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I like the plot of this book very much. There are very few bad little white flower incidents. The heroine is also positive and full of positive energy. She does not ignore the importance of hard work just because she is reborn or because she is the heroine, nor does she blindly rely on chance or the help of others. Both the heroine and the author are great. (But sister, the author, can I ask you when the update time is? I can catch up in time [currently working on the manuscript])

The plot of this article is good. Although the heroine is occasionally off-kilter, the overall situation is remarkable. The most controversial part is the selection of the male protagonist. For some reason, many people don't like the current male protagonist. I personally think there is nothing wrong with the male protagonist. As a young master from the most powerful family in the Zhongzhou Continent, he is neither unattainable nor incomparable. In this world, he advances and retreats in a measured way. He doesn't drag his feelings towards the heroine, nor does he force the heroine to accept him. He just uses his own way to let the heroine slowly accept him. I don't understand why many readers find him annoying [laughter][laughter][laughter] I guess the male protagonist has a trouble-making physique, and he can make people hate him even if he doesn't do anything. This book deserves five stars. The author would like to give it a try. Come on, come on.

When you see exciting places, you need to wait for updates [face covering] [face covering] Come on, author, and come back when you have gained weight. According to this plot, Lin Xue's original master's consciousness should still be there, and he should go around in circles later to clean up the Lin Xue who passed through, leaving the original Lin Xue behind. There is no doubt that the male protagonist, Mr. Han. But the second brother is very good [laughing] As for the genius Prince Feng Shanlinggen, he hasn't been out for a while, and he doesn't like the heroine either. There should be no emotional lines. Poor brother, the master of the sect, in the last life and in this life... A perfect supporting man.

I think the author's writing is very good, and the characters and plots are also very good. I just read some comments saying that the setting of the heroine is problematic, but I think it is really good. After all, no one is perfect. She is also a little girl. Even if she is reborn, before she is reborn, she is still a little girl who longs for family love. It is impossible to become perfect all at once. It also needs a process of slow growth. To be honest, I like this kind of characters who grow up and become stronger slowly. Those who are super perfect all at once are... Not attractive anyway! Big cheers for the author! I will always support you Dear author, I want to know who the male protagonist is [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][blowing kiss]

It's so beautiful and refreshing. I highly recommend this book! I can't get enough of it. The author will work harder, work harder, and write more.

Don't forget that this book has such low reviews, it's actually very good, five stars⭐

It's really beautiful. Unlike the other exaggerated ones I've seen before, this one is about practicing step by step. I opened this book accidentally and it really gave me a lot of surprises. The author would like to give you a lot of support and updates.

I really like this book. There used to be one that was my favorite, but it was removed from the shelves because of other people's pictures of her. This book has successfully replaced that book. It is still my favorite plot. I like it so much. It's really exciting, but the author is great. I hope you don't stop at the critical moment and lose your enthusiasm while watching [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] Fortunately, I found the update time of Dada [shy] [shy] [shy] Otherwise, I would have nothing to watch. I hope you will continue to work hard to make more updates.

Read the latest chapter in one go, and the author will update it in large chunks! I really like this story of the original heroine defeating the time traveler!

It's really beautiful (◦˙▽˙◦) but I don't understand this rating ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭Thanks to the author＾0＾~

It's really super beautiful. I love it [adoration] [admiration] [admiration]. I hope it can always look this good. It's really not enough. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Oh my god, Do you hear my call? [Shy][shy]

Really good-looking, not watery at all

Author I just watched the climax part and it ended up not being there anymore. It's too difficult. Great cheers, author. It's really beautiful. The content of the story is very exciting. I really like it. I hope you can continue with more (of course more and better) [laughing][laughing]

It's well written, but you still have to fill in the holes ahead! Everything else is fine 😊 I'll mention it later: The author takes great care of his body and works hard on writing. I'm still waiting to see it! What to do if you don't see enough! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very good-looking, the heroine works hard, but the pet noob bullies the heroine and makes me feel uncomfortable. Everything else is great!

Super pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, both the heroine and the hero are my favorite types

I have never read a novel so seriously and I like the humane heroine written by the author. Male protagonist. The storyline is also engaging. It would be better to have more humorous and funny scenes. Come on, come on, come on

It's very interesting. The author is great. I've been following it. It's rare to see a book that I like. Anyway, I have a very discerning eye. I can't bear to read half of the books, so I won't read them. This is a rare book that I have been chasing. Big cheers for the author!

When I first started reading this novel, I thought it was about the heroine who was framed by her sister and who was reborn for revenge. As the story unfolded, I didn't expect that it was one person with two souls. It was very unique. It told the heroine's experiences, all kinds of thrills, and made people linger. Xuantian's kiss in the North Master Qing'e and Master Qingping were both very kind to the heroine. Later, the heroine went to Zhongzhou and passed the alchemy competition championship and was accepted as a disciple by Zhenjun Luanhua. Due to a mission, she was sent to the deserted north with a teleportation array. In the end, she and the people from the five domains worked together to open the Heavenly Gate, and the heroine successfully ascended to heaven. Male protagonist, although the author said in the last chapter that he does not know how to write emotional dramas, this is the author's first book after all. Failure is the mother of success. I believe that your subsequent books will become more and more exciting and you will gain more experience. The male protagonist has three views, has no harem, and silently protects the female protagonist in the early stage. Dear readers, see you in the next book [laughing]

As a novice writer, I must give a 5-star review. It is no worse than the veteran author. Although there are shortcomings, as a novice, it is already very good. The only regret is that the male and female protagonists have not yet had an ending. It is similar to no CP. The ending is also rushed. In fact, I can continue to write. And I personally like the story of strong men and strong women with happy endings. I hope the author will work hard.

From the beginning, I felt that the author's writing style was not very good, and he kept confusing things. At the end, I realized that he was a novice. This level is already great for a novice. [Sentimental] The foreshadowing at the end is much smoother and more detailed than the previous article, which is a great improvement! It can be regarded as witnessing the author's great growth [Thinking], but I feel that the road to ascension is a little rushed, but it is still very good. I have to say that in the early days, Lin Yuan was a bit petty and ignorant as a reborn person, but considering that she followed the rules in her first life, it seems that she can understand it a little bit. In addition, whether there is a thunder catastrophe or not should be revealed earlier to pave the way. Many people were confused when watching it in the early stage, thinking that there was something wrong with the author's settings. I really need to practice more on the emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists. Although the writing is not particularly good, I can use my brain [shy] to express my love for this book again! I wish the author will write better and better, keep up the good work and keep working hard! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This book is very good. It's been a long time since I read a novel completely. This is the first one in a long time. The author wrote an apology at the end, saying that he apologized for not writing the emotional line well, but I think the emotional line in this book is very good. It explains their feelings but is not too sticky. Unlike some novels where the male and female protagonists are sticky all day long, some readers may find it very awkward. It's sweet, but I don't like that. It's too boring and annoying. It's as if the male and female protagonists have nothing to do all day long, and they just have love and love, which is completely nutritious. This article is very good. The male and female protagonists each have their own responsibilities, opportunities and development, which is great. At the end of the extra chapter, it was explained that Uncle Feng and the heroine's mother were so good together. The heroine's father was a scumbag who was not worthy of the heroine's mother. The heroine's mother was really worthless for so many years. Fortunately, she later met Uncle Feng, a man with good appearance, character and strength. And Lin Xue, I have to praise the real Lin Xue in her previous life for her actions before her death. She deserves it. The heroine's father deserves to collapse after knowing the truth hahaha

Five-star praise! So far it can be said to be a very good book. I haven't seen such a good article about cultivating immortals for a long time. I don't know why the rating is so low. I feel like it should start at least 9.5. Author, you must keep writing.

This book is good to read, but it doesn't write much about Lin Xue, and there aren't any scenes between the heroine and her rival. I'm really looking forward to what it will be like when these two people meet. None of the heroine's friends have come out, and neither has the male protagonist. I hope it will be updated soon so that I can see the plot behind it.

It looks pretty good so far, but the heroine is still not that stunning. If she is more ruthless, she will not let the little sister still jump around in front of her. She has already started to fuck her. In case this sister is still there with all kinds of connotations. Then I was a little curious. Couldn't the male protagonist be the senior brother who didn't look at his younger sister in his previous life? I think that senior brother didn't have enough skills in identifying tea. He didn't realize that his sister was faking it and took her back with a silk ribbon?

It's pretty good, the plot is good, but there's a little bit of difficulty in the middle (๑•́ωก̀๑). There is also a love line between the male and female protagonists, but there are not many side stories. They could use some. They are already in the fairy world. Moreover, their masters are Taoist couples and they have a relationship. Even if there is a friendship, this second senior brother will not affect the relationship between the two of them. At most, it will block it and arrange a reason for the second senior brother to meet again. Moreover, this person has a very good relationship with the heroine. The one with the water spirit body is good, and then there is another one. The Taoist couple is bigger and perfect.

Personally, I think the flaws don't hide the flaws, and it's still very good-looking. I think it's good that the heroine doesn't have a CP, but I don't like the male protagonist. [Laughing and crying] Concentrating on being a big heroine and constantly improving herself is the right way to go! Come on, author! Looking forward to follow-up works

Personally, I feel that the CP and the setting of the ending are quite good, which is more refreshing and refined than the main plot that is set to be greasy and crooked. Every flower comes to every eye, I like this article. Thank you [love] [like] I forgot to mention: I don't know why I felt a bit out of character when I read the fantasy of Yin Puppet Sect. I wonder if it's an illusion.

I have carefully read more than a hundred chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I can only say that the rating of this book is well-deserved or even a little higher. I look forward to the author's next book. I hope it will stop nagging. I still hope that the characters can be more vivid and the world is not black and white.

I really like it. It's very smooth to watch. Hahahahahaha. I hope the male protagonist is Senior Brother Qin, a childhood sweetheart who has been in love for a long time and traveled together in Zhongzhou. If he is the little boy from Zhongzhou, I always feel that it is a bit the same as other novels. I seriously doubt that the master of the Jubao Pavilion when Yuan first entered the sect was that little boy. . . . . .