Lu Yi collapsed on the ground, his enthusiasm spreading all over the earth, his consciousness gradually weakened, and pictures and thoughts appeared in his mind.
Is reading good?
Has studying made me successful or ruined my bright future?
Am I doing this right?
You have read more or less books, but do you dare to tell the truth?
Reader comments
First, the author briefly introduces the book. Because the plot requires it, the rest of the book will definitely focus on the harem.
Many people also question why the author set the heroines' minds to be like a dog-licking one. As soon as the protagonist comes out, it doesn't take long for the friendship to break through. This kind of plot is not very comfortable for everyone to watch. Please be patient and look forward to the follow-up plot, which will be explained one by one later.
The second is Lu Yi's route. The author can only say that it will partially overlap with Luo Feng. After all, the map is the same, but the rise route is definitely different. We are Lu Yi, not Luo Feng.
As for some people saying that I changed things, please read the plot carefully. In the beginning of my article, I wrote about the role of space gems when eating the spirit of plants and trees in cultivation. You didn't even read it, and you just made outrageous comments.
Another dear reader mentioned that the author writes the plot too fast, so of course I also noticed the comment of dear reader. This book hopes that the parts that overlap with the original work will be less described. After all, there is too much written, and it is the route of the original work.
The author will focus on Lu Yi's future and stories from other territories. I believe you will also see hints in the details. There are also wonderful experiences in the future universe...
Finally, I welcome everyone's kind comments and suggestions. The author's current income is less than ten yuan a day, all thanks to the power of love and everyone's support! [Love][Love][Send heart][Send heart]
The writing is quite good, but it doesn't follow the route of the original Luo Feng. I hope it will be maintained in the future. It seems to be very good so far.
The first chapter touched me very much. It was well written and the writing style was okay. I will follow it to see the follow-up.
The writing style and the connection of the plot are at least not a big problem. Some books are not very comfortable to read and the plot cannot be connected. The plot of this book is not bad. The harem is a bit early, and the early stage should be mainly about fighting, but it's not bad. [Like][Like][Request for more updates][Request for more updates]
Looks good, but a little loose
What you, the author, wrote is not a web article. It is a narrative of feelings after viewing. . After reading a few chapters, I really didn't realize this was a novel.
The writing is quite good, but I didn't follow Luo Feng's route.
Good looking. Cheers, author.
I originally felt that the harem story was discordant, but seeing that the author was willing to explain it seriously, I thought it would still be a five-star review.
First, the author briefly introduces the book. Because the plot requires it, the rest of the book will definitely focus on the harem. Many people also question why the author set the heroines' minds to be like a dog-licking one. As soon as the protagonist comes out, it doesn't take long for the friendship to break through. This kind of plot is not very comfortable for everyone to watch. Please be patient and look forward to the follow-up plot, which will be explained one by one later. The second is Lu Yi's route. The author can only say that it will partially overlap with Luo Feng. After all, the map is the same, but the rise route is definitely different. We are Lu Yi, not Luo Feng. As for some people saying that I changed things, please read the plot carefully. In the beginning of my article, I wrote about the role of space gems when eating the spirit of plants and trees in cultivation. You didn't even read it, and you just made outrageous comments. Another dear reader mentioned that the author writes the plot too fast, so of course I also noticed the comment of dear reader. This book hopes that the parts that overlap with the original work will be less described. After all, there is too much written, and it is the route of the original work. The author will focus on Lu Yi's future and stories from other territories. I believe you will also see hints in the details. There are also wonderful experiences in the future universe... Finally, I welcome everyone's kind comments and suggestions. The author's current income is less than ten yuan a day, all thanks to the power of love and everyone's support! [Love][Love][Send heart][Send heart]
The writing is quite good, but it doesn't follow the route of the original Luo Feng. I hope it will be maintained in the future. It seems to be very good so far. The first chapter touched me very much. It was well written and the writing style was okay. I will follow it to see the follow-up. The writing style and the connection of the plot are at least not a big problem. Some books are not very comfortable to read and the plot cannot be connected. The plot of this book is not bad. The harem is a bit early, and the early stage should be mainly about fighting, but it's not bad. [Like][Like][Request for more updates][Request for more updates]
Looks good, but a little loose
What you, the author, wrote is not a web article. It is a narrative of feelings after viewing. . After reading a few chapters, I really didn't realize this was a novel.
The writing is quite good, but I didn't follow Luo Feng's route.
Good looking. Cheers, author.
I originally felt that the harem story was discordant, but seeing that the author was willing to explain it seriously, I thought it would still be a five-star review.