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The novel is rated 8.5--9 Points. It is very interesting, the subject matter is very novel, and the storyline is compact and exciting. However, there are some flaws. The male protagonist was very calm and polite towards Qinglian before, but suddenly he became more sophisticated and caring, which was a bit abrupt. It would be nice to set the stage in the previous chapters and not be so polite and distant. The writing in the first chapters is a bit rough and a bit watery, but the later chapters are much better. Come on, author! I like this novel very much. The subject matter is very novel and the article is very fluent! [Like][Like]

What can I say about this book? The writing on Zhu Xian is very good. You may need to fast forward to be able to fight. The first part of Zhu Xian's world is very rushed, but after the Seven Meridians Martial Arts Competition, the plot becomes more interesting. The whole OB plus key moments of action are very suitable for the yy of the majority of Zhu Xian fans. The setting of the main world is not interesting. It is better to go directly to the system to write specifically about Zhu Xian.

Well written, the plot is compact and organized

Okay, pretty good

It's okay, I hope the author will continue writing

Not bad, keep up the good work! ! !

Overall fresh ideas

The subject matter of the book is okay, but the author's writing style needs to be improved [exploration] [currently in progress]

Good luck, keep updating, don't stop updating! Why do so many people like to stop updating?

It looks good, and it feels like the development is a bit like Swallowing the Starry Sky which is not bad [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Not bad, the plot is coherent and there are few disjoints.