it is really good, and you can see the author's efforts and hard work ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Come on! ! I read other comments and I really don't understand, why do you say it's a nanny article? If you are a time traveler and a Taoist golden finger, for fans who like One Piece, I will definitely join the protagonist group. I want to get closer to my idols and help my idols achieve their dreams. Why did it become a nanny article in your mouth? In my opinion, as a time traveler, "you" can be regarded as having the ability to predict things. Do you still have to watch the protagonist from behind and laugh? Are there any shortcuts not to be taken? Those who think they can become kings by themselves through time travel, just like others said, think that they are the protagonists after time travel [face covering] I can only feel that the author likes One Piece very much. He writes very seriously, and when you read his articles, you can feel that the characters portrayed by the author are very vivid. He did not say that the protagonist traveled through the past to be ridiculous. The time travelers written by the author also love Luffy. This is a two-way street!

It's good to watch, but some people think that the protagonist is too versatile and others don't have a chance to show it. It's completely unreasonable and they have to work out some weaknesses.

I have read no less than twenty books as a pirate fan, and I really think this one is a great pirate and ship story, with plots, memories, humor, and that silky little transition ~ and those good book friends (skin-pickers) who care about the author's health while urging updates (very quietly), (although I am also one of them), it's hard not to love it.

This book is the most interesting boat-traveling book I have read so far. I like it so much [adoration] [adoration], but the author is a young lady or a little gie [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]

Personally, I feel that the author's use of language and scene changes are more suitable for filming animations, as are the parts that make people laugh. The form of expression in novels is not suitable for this. The plot setting needs to be improved, but the content is very passionate and interesting. Overall, the pirate novels are very good, and they are well received.

It's a very good book, Pirates and Ships. Other Pirates and Rumors either have too many extra plots, and they don't write a worldview that is completely beyond that world. I personally hope that Robin will be the heroine. Come on, author, don't look too short and weak.

After three readings, after reading so many stories, this one is still the most to my liking. The cheating is reasonable and the combat power is not broken. What I like most is that I finally don't fall in love with Nami or Robin. What kind of love is there in a hot-blooded anime?

This is the most comfortable one I have read in the story. It is also the only one that captures the feeling of unconditional trust between them. I hate the kind of books that tell me to cut down all the books to become the Pirate King when I travel back in time. Because there is this world that only the Straw Hats like. Come on, author, only Luffy can become the Pirate King, otherwise this pirate world will be incomplete.

There has been no update for a month! ! ! ! What are you doing, author? ! ! It's so beautiful. I like the layout and characters inside. There's something happy and cool about it in the back! Well worth a look! It's definitely on par with the other boats. And it's really difficult for the author to write well about that shit in Wano. It's so awesome. I like Bai Ye and his layout, it's wonderful! Huge, delicate and complex! Absolutely amazing!

A very interesting pirate fanfic. The protagonist Bai Ye is the wise general in the Straw Hats. He has no cp and has a very unique character! [Like] At the same time, it improves the overall combat effectiveness of the protagonist group, but it is not an invincible text, so extra points! ! [Like][Like] The characters of Luffy and other Straw Hats are very restored! ! Increase your score! ! ! [Like] [Like] [Like] The plot has ups and downs, the writing is very good, the transitions are smooth, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. The handling of the Wano Country chapter is also great. The most special thing is that the author has his own ideas about the overall situation of the pirate world, and introduces red ideas into One Piece. It's amazing! ! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] I hope the author can remember this book [cry] and give it a happy ending without any regrets! Although updates have been discontinued, the plot is almost finished. I look forward to new readers getting into it [crying]. It is really a rare and good book [like][like][like][like][like]

The author's writing is very innovative, and the writing style is also good, very smooth, and there is no unclear narrative. Basically everything that can be written has been written. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this book. I hope it won't be a eunuch. Good luck, author.

In fact, this book is considered to be the best among One Piece. Although I don't understand why the rating dropped so quickly, it is really exciting, with novel themes and unique ideas. Although the protagonist helped the group in his own way, I was a little bit annoyed when I first read it, but it became more and more interesting as I read it. I hope the author can continue writing and don't bury such a good subject matter...

It's different from Funagawa. The author's imagination is unique and creative, and there is no big poisonous point (Momonosuke has disappeared). As for the writing style, everyone has different opinions, and I feel quite comfortable with it. The character design of each person in the Straw Hats has not collapsed, and the characteristics of each person have been well expressed, with clear logic and an invisible 480-degree surround. The unique plot of the ship is depicted like a gurgling water, like an adventure scroll unfolding slowly in the hand. Let us follow Vice Captain Byakuya (Black Night) to experience the adventure of sailing! [Laughing][laughing]

I've read half of it and I think it's pretty good. I hope I keep writing. Don't care about what others say and don't care about ratings. Those are all dead. Write according to your structure. What you want to write most is what we like to see. Although not everyone will like it. Everyone has their own opinions. Don't care and stick to it.

"These trivial matters derived from each other merge into a gentle and distant river of light in the white nights that last for several years." - Bai Ye In fact, when you read this book carefully, you will find that both the author's writing style and the characters are growing. At the very beginning, the writing style was more inclined to a cool and cheating style. More words were written about the protagonist than others, but this could not stop the protagonist's thin image. Although the character setting was novel, it did not leave a deep impression on people. But it was not until later that the writing style gradually took shape and matured, highlighting the uniqueness of the plot and the interlocking layout. In my opinion, when Byakuya and Luffy were on the Chambord Islands, they questioned the world government, broadcast live in front of the sea, liberated slaves, provoked the navy, guided public opinion, and united people's hearts. It was really shocking, inspiring, and even more exciting. If we say that in the early stage, what I saw was a time traveler using a precognition device to get to know the children of destiny in the world. So later on, what I saw was the unbreakable bond of the Straw Hat Pirates. They grew up along the way, supporting each other and trusting each other. Bai Ye may not be perfect, but he is constantly trying to integrate into the world. He used his innate advantages to work step by step for the Straw Hat Pirates, respecting everyone he met and interacted with, being prepared for danger in times of peace, becoming a guide for each of them, and reducing the occurrence of regrets... Maybe the method was not the best, but he did the best he could. He is the vice-captain of the Straw Hat Pirates, the only sect [Celestial Master] on the sea. Bai Ye is their external brain, the one they will never question...

It is well written and shows us the real One Piece world in the eyes of the author. It was a sudden idea to integrate our country's traditional culture into it, and the pirate world had a chemical reaction with it. (Suggestion: The author should list the protagonist's abilities at the end of a chapter, so that it will be clearer)

One of the most exciting One Piece novels I have read [Adoration] [Adoration] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] I know writing is very hard. If the author is not dead, I will continue to update (I'm kidding, I hope I can continue writing) [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] So pretty!

A very good boat trip, highly recommended. I gave up in Chapter 172. I felt bad when I saw the ability to grab the fruit at will. Later, I felt that the protagonist/author had completely forgotten the meaning of travel, and was no different from Blackbeard and others. As expected, the Thunder Fruit was given to Nami. Everyone has their own dreams and their own path to take. Luffy wants to become the Pirate King, Zoro wants to become the world's best swordsman, and Nami wants to draw a navigation chart for herself... But later it is all about improving strength for the sake of improving strength (the protagonist helps individual characters too much, such as Nami, and it feels like Robin is next). Except for the protagonist, everyone else's combat power is forced to be at the same level, so that I don't know what the combatant among the combatants, navigators, historians... Is mainly doing? … (There are still a few flaws, I feel a bit broken, I'll give it four stars for friendship)