Extreme**

I was deeply attracted after reading the first chapter. It is quite interesting to read. The protagonist is not a virgin. She is decisive in killing and has brains. She can also describe fighting scenes and drive. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]. It is good. It is worth watching~ [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sending my heart] Come on, author!

After reading a few chapters, this book is still okay. The male protagonist is not a virgin, he kills decisively, and the fight scenes are flesh and blood. I like the little junior sister in it the most. She is very cute. Overall, it is good-looking. Each one has its own characteristics. Come on [send heart][send heart]

How should I put it? In fact, this book is generally average, but in Tomato, it can be said to be pretty good. But this is the reason why it is here. I hope it can be more exciting in the future. The plot of this book always feels a bit flimsy and the characters need to be strengthened. But the author must have just started writing. It is actually good to have such results. Every good novel must go through accumulation and precipitation. Come on! I still support you very much

Not bad, but please forgive me for giving it a try.

You can have your body taken over by an immortal, like the Floating Immortal Order. The technique is the origin, and it is exciting.

It's okay, the writing is really good,

The division of realms is well established, but unfortunately the world view does not have a sense of transcendence, and it lacks the elegance of fairy spirits. It makes you feel that this is a martial arts book. It would be much better to appropriately expand the mainland elements outside the boundary.