Reborn in the Apocalypse: A Fresh Start

Imagination is beautiful, reality is very skinny. The framework I thought of was very beautiful, but when I wrote it it was not the same. The quality of your writing and the amount of experience you have, these all need to be accumulated slowly. Come on, do it to yourself. I really don't think the two male protagonists, Madonna, are walking on the road and others want to follow you. Can you not let others follow you? You can't! The road is not yours! If my protagonist could, I would feel like I am a fool and also cold-blooded! Those people followed them, and the protagonist didn't protect them, he just followed! It is undeniable that they can occupy more or less the light, and the safety factor is relatively high. Human nature is to be strong, and I don't think they are saints, really! I like having fun, but I don't like being cold-blooded! It's really not the Holy Mother to give those survivors a chance of survival without hindering themselves! Everyone likes to meet such a strong person in a different place!

The author's writing style really needs to be improved, and the content of the whole text is still good, but there is something wrong with the characters of the two protagonists. It's better to fix the characters a little bit, like this and that. At the beginning, Han's setting should be that he is easy to be soft-hearted. After all, he has never experienced the apocalypse, which is understandable, but later on he is always soft-hearted when he shouldn't be soft-hearted, and inexplicably cold-hearted when he should be soft-hearted. What the hell is that? The setting of Xiao is also like this, and in terms of the emotional line, it really feels like two elementary school chicks falling in love 😂 😂 and the author really marked some of the punctuation in the wrong place. It was so tiring to watch, and I had to silently think about it in my mind, remove the punctuation, and break up the sentences before reading. I hope the author will Keep up the good work, the writing really needs to be strengthened, and if you really don't know how to write the emotional line, it's okay if you don't write so much 🤦🤦 And if you don't write some weird narration, it shouldn't matter. It feels weird if you write it, but I can't explain why it's strange. Looking forward to the next part of this article, but it seems that it has been discontinued.

Not bad, but too little. Author, please work harder! The characters are distinct, there are no messy things, and you just take revenge when you encounter enemies. It's great!

Looking at the people I love around me, my heart is filled with happiness. It turns out that happiness is really simple, as long as this person is by your side. Humans are truly a strange creature, they can be extremely strong and yet extremely fragile. A look or a word can release the devil or angel in your heart.

This is really a good book, I like it very much 😘, I really like this type and it is a double boy, but there are very few of this type on my bookshelf, too few, some have been taken off the shelves 🤦 🤦, but I still have to ask the author, is this his main focus? 🤭 🤭

The novel is quite good, the two male protagonists are cultivators. Fight zombies. It just seems like it's not finished yet. The author will update it soon, please come on.

This book is really good, but it has too few flaws. The author needs to work harder and update it more.

At first I thought it was Xiao Gong. After watching it for a while, I thought it was Han Gong, but now I'm not sure either.

Very nice, I like it very much

It's very interesting. I like this type of post-apocalyptic rebirth story.