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It's a good book, very similar to Darkness Rising, but you can see the author's polish on the work between the lines. I hope it can be kept updated. I calculated that the author only needs to sleep for 6 hours a day, eat and rest for 2 hours, and there are 16 hours left. Calculated at 3k an hour, the normal daily update should be 30k+. I hope the author will update it until he dies!

Extremely well written, this is one of the best Pokémon books I've ever read. Hope to continue to work hard in the future.

I haven't seen such beautiful elf writing in a long time.

Very nice! It's just that no one recommends it, so the rating is a bit low, but if the author is great, I will help you recommend the book.

I feel that this book is lacking, so I originally planned to give it four stars, but since the author is so approachable and not easy to approach, I will give it one more heart, five stars [Thinking][Thinking] It turns out that the author still has to go to work, so I changed it to five stars.

So far, it's good, but it's too short. I hope the author can update it diligently. Another wish is that there should be no female protagonist, and there won't be any messy ambiguous objects and harems. Otherwise, it will be no different from other cool articles. I hope the author can not fall into the trap.

Keep this pace, a rare good article

It's pretty good, why is the rating so low? It's much better than some people who can even write the elf's characteristics wrongly.

The Arbor monster also has snake pattern changes and death makeup! ! ! The author's skills are very strong! ! !

I quite like this place so far, and I also particularly like the character of the protagonist. I would like to ask briefly, does he have a female protagonist? Is it possible? I have recently fallen in love with non-CP novels. It's really not possible. Can I get him a boyfriend? It's arrogant haha. (It doesn't matter if it's not possible. I'm very good at brainstorming. And I'm not specifically asking the author to write this. I'm just giving you a suggestion. What you say is what you're right🐶🐶🐶🐶)

It's super good-looking. The whole story is of a slightly dark kind. Although the protagonist is in darkness, he still has a little bit of conscience in his heart due to his past life. The protagonist's elves are not characters that often appear in elf fanfics, but the relationship between the protagonist and his elves is very deep. The overall style is more relaxed. The only regret is that there are a few, not enough to see! So the author is very diligent! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author is quite good-looking, and I feel that the marsupial's children are trained together. The small marsupials can be completely surprised in the later battles. I hope the author can catch a pet with the characteristics of a Hercules in the later stage, some larger tanks, and pets that like to run rampant and are more naive. Five-star praise~[shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

How should I put it, from the front, it is generally good. In the first 20 days, I was promoted to the Hall Master level. It feels a bit unrealistic, and some settings are slightly less rigorous. The villain's IQ seems a bit low, and the second-ranked rich boy doesn't seem to have much cultivation at all. I hope the author can create the character better. What I'm looking forward to is that the author can bring all the elves into super-evolved form in the future, and don't stick to the original work.

4.3 Points out of five. The beginning is a bit borrowed, but the author's ending is a bit sloppy, which is quite a pity. If I write more carefully, the time of 4:67 is also possible.

Come on, it's a very good story. I'm very optimistic about the author. I hope the author will update more.

It looks good and has changed my perception of Pokémon's strength. I used to think that rare means strong, but now it's completely different.

I have never read the book that is said to be very similar, so I can briefly tell you my feelings about this book. The previous chapters are very well written. Although the protagonist's words are sometimes a little stiff and the process of getting to the owner is a bit fast, the flaws are not concealed. The previous chapters are really well written and make people want to read them. The content in the middle and later stages of the book felt less spiritual, but I still saw the chapter where the author spoke. It's a pity that it couldn't be perfected, but it's understandable.

It's very beautiful. It talks about the cold-bloodedness of the past life and the warmth of this life. I hope the author can continue! [Sending Hearts]

The chapters are a bit short, I want to read them again

It's really too short, but it's very well written.

There is no praise for the heroine, and no indiscriminate killing of innocent people. I think there is nothing wrong with being kind, and being kind is not the same as being a virgin. I actually hate writing that is purely dark, but I think this book is actually pretty good and not dark.

Very interesting, I hope the author will continue to work hard. Nice. . .

There could be more updates. I forgot to rate it before, so I will add it to you this time and give you a reminder. Hurry up and update it, bro. One chapter is not enough. I've put it at the top of the gift list for you. Is there any book group?

Okay, this is the fifth good Pokémon novel I've read. It's really rare to find such a good Pokémon novel nowadays [face covering]

It's a very good book. I love it so much. I hope the author will write more. This is simply not enough. 🫶🏻❤️‍🔥

Come on! , Your time is limited, don't waste it repeating other people's lives. Don't let other people's opinions drown out your inner voice. Also, this book is so beautiful! (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.

It's a very good book. The main character, a native, is also a highlight. Abo's Strange Fire Form is very creative. Come on💪💪[smile][smile]

This book is very beautiful and the author writes it carefully.

Nice! A Pokémon novel + a dictionary of idioms!

Very nice, but the updates are too slow. I finished reading one chapter in one go. I highly recommend it.