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Good-looking 1. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. 2. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions. It is enjoyable to read. 3. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. 4. This composition uses novel materials, wonderful ideas, and vivid language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines. 5. The article describes the events of... In the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the level is clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end. 6. The full text has a lively rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read. 7. The narrative of the whole text is concentrated, without branches or branches, the language is simple and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching. 8. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It makes you put it down after reading it. 9. The author has a clever conception, is good at selecting points to expand on, and the writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking. 10. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article. . . . Gone Okay, finally a few more reviews

As a novice novel, it is considered qualified, but the author forgot one thing. Most people who read this book have read Sword Art Online, and have rewatched all the comics and anime that I love several times. As the young lady of a big family, Asuna's heart is not easily broken. Just like what Asuna said when forming a team: she does not want to slowly rot in the hotel, even if she loses to a monster and dies, she must maintain herself. I feel like I fell in love with the protagonist out of nowhere, and the protagonist behaves a bit like a crazy person. Asuna opened her heart to someone she only knew for a few days without any precautions. She said, "Sister, protect him for me." It's strange that Asuna doesn't keep her distance from the protagonist. As for my sister, the dark elf princess and Lisbeth, I also know that the author must write a harem novel. I am not opposed to a harem novel. I just hope that the author will slow down the pace a little, otherwise it will not become a mindless harem novel. I will withdraw it first and leave a 5-star review. It will be regarded as a reward for the author's hard work in coding. It is an objective review. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

My own book, the first one. Family members, let me explain here that I cannot reply to many comments one by one. Please forgive me. If you have any questions, please leave them in the comments at the end of the chapter. I will reply promptly when I see them. Regarding the content of this book, I would like to emphasize again that this book is Kirito's "harem novel". If you don't like reading harem novels, you can just leave. This book is about the first season. Before writing, I consulted a lot of information. I have not changed the rigid settings in it. However, because it is a fan fiction, I will not completely copy the plot, nor will I completely deviate from the plot, so I will change some settings, and there will be some magical changes. Please understand. It's okay to write a negative review in a book review, and I won't delete the negative review. After all, this is my first time writing a sword fan fiction, and I know it's not good. However, regarding various aspects, especially the rigid settings, please read more of the original work and watch the animation of the first season before posting. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to my family members who have been supporting and encouraging me [love] [love]. Especially the readers who have been following this book for a long time and have been following it until now [blowing kiss][blowing kiss], I will always remember you, and thank you very, very, very much for your support [love][love]! !

Write well, it's okay to read, keep up the good work

Big cheers for the author! Sword fan fiction is very well written! Support you!

Hmm, I've always wanted to read a sword fanfic and finally someone wrote it [Love]

It's good. I've been looking for sword fan fiction recently, but I haven't found any good ones. This is the best one I've ever read. This is my highest praise. Please forgive me for my incompetence. Finally, come on, author.

Not bad, come on, author

Too short! Too short!

I just watched the first part of the Attack arc today, Aria of a Starless Night. The memory goes back to 12 years. I miss my youth and regret so much. Alas, youth is gone forever, and Asuna is still so young. I'm already Mediterranean [crying]

Will you always have two names from now on?

Come on, this novel is written according to the anime, otherwise Asuna and Kirito wouldn't have met while fighting the boss. The first chapter of the Attack chapter tells how Kirito met Asuna when he was killing monsters, but it's okay. I want to see a chapter of the Attack chapter where Kirito wears a brave swimsuit (I forgot the specific color).

Not bad, considering that in the real world it would be better to have a single female protagonist! Even if there are multiple heroines, Asuna should be the first one to confirm their relationship.

There are some good ones and some bad ones. Let me give you four stars first [laughing evilly]

... Is this going to be a eunuch? It's hard to find a fan of this harem style swordsman

Strange, why is it only rated 6.7 When it looks so good? [What][What][What]

Very nice, cheers author

Okay, okay, this is a novel that touches my heart, I hope to continue writing it

Come on! Very good fanfic

Five-star review, young man, I think you are the best. I update more than a hundred chapters every day.

The first sword fanfic I read on Tomato, come on

Come on, author, this book is great

Author, where have you been? Are you missing? ? ?

It looks good, don't let it suck! ! [Eat melon]

Come on, come on, come on

When the swords of black and white cross, I make a wish at this moment to protect you and each other forever.

Finally found a good Sword Art Online fanfic, I hope it's not a eunuch

This is a rare Grandpa Sword Tong series with a wonderful plot, and the author's imagination is reasonable and interesting.

The writing is very good, the characterization is relatively good, and there is no unreasonable plot. The author continues to maintain it and is optimistic about you.

The author is not enthusiastic enough to read it.