Bite! System binding!
"What is the sound? Did my kidneys hear it? It's impossible. I have always adhered to the scientific method of four times a month."
Bite! The dimensional shuttle system is bound successfully].
"What the hell, here we go again? Wait a minute, system? Are you the system? The one who can change people's lives against the will of heaven?" Jiang Chen, as a loyal reader of novels, the system has long been engraved into his DNA.
Bite! Yes]
"Hahahahahaha, it's true that I don't have any auditory hallucinations with the system. Please tell me what functions it has. Isn't it awesome?"
[Ding! I am a dimensional shuttle system that allows the host to travel between various worlds].
"What the hell, are you so awesome? After all, there really are all heavens and realms. I thought it was from YY."
"But let me tell you something, the system is too stretched, ding ding ding."
Bite! Damn, you think I want it? Isn't this the program here?]
"Huh, you have quite a temper. By the way, do you have any of those things in the system? It's the ones in the novels at the beginning, the novice gift pack and so on. I don't mind those two.
Reader comments
Come on, give you full marks,
Author, I hope your style will remain unchanged. I haven't seen a chat group of this style for a long time. Nowadays, people are either cheating or talking to themselves. I haven't seen this kind of chat group style in various dimensional chat groups for a long time [face covering], so I especially hope you can work hard and don't end it. Of course, the biggest thing is that this style should not change [almost crying] first give me five stars to express my expectations [send heartfelt]
Why is the rating so low?
Author, you have to think of yourself as a member of the production team. Write quickly, I'm anxious to read [laughing]
Elf Dream Ye Luoli (Wang Mo), Winx Club (Leier), Digimon (Iori Yagami), Pokémon (Lisanna) can be written
Author, you are finally back, it's not easy
Yes, it's just that the protagonist's character is too bad in some aspects. .
If someone else has a system and it has greatly changed their life, even if they regard the system as a "noble person" in their life, they will not scold them casually. They feel that they deserve the same [face covering]
The rest of it is okay, the writing is not clever, but there are not too many poisonous points. Although many characters are gone, for a novel world with a multiverse, everything is possible, which means there must be such a world. (After all, it is impossible for everyone in the multiverse to be the same and do the same thing at the same time. Such a multiverse is 💩)
Are you gone? No way! No way! [Stare]
What is it called Shuangwen? This is a really cool article. It deserves five-star reviews. The author should update it soon!
It felt pretty good at the beginning. After watching 22 episodes, the great elder felt a little disgusted with the real medicine. I didn't want to watch it anymore. Forget it, give it three stars. I didn't watch it. I don't know. Suddenly, I didn't want to watch it. What did the great elder say? Oh, it feels quite awkward, that's how it feels to me.
To make a digression, isn't this type of chat group our fantasy cultivating immortality? Why are they all two-dimensional anime (except Marvel, anime or Japanese comics)? Is it because our domestic animation is not worthy? Isn't it worthy of practicing fantasy and immortality? (Of course, this book is still good, unlike those that fool around)
I'm talking about most of them
Come on, author, [laughing evilly]
It looks good, but where did the author die?
The knife is not sharp and the horse is too thin. You are not worthy to fight with me.
A very good book, but the author had no money and went to work [face covering]
Some places feel a little bit watery
In fact, Susanoo is really not bad. To put it bluntly, Susanoo is a skill. The more energy you put into it, the stronger it becomes, and the more powerful the Susanoo becomes. For example, if the protagonist has a level 4 explosion star and all his energy is invested in it, then Susana should be as big as the sun. You can imagine how powerful it is.
Not bad, the plot is not dragging out anymore, and then the world changes without feeling unfamiliar, the pace is also very fast, and the outline seems to have been written, I think I haven't finished 1/5 yet. The author has something good, he always feels good where he should feel good, alas, there are not many bad things, it is very comfortable.
Overall, it's okay, and the negative reviews are right. The relationship between the characters, their positions, and the various systems are not well written, and they get along too harmoniously, but there is a feeling of disharmony.
This is a very good book, very interesting, why is it rated so low?
Come on, welcome back
There has been no update for two days. The author has probably been found by his family and locked up in a small dark room. Let's get out of here! [Thinking][Laughing evilly]
It's super pretty, please update it soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I hope the author will follow you soon. My bookshelf is completely empty.
I give you five stars as an encouragement. Remember to take a look when you post the article. If possible, you'd better find a time when you have enough time to revise the first and second chapters, but the plot and the like. Of course I know this will be very tiring, but if you want your book to be a work with a score of 9 or above, there are many places in your book that need to be changed or deleted. If you don't change or delete, it will never break through the 9 score. This is my suggestion, or you can start another book.
Just for the gastrointestinal world, I will give you five stars.
I feel this book is pretty good. If the author can write 10 chapters in one day, I will give you 5 stars for the whole 10 chapters.
The story of each world is well told, but I feel like there is something wrong with the power, but I can't tell it.
The author has updated it very quickly. This is not enough. Let me tell you, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Please update it quickly.
I understand the author's feeling of wanting the ending to be unfinished, but you don't need this kind of ending. It's so uncomfortable...
This is only chapter 55, and even the donkeys in the production team can't rest that well.
Come on, give you full marks,
Author, I hope your style will remain unchanged. I haven't seen a chat group of this style for a long time. Nowadays, people are either cheating or talking to themselves. I haven't seen this kind of chat group style in various dimensional chat groups for a long time [face covering], so I especially hope you can work hard and don't end it. Of course, the biggest thing is that this style should not change [almost crying] first give me five stars to express my expectations [send heartfelt]
Why is the rating so low?
Author, you have to think of yourself as a member of the production team. Write quickly, I'm anxious to read [laughing]
Elf Dream Ye Luoli (Wang Mo), Winx Club (Leier), Digimon (Iori Yagami), Pokémon (Lisanna) can be written
Author, you are finally back, it's not easy
Yes, it's just that the protagonist's character is too bad in some aspects. . If someone else has a system and it has greatly changed their life, even if they regard the system as a "noble person" in their life, they will not scold them casually. They feel that they deserve the same [face covering] The rest of it is okay, the writing is not clever, but there are not too many poisonous points. Although many characters are gone, for a novel world with a multiverse, everything is possible, which means there must be such a world. (After all, it is impossible for everyone in the multiverse to be the same and do the same thing at the same time. Such a multiverse is 💩)
Are you gone? No way! No way! [Stare]
What is it called Shuangwen? This is a really cool article. It deserves five-star reviews. The author should update it soon! It felt pretty good at the beginning. After watching 22 episodes, the great elder felt a little disgusted with the real medicine. I didn't want to watch it anymore. Forget it, give it three stars. I didn't watch it. I don't know. Suddenly, I didn't want to watch it. What did the great elder say? Oh, it feels quite awkward, that's how it feels to me.
To make a digression, isn't this type of chat group our fantasy cultivating immortality? Why are they all two-dimensional anime (except Marvel, anime or Japanese comics)? Is it because our domestic animation is not worthy? Isn't it worthy of practicing fantasy and immortality? (Of course, this book is still good, unlike those that fool around) I'm talking about most of them
Come on, author, [laughing evilly]
It looks good, but where did the author die?
The knife is not sharp and the horse is too thin. You are not worthy to fight with me.
A very good book, but the author had no money and went to work [face covering]
Some places feel a little bit watery
In fact, Susanoo is really not bad. To put it bluntly, Susanoo is a skill. The more energy you put into it, the stronger it becomes, and the more powerful the Susanoo becomes. For example, if the protagonist has a level 4 explosion star and all his energy is invested in it, then Susana should be as big as the sun. You can imagine how powerful it is.
Not bad, the plot is not dragging out anymore, and then the world changes without feeling unfamiliar, the pace is also very fast, and the outline seems to have been written, I think I haven't finished 1/5 yet. The author has something good, he always feels good where he should feel good, alas, there are not many bad things, it is very comfortable. Overall, it's okay, and the negative reviews are right. The relationship between the characters, their positions, and the various systems are not well written, and they get along too harmoniously, but there is a feeling of disharmony.
This is a very good book, very interesting, why is it rated so low?
Come on, welcome back
There has been no update for two days. The author has probably been found by his family and locked up in a small dark room. Let's get out of here! [Thinking][Laughing evilly]
It's super pretty, please update it soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I hope the author will follow you soon. My bookshelf is completely empty.
I give you five stars as an encouragement. Remember to take a look when you post the article. If possible, you'd better find a time when you have enough time to revise the first and second chapters, but the plot and the like. Of course I know this will be very tiring, but if you want your book to be a work with a score of 9 or above, there are many places in your book that need to be changed or deleted. If you don't change or delete, it will never break through the 9 score. This is my suggestion, or you can start another book.
Just for the gastrointestinal world, I will give you five stars.
I feel this book is pretty good. If the author can write 10 chapters in one day, I will give you 5 stars for the whole 10 chapters.
The story of each world is well told, but I feel like there is something wrong with the power, but I can't tell it.
The author has updated it very quickly. This is not enough. Let me tell you, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Please update it quickly.
I understand the author's feeling of wanting the ending to be unfinished, but you don't need this kind of ending. It's so uncomfortable...
This is only chapter 55, and even the donkeys in the production team can't rest that well.
Personal feeling is good