Xuanhuan's Great Villain: The System Forces Me to Win Over the Heroine

Author,,, are you sure you are writing about the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor,,, and not the rebirth of a waste? ,, You need combat power but not talent,,, You have to work hard to get some luck points, but you end up using them all,,, Used them in fighting with the son of luck who is lower than your own realm,,,, Used to practice a rubbish magical power,,, An immortal emperor is reborn with a rubbish magical power,,, It took two months to practice to get started,,,, Author, you can calculate it yourself,,,, How much luck points did the protagonist spend to cultivate a rubbish magical power? ,,, Author, are you sure that the protagonist you wrote is the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor, and not better than a waste?

First of all, the protagonist is not evil enough. If you want to write a character with a righteous character, please write the Dragon King with a crooked smile. The villain should be evil and lewd. It's really fun to watch (`Δ´)! Secondly, the division of realms looks very uncomfortable. Either divide them according to the traditional realms in the past, or if you want to innovate, please refer to the big guys. For example, Chen Dong's division of realms is very wonderful and does not look so abrupt. I have only read a few chapters. Guess what I saw? Damn it, these three words "Supreme Realm" make you look like little Luo Luo. No matter which novel these three words "Supreme Realm" are used in? They are all capped existences, and they only cost a few cents, but they have no sense of existence here. Tell me, if you think of a person who is higher than the Supreme Realm, how many more words can you write?

You said it in the first episode, he is the reborn Immortal Emperor, why doesn't he know the previous spells and so on? You're quite funny

Alas, I don't know if I inherited the anger from the previous book or if I just became angry just reading it. I always advocate giving her the most sincere evaluation after reading the book, so that I can live up to my time reading and not be wronged by the author's painstaking coding. Moreover, the author is willing to communicate with readers at the end of the chapter, and I will also write a good book review. Alas, let's start by complaining that the system settings are too sloppy. The missions given are miscellaneous and alienated from the host. The sense of existence is extremely low. The strategies for the heroine and the heroine are even more sloppy. There is neither long-term love nor active pursuit. In this way, the bond between the villain and the heroine is pitiful. There is no psychological description in favorability, it is all about contrast and background description. In the absence of the loyalty setting given by the strong system, the heroine who is already bound to the protagonist of Destiny still retains the protagonist he liked in the past to a certain extent, whether it is a little girl who was taken away by the old routine or someone who planted a slave mark and killed her with her own hands. Throughout the whole text, these two princesses are the ones they love. The villain has just become the substitute in their hearts, and the villain also left enough face for the two protagonists. The former got the approval of the old man and recognized the villain, while the latter had a sad love ending. I can only say that what you have written after the first hundred chapters is not a peerless villain who steps on the protagonist and seizes the heroine's opportunity. It is more like a clown. To sum up, this person is not a villain, but just another ordinary protagonist who has been reincarnated. The system is just the icing on the cake. Write a protagonist story. A villain story is not suitable for this kind of development. The villain is the stumbling block and stepping stone for the protagonist, not a competitor on the same road. The two characters are walking in opposite directions.

A dignified Immortal Emperor is as good as a mortal. To suppress the Child of Destiny realm, you need to use props. Where did all the combat experience you gained along the way to become an Immortal Emperor go? Were you born an Immortal Emperor in your last life? Are there no low-level skills and magical powers? In your last life, did you lie down in the sun and awaken a sign-in system to become the Immortal Emperor?

Give me five stars and grab the male protagonist's woman, 😉😉

If you don't write about the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor, it's just so-so. If you directly write the Supreme Immortal Emperor in the center of the universe as a diaosi, it's too poisonous 😂

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that it was really cool. You are a reborn Immortal Emperor. I can understand that your strength needs to start all over again. I also understand that if you have low luck, you can't kill the children of luck randomly. But can the author have some vision and structure? The male protagonist just asks the system if he doesn't know anything. You are an Immortal Emperor and you don't even have any vision? It's really stupid. An Immortal Emperor who has probably lived for hundreds of thousands of years doesn't understand anything. He asks the system about everything. Is the system your father? The author is fucking outrageous, the male protagonist he portrayed has no vision or means.

This Immortal Emperor failed too much.

Please, what the hell are you the reincarnation of the Immortal Emperor? Don't know any magic at all? What is the difference between being reborn as a mortal?