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The whole book is very good, except for one bad point, which is the yellow button. I really don't like to see it before the book is finished. Please forgive me.

There are too few good-looking ones. I hope there is no female protagonist and the male protagonist is beautiful. If there is a female protagonist, please let me know so that I can be mentally prepared. Come on.

I prefer this kind of novel about becoming the Dark Lord. The writing style is also better and the plot is also very interesting. I can only say that it is a 5-star review.

Ahhhhh, how can it be so beautiful? This is really one of the few times I have read it on Tomato to remind me to update. It is not the whole process. The most important thing is that a Hogwarts book can really keep Harry Potter away. I am really happy. The previous Hogwarts books are so exciting. Everyone is either complimenting Harry or falling in love with him. I'm really tired of it. This book is really refreshing. My family, I have tried more than a thousand books, and I am not satisfied with most of them. This one is really good. I closed my eyes and read it [I learned it]

It's very imaginative and the twists are interesting. I haven't seen such an interesting Harry Potter novel in a long time. Personally, I hope that the heroine will be Hermione or Luna or someone who has appeared in the original work (Ginny will do it), and not too much originality. Fan fiction with too many original settings will become boring later on, and it will basically be a drama, which is boring.

Awesome [Like] This book is really amazing [Blow a kiss] It's so good to read\(//∇//)\ The author is so kind, please update it faster, my child has no more articles to read! This is too little! Not enough [sending heartfelt wishes]

Renew! (Although the review is only 2 words long, it has rigorous grammar, neat wording, ingenious structure, catchy words, and is concise and comprehensive. This shows the reviewer's solid writing skills, easy-to-handle writing skills and unparalleled creative ability. It is admirable. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark, which is really the finishing touch) Good! (Although this reply contains only one word, it profoundly expresses the deep blessings and profound emotions of the respondent. It can be said that the reply is astonishingly concise, every word is worth a thousand dollars, every word is exciting, and every word makes people cry. This fully shows the replyer's solid writing skills, handy writing skills, and ruthless innovation ability. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark, a finishing touch, a wonderful pen, a profound artistic conception, echoing the previous article, and sublimating the theme). Well, after writing so much, my only wish is to update two more chapters every day | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

I give you one of the few 5-star reviews. My reviews are generally 4 stars. It is a very successful Harry Potter fanfic. It is fascinating and you will never guess what the plot is going to be. A sense of humor and humor.

First of all, the author's subject matter is really novel and caught my eye. For me, what I look forward to most every day is the update. I hope the author can keep updating it. It is a full-length novel! This book is very well written (✪▽✪) I really like the character of the protagonist, the big boss hidden behind the scenes, and I am afraid that it will disappoint Dumbledore. The protagonist is a born Dark Lord! The White Devil Hidden Behind the Scenes

Super love. How should I put it? There are actually a lot of fans of this kind, but this one is in a different way. To be honest, it is the first time I have seen it written in the form of Dumbledore's grandson, and it is written about him being the Dark Lord behind the scenes. I have read many novels about behind-the-scenes stories, but this one. I've seen a lot about Hogwarts, but I haven't seen much about Dumbledore's grandson. Plus the writing is good. The sense of immersion is relatively strong.

Big, come on Regardless of ideas or concepts Very clever Modernizing the wizarding world I support the author greatly Write it down according to your own ideas But I have a little idea Don't kill anyone in future plots ヾ(●゜ⅴ゜)ノ Awesome ( ﹡ˆoˆ﹡ )

The author says that the plot is good and the logic is clear, but it is a bit short. I hope it does not have a female protagonist. Can you write more about the interaction between Xiaolong and the protagonist? I have so many things that I want to laugh at [laughing] [laughing]

The diction is rigorous, the writing is excellent, the subject matter is innovative, the supporting characters are flesh-and-blood, independent without losing their individuality, and smart without being rigid. The protagonist has correct views, is serious but humorous, and is proud but not complacent. So Slytherin adds 1,000 points, and Gryffindor deducts 30,000 points. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very happy and interesting. This is the most entertaining HP fanfic I've ever seen, but it's just not satisfying! Come on, update, author!

This book's portrayal of characters and grasp of various underlying logics are beyond imagination. I can find a novel in Tomato that is very suitable for my taste. Unlike those novels that start a harem after a disagreement, which is disgusting. Although there are only forty-seven short chapters, it is really not enough. The score of this work is seriously low, about 9.6. The author greatly requests more updates!!! Harpo Tongwen yyds! It's really getting more and more interesting [laughs evilly]

As for this book, it seems to be very good so far. Even at the beginning, it was quite popular. Take Professor Magic for example. This book lacks a little bit of immersion in terms of description and details. However, it is quite funny and refreshing, with nothing poisonous. The plot is also very good. The author seems to have a lot of ideas and hopes that it will not be a failure.

The most interesting pure-blood book I have read so far. The protagonist is ambitious but not greedy. I like the character design very much. The "love" and "hate" between the Gemini and Snape made me laugh almost crazy. The old coins also wrote very close to the original. After reading this, I just want to say that even the donkeys of the production team dare not rest like this! Update! This is not good enough, it is so good www

Because of this Harry Potter fanfic, he successfully made me interested in [thinking about] the Harry Potter movies. One thing to say, it's really good to read. I'm also an old bookworm. I started reading male-video novels when I was 11 years old. It's been six years now [shy]. It's just that the author is a bit slow in updating. I've read several novels before, but it was because of the slow updating that I couldn't be bothered to read them in the end [face covering].

What should I say? [Thinking], it looks good. It's very interesting, the author's ideas are also very clear, and the storyline has some interesting and hilarious parts. Judging from the current content, it's very good. Worth a look. [OK]

Personally, I feel that overall it is quite good-looking. The book has a plot, and the writing made me want to read it. It is also funny from time to time. I think it is a good novel about Harry Potter fan fiction. Worth a look

This book is really one of my favorites. The characters in the novel are also very strong, especially Gekkot. At the beginning, he was just an ordinary little wizard in Hogwarts (well, maybe not ordinary). Under the guidance of his heart, he chose to go towards what people think. In the darkness, he also thought about whether what he did was right, but he remained firm in himself and resolutely led wizards of all generations to the light. The final ending made me couldn't help but imagine the world created by Gekkot, a world where wizards and Muggles live in harmony. Finally, I want to say, are you really not considering a follow-up? I will definitely go and see it hehehe

Dear author, you are great. I really like this fanfic. I have only watched the movie but not the original work, but I think your fanfic is very interesting. The name is very attractive to me. The layout is big and the goal is far-reaching. However, the protagonist's skill acquisition at the beginning is a little perfunctory. Unlike other people who have meaningful settings, you are just lucky and have companions to give you, but it is really useful. I hope you will continue to work hard and update every day. I love you.

It's super beautiful, ahhh, it's great, I kept laughing after reading it. I'm very picky about reading books and have read many Harry Potter novels. This is the best one I've read besides Snape! ! And the only one who can watch it! It's great, I hope it doesn't end badly! This is my first book review, it's so good!

This book is very confusing... The protagonist meets a big boss at the beginning of the chapter, but once they say goodbye, they never meet again (ahem) Emperor Ge and Deng Duoduo also became But… I couldn't resist the novelty of the plot, and the main character really poked my cuteness. He was strong and funny, unlike other HPs. Although there was no emotional drama from the main character, he showed his true feelings. I was locked out of school for several months and just came back. When I saw that the book was finished, I felt a little sad, because I really love the "childish" protagonist, the things he created, and his thoughts. Although the ending is unsatisfactory and has pitfalls, it is really interesting before the end and makes people think and pay attention. It is worth watching. (First long review)

A genre I've never seen before! The protagonist is different from pure evil and good. He puts interests first but never gets carried away by interests, nor is he controlled by the supreme power. He adheres to his own attitude towards doing things. He is neither a holy mother nor killing for no reason. He is more like a wise person in power! This is what the behind-the-scenes flow + the Dark Lord looks like. I hope the author can maintain such creative quality and don't care too much about the update speed. Quality is the only thing. I believe everyone will see the author's dedication, and I also ask the author to pay more attention to the audience's opinions [Hold]

I finished reading it in just a few days. It was quite good, but it felt a bit short. Some of the plots were very good. Each character had his or her own characteristics. The original characters' personalities and designs were very exciting. They were different from others I've seen. It was quite fun. The only thing I didn't feel good about was that the ending was too hasty. The sudden ending made me a little confused. I sincerely recommend that the author make more extra stories (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Yeah, very good (Hahahaha, I'm just so aloof. It's really good-looking. It's so good-looking. I like it so much. I hope you don't follow the example of my last book and take it off the shelves. I cried. I was so sad at the time. Oh, oh, oh, oh, if you hit me like this, I must have become a cold person. Hehe, oh, I'm really not a talkative [please taste it carefully] [grievance])

I was filled with emotion when I saw the end. Although I skipped a few pictures, the ones in the early stage were good-looking, so I didn't want them. I didn't feel like there was anything good about the gods in the later stage, so I just skipped them. Come on, author, this is the best HP novel I have ever seen [Blow Kiss]

[Admiration] Is the author gifted? This is my first time writing a book and I can write so well. . Wonderful thinking and sophisticated writing style. The logic is smooth. But there's a touch of politics and adult cunning. Generally speaking. A great article, please update it soon.

I gave it four stars because I think this book has shortcomings. If you think about it on the bright side, this book is still good, and you can feel the author's desire to express it. The writing is refreshing but has a refreshing feeling. But what's a pity is that the protagonist's methods and concepts of handling things are not the same as mine. For this reason, although it is enjoyable to read, it is always awkward. But most good writing is like this. Such as the original work. If the plot direction can be guessed at will, then it will lose most of its readability. As for the often-talked about bad endings and other plots, I think it's okay. This ending method is a common method for novellas. Because of this story structure, it was impossible for him to add too many words in the later stage. And as the content develops and the structure improves, the further you write it, the more things you need to calculate. On the contrary, it is easy to write very watery. It ends like this, leaving a feeling of unfinished business, leaving room for our imagination. From this point of view, the author's skills are very good. But many details are still not polished. For example, too many holes were dug in the middle and expanded too much, so that the final cleanup was hasty. Originally, this subject matter dictated that the protagonist's development space and time would be very small, and it could only be about a mid-length novel. (The subsequent addition of All Worlds was also a bit hasty) It feels a bit like forced expansion, but in the end it was ended hastily. If there is a sequel, you can read it again and evaluate it. From my personal point of view, the emotional relationship between the characters is a bit awkward, and the character development is also a bit awkward. Everyone feels it for themselves, and there won't be many guided evaluations. To sum up, I can give it between four and five stars. But prefer a score of four stars.