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It's a well-written, very enjoyable novel. The main character is neither a virgin nor a soft girl. The writing is smooth, non-toxic, and basically free of typos. My favorite is the one without a heroine. It's so disgusting without a heroine [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's really good-looking. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and thoughtful. I just hope that the author can have no female protagonist and focus on achieving greatness without being restrained by women😙

I've been reading this book for a long time, starting with more than seventy chapters, and it's still up to now. I just posted it today and couldn't wait to give it five stars. It suits my taste. It's very good, but the writing in the front is a bit unremarkable. I think it's a good book, it's really good to read The author must insist. Now I'm tired of reading. This book is a dark novel, but it's not as dark as the others. It felt weird and boring after a while. Some of them were labeled as dark novels. It made me sick. I really like this book. Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on! Author[flying kiss] Although not many people watch it, they should all be true fans.

It may be tiring to watch at first, but the further you go, the more exciting it becomes. The protagonist is not a virgin at all, decisive in killing, sentimental and righteous, and the most important thing is that there is no heroine. I like movies without heroines, because most of the heroines are too slow. I hope the author can finish the book without it being unfinished. It's a really good book. It would be best to update it more than once a day. It's not enough! ! ! !

The overall rhythm is great. Before the middle stage of foundation building, it is a very classic fantasy development. Although the details are not outstanding, what is more terrible is that after the beginning, a large space is spent to determine the overall tone of the world view. At this time, the plot has little connection with the family background at the beginning, which makes the slow-moving mortal flow into the rhythm even slower. The overall structure from the middle period to the end of the pill is very comfortable. Even though some key props appear suddenly, there is no foreshadowing in the previous chapters. The overall rhythm of the Three Seas chapter is fast, and the plot is compact but not urgent. Shen Miao is acting non-stop. However, because he has the upper hand, readers have no sense of urgency, which leads some people to feel that the plots of near-death situations are somewhat choreographed. In the later stages of the formation of the core and the entry and exit of the Yuanying, it is a bit dull. The current battle between good and evil is probably just a foreshadowing. I hope there will be unexpected developments later. It has been too long since I have put pressure on the protagonist. Those evil ways of breaking through the realm and techniques are a highlight. The path that Shen Miao has figured out by himself, such as Xingwu Sha Dan Dan, is the most enjoyable part for me (before and after Nascent Soul, including the blood mercury peach baby blood shadow Shura method, it is a bit sloppy compared to it. It is basically used as it is. I hope I can improve it in the future when I get the opportunity to jump to the sky). The only fly in the ointment is that the perception of the Yuanying monks is a bit stretched. Although the spiritual consciousness and mana of the Yuanying can be regarded as a qualitative change, as long as the boundary of the soul of the later stage of the Yuanying is not reached, there will always be a sense of déjà vu when the elixir was formed. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better~

It's really amazing! I like to read books like this about all kinds of heresy and crooked ways. If I get tired of reading the usual books, take a look at this one. It's definitely good! The necessary details are there, the logic is very good, and the protagonist is not! Holy! Mother! Okay, stop reading, it's a mess, I'm really convinced [angry]

The writing is quite good. The plot has the shadow of other novels about mortals cultivating immortals, but it also has something new. In Luo Laomo's words, it is leaving traces of one's own on the land that the predecessors have walked. This is undoubtedly very good. After all, the traces of the predecessors are too heavy, and those who are late will have to step on the path of the predecessors. Therefore, it is definitely a major breakthrough to be able to incorporate other styles on top of this, to write the story from the perspective of a demonic monk, and at the same time integrate the restrained style of the ancient gods without writing any mistakes. This is like a monk breaking the upper limit of early golden elixir cultivation in the "Blood Compass". There are very few mortal novels that can do this (I won't say it, otherwise you think I am advertising [face covering]). In short, it is not an exaggeration to call this book a masterpiece. It is cleverly conceived and breaks through the limitations of conventional writing methods. Although there are some flaws in the early stage, the flaws are not concealed. It is worth recommending!

I read it patiently, and the feeling becomes more and more eye-catching as I go to the end. I can see that the author has more innovation than writing power. There are many places that should be expanded and written more, but he has been hasty. In fact, the author's thinking is very clever. I personally feel that I have not seen many good novels that combine the Ke style and Eastern immortality in recent years. This is considered a trial work. I hope the author can continue to write, and I will support it. I still feel it's a pity. I like the writing very much. The character setting becomes more and more fitting as you go on. The plot setting is just like what you wrote. It's cute but not solid. It has the shadow of many books, but it is true that the flaws are not hidden. I hope the author can settle down and write better in the second time.

It looks good and is worth collecting. If necessary, you should start to assimilate and recruit a few Nascent Soul monks, and then create your own sect. After all, you always rely on individuals, so how can you have so much time to collect information, resources, and practice? With your own power, you can conquer the world, and you can conquer the world after ascension. This is the real masterpiece! .

It's good. I feel like the author is an old bookworm. This book has a few common problems with novels. After getting through the frustrating part at the beginning, it's really good at the end, but the updates are slow. I plan to keep it for now, and come back when I have no more to read. In my opinion, the only difference between the author's level of fairy novels and first-class writers is his qualifications, and there is still a certain gap between him and the great masters. In addition, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I just went to the comment area and looked around. It is recognized that the author's writing style is a shortcoming. I hope the author can find ways to improve it and not fall into the trap of Wangyu. Finally, I wish you all have fun reading the novel and make enough money!

I watched half of it, but it's not watery. It's pretty good. The writing isn't very good, but it's easy to understand. The plot isn't too slow. It should be suitable for Taoist friends who like to watch weapon battles in terms of fighting skills. Overall, the novel has some flaws at the beginning, but it's generally good, keep it up [laughs]

It's very beautiful. I can see the feeling of Gu real person back then. Come on, thank you

It's a very good book. It seems to be very good so far. It's not anti-intellectual. The logic is relatively clear. There is no female protagonist. The protagonist is neither a dog licker nor a virgin. I recommend everyone to read it. It's not a vegetable chopping style, the villain is not a fool, and there is no cross-border killing. It is much better than those novels.

This is one of the best stories on this platform! Although the male protagonist killed too many people in order to practice ----- which made me very uncomfortable, the logic of the whole story is clear and the character setting is tenable! The character's IQ is online, the plot is reasonable, there is no love for no reason, no unreasonable hatred, and no fight to the death for a woman! In short, these are the only two excellent novels among the countless novels I have seen on this platform! I hope the author will continue his efforts and write more good works!

Overall, it's good. I support the author. The first and second volumes are both very good. I couldn't stand San Hai, especially Silver Sand Pirates. I read it all over the place. After reading it for a while, I felt it was okay. It was much better than other novels.

It's a very interesting book. The protagonist changes from being indecisive at the beginning to being ruthless and resourceful. It's not an insult to the IQ, but he's just a little bit like a mortal [laughter]

This book is generally good, especially on Tomato, but it ends a bit abruptly and leaves too many holes unfilled. So it can only be regarded as watchable at this level. It would be better if the author makes a sequel and writes a supplementary one.

It is clean and neat, the foreshadowing links are reasonable, and the imagination is rich. The route of cultivating immortals is more novel than the traditional routes of cultivating immortals, refining alchemy, practicing, and forging magic weapons. Practice blood-sucking exercises, ask gods to improve your cultivation, and sacrifice monks. It is worthy of being evil. If you are used to traditional cultivation, reading this book will feel refreshing.

The beginning makes it difficult to read, as it is too cliche and frustrating. The writing will get better and better in the future, but book friends who want to read it should be mentally prepared. This book may not be completed due to the author's health. The protagonist will be finished when he reaches the realm of Yuanying. Hope there will be a second part.

A very good book. Come on, author!

Year-old bookworm has been identified [exploration] Good books are worth reading [Like]

The protagonist kills decisively, great book, good luck to the author!

The story slowly unfolds, and the dream of magic is actually another hidden side of each of us, so it is easy for people to enter the story. There is no sword to travel to the end of the world, only the best to live and fight for even the slightest chance. Thank you to the author, I hope it will not end.

This book is super good-looking. It has a unique style of mortal flow. It feels very interesting. The protagonist is no longer a lone ranger. He has his own sect, family flow, sect flow, and mortal flow. All three are combined into one, haha.

Plot 8.5 Writing 7 Overall worth watching I don't know why it's only over 7 points

It's very good, and the writing is wonderful, but the updates are a bit slow.

It's a very good book. I hope the author can maintain this level in the future. By the way, I want to ask about the progress of the book.

Not bad, but I don't know why the rating is so low [what][what][what]

I've finished reading it, and the plot is good. The author finished it in a hurry due to illness, and the rest of it has basically come full circle. I still want to see the fight with the ancient gods later, and I hope I can come back to continue it or write another book.

Man, I really like your descriptions of those strange creatures. I'd love to read more of them. I'll give you a slap in the face. You'll make me so angry. You'll suck on me. I'll give you a slap in the face.