The Gentle Passerby of the System

I don't understand what the Holy Mother is. Is the Holy Mother a derogatory term or a complimentary term? When the heroine helps others, she never drags down anyone. She always helps others within the scope of her own ability. She does not use her thoughts to ask others, and she does not ask anyone to be kind. Why is she the Virgin? Is kindness a mistake? Maybe the heroine I wrote is not strong enough compared to the heroines in other novels. But my heroine has always been just an ordinary person. It's just that in the novel world, she has her own persistence and her own bottom line. She has a system where she can start over, which gives her courage. And the heroine's mission in this world is to protect the Son of Destiny. Life is very hard, so when writing novels, I want my heroine to be a warm person, and I hope that everyone who is not treated well will be illuminated by a beam of light.

I have read dozens of chapters, and I think it is quite interesting so far. How could I make the author so angry? As a bookworm of nearly 10 years, there are no major flaws in the first few dozen chapters I have read. There are some minor flaws, but they are not major problems. For a novice author, the writing is pretty good, and it's not too fancy, so it suits my taste. I generally don't write reviews on serialized books. I'm afraid that my critical eye will make the author angry. Of course, my review is relatively fair and not too extreme, with too much praise or too much criticism. After all, my lowest rating for the book so far is three stars. Of course, the biggest problem may be that the heroine's character may be different from the gentle character in the introduction, but the problem is not that big. When writing the article, it is impossible to limit the heroine's character, and there is no black and white character. All in all, this book's rating is really low. It's too harsh on a serialized book. There are greater possibilities for the plot and writing behind the serialization itself. One star negative review is indeed a bit much. It is not easy for the author to write, so he should be more tolerant and encouraging. Maybe the author will adopt gentler suggestions and write better articles later. These five stars are to encourage the author. After all, what you wrote before is really good. Four stars are practical, and one star is to encourage you to have greater possibilities. It's best to calm down and write according to your own ideas and original intentions. Don't care too much about other people's opinions. We can learn some lessons from other people's opinions, but don't let other people's opinions affect you. Come on!

After reading this book, I felt the complexity of human nature

The heroine is gentle, smart and good-looking

I don't understand at all. Is this book cp-free or something? If there is no cp, are there too many love lines? If there is a CP, is it Chu Xu or Qing Luo? (The above are just my personal opinions and questions, please don't comment) I hope the author can solve my doubts, thank you [blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful. I haven't seen such a gentle heroine for a long time.

The author has updated it a lot and I can't get enough of it. I hope the heroine Dumei won't fall in love with anyone, but the task is still very important. After all, she can resurrect her mother, so the two destined sons must be well protected. Has the author traveled through time? ? ? ? Not updated yet? Are you writing when you get back? I really want to read it. Please come back and update it soon. I have no more books to read.

The story is very exciting, and the characters are also very unique. I hope the author will update it soon, rush rush

Is there a male protagonist? Which one is it?

So what, can anyone tell me which chapter the male protagonist learned that his savior was not Lao Zixi but Rouya?

There are a lot of typos and incorrect sentences, and the punctuation marks also made me uncomfortable reading it, but I like the plot very much, so I reluctantly give it four stars. As long as the author can correct the typos, incorrect sentences, and punctuation marks, then this will definitely be a good book worthy of my five stars.

I like this book so much, Rouya is so gentle, The author can update it more quickly, it's not enough [I'm about to cry]

Well written and wonderful Wonderfully written.

The old cultivator and bookworm said that he highly recommends it. The heroine is really super gentle. Who can not be attracted to this person! Always surrender to gentleness and kindness

Author, please don't write a sadistic novel. Even if you can't fall in love, you still want the heroine to live happily! Please 🙏

It's very well written, thank you to the author💪

It looks good, but who is the official consort of the heroine, Chu Xu or Qing Luo?

I still like the female protagonist's character, but the male protagonist must be Qing Luo!

Very well written and very beautiful!

I really like the gentle heroine

Does the author's heroine have a CP? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I want to ask if there is a male protagonist! Is there any cp?

I really like this kind of subject matter, but there aren't many novels

Who is the hero! ! ! ! ! I want Chu Xu! ! ! ! The heroine, don't be tempted by Qing Luo! The heroine and Chu Xu are a perfect match! ! ! !

The heroine is very gentle and has a bottom line. Lan tide is so annoying. When will she be offline?

I don't understand why this book's rating is so low. The heroine is a little gentle but not too hhh which is good

It's pretty good now that I've seen it, the plot is reasonable, the characters are outstanding, and the literary talent is pretty good.

It's really good-looking, I really like the heroine's character, she's gentle [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

The heroine is great, I like it so much😍, thank you so much for the author!

Not bad, very in line with my taste