Building Hogwarts in the Marvel Universe

The two lives combined are nearly a hundred years old. The first life was a master of technology, and the second life was the principal of Hogwarts. So in order to avoid being withdrawn, he went to elementary school? Whose intelligence are you insulting? Recruit a housekeeper who will take care of the children, and then she will really become the protagonist's elder. She usually takes care of the children and has affairs with others. Are you sure that this housekeeper is a senior housekeeper with more than ten years of experience? Couldn't the author imagine the relationship between a master and a butler in upper class society?

The writing is good, but the few pictures of Phoenix Reborn make people suffer from high blood pressure (I really have high blood pressure). It feels like the protagonist has lived for more than 80 years and lived in the body of a dog, which is even more stupid than a reckless man. It's just like a country dropped a few nuclear bombs, including manufacturing technology and materials. He's not in a hurry, let's have a quick snack first! The protagonist has lost a magic seed, the forbidden magic book, and the phoenix. Don't worry, go to school first! You haven't recognized the owner of your **** magic ring yet, and you gave it away!? The key point was that the sister-in-law had a cold face and accepted it directly. She had no intention of giving it to him in the first place. The retarded elf in the magic book makes people's blood pressure even more intense! Author, did you use any caution when arranging the plot? This operation is simply an NTR plot. Phoenix kept looking at her NTR! Why are you just watching! Did this Phoenix TM also betray? Author, didn't you say that Phoenix's IQ is very high? Now I find that it is high, it is high! They all have to start a new business! This is betrayal! It's NTR!

The overall writing is still very good, but the description is too detailed, resulting in not much plot in the article. There are a lot of introductions, but it is very messy to read. I suggest the author reduce the settings, such as the principles and other things, just delete some and write a rough summary. Is it a novel? It is not an introduction. Introduction, writing more principles can indeed make the article and the background of the story clearer, but this is not the reason why you write a novel as an introduction to the principles. The story and story settings are still very good, but they are not suitable for reading as a refreshing article, nor for those who are not very patient. Don't skip chapters, otherwise you will not understand.

How should I put it? I feel that the protagonist is a bit unworthy of the background introduction. The strength of the protagonist who is the most powerful person after Dumbledore is not reflected. The experience of casting spells is very unfamiliar? Or is the world of Harry Potter weaker? I hope the author will improve the logic later. The protagonist used to be a big boss and was very powerful. Now he should be considered a re-builder. How could he do things by surprise? Will it be explained later why the protagonist's thoughts are inclined to plant soul trees and teach other people magic, and how does it help the protagonist's initial point of wanting to go home?

Very good, but I really don't like Ye Xiaobai, the girl who picked up the fat orange.

This book is okay! -_-|| Mainly because I like Slytherin. I wonder if a magical world system like Harry Potter will be established in the future? And the four major colleges? I hope I can focus on describing Slytherin 🙂

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It's not to your taste, the opportunity was missed very stiffly, and the incident was not led in this way.

There are too many theoretical principles of magic. The main focus of the novel is the plot. For a spell like that, you only need to write a name and its function. There is no need to introduce it in detail. It is too detailed and it feels like it is asking us to learn and makes people nervous 🤦 🤦 🤦

The missed opportunities are very stiff, and I personally don't like the female characters. Then there is the problem of the protagonist's personality.