Harry Potter: Butterfly Storm

Let me emphasize that the male protagonist of this book is Sri Lanka. Now the protagonists have just entered school. Although they are pseudo-children, they still look like toddlers, so the emotional scenes must be at least after the third grade. You can still find something to enjoy between the lines in the previous words. I'm very happy to see you urging the update. I want to create a very good heroine. People in the book will love her, and you will love her for it, so every plot needs to be polished carefully. For example, I changed Chapter 23 many times. Four thousand words will be updated every day. I will add more if I am inspired to write more (gu...). Finally, thank you very much for your love, hmm 😘. Quietly give yourself a five-star rating 😎

I really like this setting and love the heroine, but why is she like that in her heart? (☍⁰) I hope the professor can make the heroine really come alive. The author loves you ꒰づ≧ω≦ づ꒱~♡ I like this article very much. This is my first time to write a review. ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅThe charm of the heroine: strong in the bones, educated in words and deeds, tolerant in relationships, and kind in the heart. Keep writing (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

That is to say, the whole love letter in a dream belongs to the heroine setting and it is really hard not to love it. Mature but not obtrusive. The tone of each sentence is well grasped. The concept of the meeting has both advantages and disadvantages, so it is more real. It's idealistic but makes everyone yearn for it. I think it's well written. There are very few redundant words and redundant words in the sentences. The detailed description of the heroine does not seem awkward at all and does not force the halo of the protagonist. When reading, you will feel the softness of the moonlight and the charm of the heroine. It can be seen that the author's writing style is well-founded. I rarely read the early foreshadowing stories, but the plot development of this book is also very suitable to my liking. I hope that the description of the relationship with Sif will be detailed and natural. I am very much looking forward to it at the moment. That's all I can think of about book reviews, and I may publish more in the future. In addition, the author should put the description of the character's expressions and actions before and during the speech behind what the character says. It may be a bit confusing at first, but you can quickly react and adapt. 5.21: The heroine is worthy of being Grindelwald's daughter. The chapter that confuses Bella is amazing. It's rare to see this kind of heroine's character and the description is very accurate. I also sincerely hope that our little moon can also have its own light and truly love herself.

My favorite HP fanfic, bar none! [I learned that] the article is very logical, it is a cycle, a closed loop, and complete. The image of the protagonist is also very well created, including Anna's calmness before dying, the tangle of Sijiao in the first half, etc., Which are all very three-dimensional. My GGAD dream has come true! [Laughs] [Laughs] This is the first time I have seen the two parallel worlds in the extra story. It is both funny and redemptive, and it gives everyone a sense of perfection. Highly recommended! 💕💕💕

Hold high the GGAD banner! The personality charm of the heroine is well described, making people feel that she is indeed the daughter of Grindelwald and Dumbledore. Although the relationship with the professor is just a friendship now, it is still very interesting ~ I look forward to its future development.

Very good subject matter, the plot is really exciting! Overthrow the concept of pure blood. There is no difference between those who insist on being aloof and ordinary people. Why should they be divided into three, six or nine levels? These ideas are just to put others down and make themselves appear more superior. The author's words are really burning!!!! Love it!

这是我看过的最好看的斯教的同人文，这本书让我觉得安娜和西弗的爱情就是真的，虽然斯教带着记忆重生，但是他对莉莉的感情放下得很合理。安娜和西弗的感情之中完全看不见任何不合理的女主光环，西弗就是在长久的陪伴中被安娜的人格魅力所吸引的。人物塑造也很立体，书中角色也没有ooc的情况。 但是我觉得可能对老蜜蜂有一丢丢的美化（没有说校长不好的意思，但在我的认知中阿不思确实没有本书中那么无害，当时斯教对邓布利多的那句“那我的灵魂呢？”真的让我记了好久，现在也没法忘，一直耿耿于怀，但我是理解并认可老蜜蜂的，毕竟我想不到更好的解决办法，只是依旧很心疼斯教罢了。） 总而言之，言而总之这是一本我觉得非常棒的书，毕竟很少有同人文能够让我真情实感。最后： ggad是真的！！！

The writing is so good, so perfect, so touching 😢 Although I really want to know some more detailed plots of Dawn Islands, but the author is right, that would deviate a little from the original content of the story, which is good. Dumbledore and Grindelwald were able to let go of the past and retire together so happily 😢 The relationship with Snape really came naturally without any discomfort. Snape's life was too bitter. Anna saved him and pulled him out of the darkness and pain in his new life. Then Snape did not hesitate to cling to Lily, let go of the past calmly, bravely faced his feelings, and gave his sincerity to Anna without reservation. This book did not leave any regrets. Anna did it perfectly! One hundred points for Slytherin!

It's really good and more unique than any Harry Potter fanfic I've seen. My Fate Albus and Grindelwald "The roses in Godric's Hollow only bloom for two months, and there is no summer in Nurmengard surrounded by snowy mountains."

Sijiao's love is extraordinary. As a little snake, he is absolutely supportive of his dean ヾ(◍ ° ㉨ ° ◍)ﾉﾞ, but this fanfic has changed my love for him 😏. As expected, Sijiao's charm after washing his hair is unmatched 😳😳