[Original light novel, second grade, no fixed routine, possible multiple lines]
A certain college student who admired the way of a counselor since childhood died in a traffic accident on the occasion of graduation. Nineteen years after being reincarnated into a parallel world, he was parasitized by a remnant soul and waited for the life he had been looking forward to in a different world.
Four hundred and twenty-two demon lords, modern vampires, guardians of humans with supernatural powers, and ambitious people broke into his peaceful life one after another, and at the same time, the gears of the world began to turn.
Reader comments
Not bad, give some encouragement to newcomers, because it is a light novel, so there are not so many requirements.
OK, let's talk about the main plot. It's about the protagonist achieving his ambitions and goals in this world, but it's too urgent. More preparation can be done for the plot of the protagonist, such as talking to higher-ups, and mastering the intelligence of the entire world or a region, although it will take a little time.
Let's talk about the characters again. The plot before the world changed was a bit exaggerated about the protagonist, and the other characters were overwritten. It's like a few people in school can't stop the vampire, but Fox 11 is coming. I can only think that the rest is a burden. Secondly, I don't believe that such a big change is a step-by-step change that the country did not pay attention to. Since immortals are mentioned, there must be cultivation methods. Now I saw Cain being beaten, a demon king without any defense at all? It's a bit hasty to say bite to save bite.
Okay, I can't see anything about the emotional line. [Pouts] Because the protagonist doesn't reveal much of his affection to others, only other people's. Please write more about it. Are you sleeping? So what if I fell asleep? It might be to satisfy physiological needs, even though I didn't do anything.
That's it, let's see again
The author is alive, so feel free to make suggestions if you have any, and try to be as satisfying as possible without destroying the original plot (such as character design!)
Not bad, give some encouragement to newcomers, because it is a light novel, so there are not so many requirements. OK, let's talk about the main plot. It's about the protagonist achieving his ambitions and goals in this world, but it's too urgent. More preparation can be done for the plot of the protagonist, such as talking to higher-ups, and mastering the intelligence of the entire world or a region, although it will take a little time. Let's talk about the characters again. The plot before the world changed was a bit exaggerated about the protagonist, and the other characters were overwritten. It's like a few people in school can't stop the vampire, but Fox 11 is coming. I can only think that the rest is a burden. Secondly, I don't believe that such a big change is a step-by-step change that the country did not pay attention to. Since immortals are mentioned, there must be cultivation methods. Now I saw Cain being beaten, a demon king without any defense at all? It's a bit hasty to say bite to save bite. Okay, I can't see anything about the emotional line. [Pouts] Because the protagonist doesn't reveal much of his affection to others, only other people's. Please write more about it. Are you sleeping? So what if I fell asleep? It might be to satisfy physiological needs, even though I didn't do anything. That's it, let's see again
The author is alive, so feel free to make suggestions if you have any, and try to be as satisfying as possible without destroying the original plot (such as character design!)