Pirates: Lead the Akatsuki Organization in the Beginning and Make a Big Fuss at the Top

The disadvantage is that it is too short

It looks good, the character design is not too broken, and the combat power system is not broken either. You must know that in other novels, Kaido was directly killed, not caring about the characteristics of ninjas with high attack and low defense. Everyone is fine. If you don't want to watch the supporting pads, you can just watch it. It won't affect the viewing experience. People will inevitably have a preference for some characters, and there is no need to say the Virgin. Everyone who should be killed was killed. The protagonist didn't want to kill the Golden Emperor, so he killed him in the end. I really like Akatsuki. They have distinct personalities and have things they want to pursue, so I came to find fanfics. After all, people who like them will feel regretful when they see the ending of the original work.

Author, hurry up

The author's writing is wonderful, keep it up [like][like] Always support the author [learned][learned][learned][learned]

It's a bit slow. Why haven't you summoned some other people from the Akatsuki organization?

If you don't love me, please don't hurt me, thank you. [Laughs] Regarding the issue of the protagonist, the Virgin, why do you think I am not the Virgin? Not killing the navy? ? ? What is this point of view? ? As soon as the protagonist travels through time, he must first kill hundreds of thousands of people to prove something? ? ? Pay attention to the positioning of the protagonist in the first two chapters, and then be patient and read on. Killing is killing, and your position must be clear, right? Stop using the Holy Mother to explain things. I don't want to explain anymore. I'm really tired.

How can I put it this way? The plot is very well written. I feel that the author would be great if he wrote urban novels or fantasy. However, in fanfiction, especially multi-world ones, it is difficult to balance the combat power. Also, I feel that the author does not know these two anime very well. This is a suggestion, not a leverage.

It's very beautiful, why are there so few people watching it?

This horse-riding book is simply a sacred book. It makes my blood boil when I read it.

The author will listen to readers' opinions, and the plot is also very good.

The protagonist is a bit 🤢. At the Golden Emperor, because he wanted to save the gamblers, he fought with the Golden Emperor, causing the boat to overturn. The protagonist didn't save them, so why bother? You also know that those people are gamblers, and they know they are evil people, so why bother to save them? Hope it can be optimized later But the author is looking carefully at readers' comments.

Since Momonosuke is dead, he must be given full stars, okay?

Not bad. Keep up the good work and write more wonderfully.

They are all five or four stars, so why do the ratings keep dropping?

Hey, Xiao Di is very cute and writes well!

Not bad, worth recommending [laughing evilly]

Killing Momonosuke requires five stars.

Don't write in a hurry. Just make it exciting and write one chapter a day.

Summon other members of the Akatsuki organization as soon as possible

The writing is very good, I just hope the Akatsuki characters will come out faster.

The content is very exciting

Good Death Momonosuke

Big cheers for the author

Very good. When Momo assists in death, it must be five stars.

For the sake of Momonosuke's death, I'll give it five stars [laughing]

Please support me. I still like this kind of subject. I hope I can write about it.

Super exciting, much better than the other book. The important thing is that it is always updated.

You can see it, it's pretty good

There doesn't seem to be much of a problem so far

It restored my dream. The author wrote so well. But I still feel like something is missing