Fairy, Don’t Run! I Really Am Your Future Husband!

I think the author's framework for this article is indeed grand enough, and he also displays the unconstrained framework through his own writing style. Although the emotional part is too drawn out and dragged out, I personally didn't like it very much. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I was impressed by the author's grasp of the entire article. 👍🏻 I think the author's framework for this article is indeed grand enough, and he also displays the unconstrained framework through his own writing style. Although the emotional part is too drawn out and dragged out, I personally didn't like it very much. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I was impressed by the author's grasp of the entire article.

Regardless of whether it is well written or not, it is the one I have the patience to read recently after reading novels for more than ten years. In the past few years, I really can't stand the kind of son-in-law stories where everyone in the SSBB is a zz. There are even SSBB stories about mass killings on the streets in modern cities, stories about genocide at every turn, and stories about giving away girls for no reason. It's really awesome.

There are very few authors like Lao Bai. Others are determined by their own route. Lao Bai attaches great importance to readers' suggestions and writes in a reasonable way that is closer to the readers' wishes. Moreover, the contradictory characters and Shura Field are the highlight of the book, but they are also the essence of the book. Lao Bai has really tried his best. Inversion of cause and effect is a very good way of writing [laughs]

The literary talent is outstanding, the rhetoric is gorgeous, the language is simple, the writing is fresh, the emotions are rich, and the characters are very full and the organization is very clear. The structure of the article is very clear, the plot is compact and reasonable, the ups and downs, the description is vivid, fascinating, and the artistic appeal is strong. The ending of the article is the finishing touch, profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting.

No matter what the trolls scold, I did stay up late and read this novel for several days. Personally, I think the plot is really good. Of course, it does not rule out some poisonous points. This is inevitable. It is still a matter of taste. At least I like it personally. Who has not gone through a growth process? Let the "writers" in the Tomato comment section write it. I guess it won't be as amazing as you think, right? From Reincarnation to the Endless Sea, it can indeed be seen that the author's writing style has improved, and the pitfalls that need to be filled are relatively complete. Anyway, Tomato is a novel that most people's IQs are above. If the trolls don't like it, they can just abandon the book and no one will force you to read it. People who like it will naturally like it. Why are you reading some stupid articles and coming here to get angry? Typical plot of h spraying, spraying h in the plot [Thinking] To sum up, I personally like this book with potential. It is indeed attractive enough for me to stay up late for several days in a row (this depends on the individual, don't use your feelings to deny me). Keep up the good work, Lao Bai, I'm optimistic about you [Chigua][Chigua]

It's pretty good, occasionally a little poisonous, but if you have the original, no knives and no cattle, brothers, feel free to use it.

Five-star praise, the writing is good, except for a small flaw at the beginning, the writing is smooth later, the layout fills in the holes, and the emotional description is really good. I suggest you read it slowly and don't be impatient. I am a ten-year-old bookworm passing by.

The story is very good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the seven women in Qi Sha Kill are all touching. The cold smoke drenched the snow and turned her head white, she risked her life to protect each other and forgot about love; Qingyan's fate was changed, she got married in the dark, and traveled around the world together: The person who broke the situation in Chumo, the beginning of love, went deep, ruthless but affectionate; Miaoqing's childhood sweetheart, since Killing for love, Nirvana is reborn; Rouer waited for hundreds of years, found a good man, and risked his life to save her; Xiqiu made a big fuss in the world, and a monument was erected in the imperial city, and the tears were blurred; Tianqin has been with you for a long time, the world is small, and he is enough, but he is the most fortunate.

The process is painful, but the ending is happy? ? ? You know how to use exciting things to whet your appetite There can be more emotional scenes, just take your time to handle the lines yourself In the early stage, there is a part of persuading people to quit. There are many sweet points, but they are very small. Most of them are to advance the main line of the narrative. I haven't seen Zhu Xian, but it's interesting

It's quite interesting, but the chapters are updated slowly, and the pace feels a bit slow. More than 500 chapters are still in Nascent Soul. If you want to write more, it's fine. I hope the pace won't be too fast and the ending will be hasty.