A game that had been utterly unremarkable during its closed beta underwent a massive transformation when it launched. Wei Zi'an was astonished to discover that everything in the game was real, and he had become one of the pioneers on Blue Star!
The Myriad Worlds aid my cultivation. Five-colored divine light, I soar on my sword and sing!
Seeker [B-rank Class. Seekers are devoted apprentices of the Rules who heed their teachings. For every level gained, players receive 0.7 Spirit, 0.7 Mana, and 0.2 Constitution.]
Ding! Congratulations, player, on completing the class advancement quest. You have obtained the S-rank class: Cultivator!
A very good novel, but the author is a bit short [laughter]
Damn, it's really good-looking. I highly recommend it. I think the author can write some opportunities for the protagonist, something bigger. I feel that the protagonist can surpass ordinary players by a big level.
The writing is good, but after reading the latest chapter, I feel that the author has begun to deliberately suppress the realm of the protagonist. Your writing style has a lot of starting points. I can't say it is not good, but for me it feels unsatisfactory. From the beginning, I thought it was a masterpiece, but the result is still the same.
Hiss, the writing is good, both in terms of spiritual practice and characterization, but the writing is a bit messy. It can be slightly optimized and the background settings of some organizations and characters are more detailed. Then this book will score at least 9.2 Points.
It's pretty good, but the game system's functionality is too low, the experience settings are superfluous, and the story background and character relationships are not clearly explained, and the protagonist's aura is not good either, but overall it's okay and the ideas are good.
Just so-so, it feels like the protagonist is being deliberately put down. There are also temporary additions (such as the Five Elements Sect fight) that make it feel like The Riddler. There is also a typo, deducting points for whether it is a true immortal or a half-immortal. Blurred! No sense of immersion at all. Lots of narration. Novels like this are usually read more carefully. But the author is not very careful!
I hope the protagonist's level is higher. I always get pushed down 🤦
No need to join an organization
Not bad, not bad, quite nice, by the way, fire tongs Liu Ming 😏
One word is beautiful