Interstellar: First, I'll Bring Home an SSS-Rank Talent

It doesn't matter if there are no comments. I am already a mature author. I comment on myself [Salute] The first hundred thousand words are basically foreshadowing. There are a lot of foreshadowings. If anyone likes to read it, you can look for it [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting. It would be better if it had two male protagonists. I'm a rotten person.

The human heart is not enough and the snake swallows the elephant "Perhaps fate has already planned everything." "Human desires can never be satisfied..." "Human race..." King Qi's tone was full of endless hatred. It could be seen from his tone that the other party probably didn't want to be friends with the human race in this life. It can even be said that I don't want to give any trust at all. "Munuo, who do you think is right and who is wrong in this situation?" How to judge this scene, how to judge it. Right and wrong, right and wrong, are intertwined and entangled into chaos. This is black and white that cannot be judged. Neither side is a righteous party. "There are many things that you can't think about and distinguish between right and wrong." "If it were you, would you also kill the other party?" Jiuxian suddenly asked. "I think I will. Because the position I am standing in is the human race. The illusions I have experienced before have indeed experienced a good time with those innocent souls. In terms of emotions, I will also be biased towards the human race." "Of course, more importantly, I was innocent, but the other party had murderous intentions towards me." "In this case, destroying the other party is also for my future protection." "If one day the other party leaves here, or becomes a god, and sees me again, it would be terrible to kill me. So if I can kill them all now, of course I will do so." "I won't offend others unless they offend me. If someone offends me, I will punish them. Is this what you mean?" "... Yes." Everyone has a mask on their face, everyone is a chess piece

The story structure of the book is okay, but author, don't you feel that the plot advances too fast? Wencai can only say that it is still readable. The logic and details of the story deserve to be polished. I am a bookworm with a big appetite, but this book is quite comedy. If I give it based on the actual situation, how many points do you think I can give you? To encourage you, keep working hard. After all, writing a book these days is not easy, especially at the beginning. You can polish and polish the details. I will save a few months and then read it. Come on.

"I fell asleep at the bottom of a well, and the world has forgotten me. I indulged in a dark nightmare. The cool water of the well washed my soul. I began to feel no cold. The end of the dream was that after three days of winter, spring came again..."! Come on, author! I hope there is no heroine! No CP!

It's okay, but I quite like it. (*≧ｍ≦*)

Waiting for update... It is recommended that the author read more classics, or some high-scoring novels of the same type, so that the language can be more refined, and this can avoid the article being too cumbersome, causing readers to skip the plot and leave questions. Great author, come on! There is still a lot of room for improvement [laughs]

Like. If there are fewer female supporting roles, it will be easier

The whole book is still very good-looking, with tears and laughter, a lot of foreshadowing, a happy ending, and the growth of the protagonist is pretty good. It's not a virgin, it kills when it's necessary, and it doesn't kill innocent people indiscriminately. There's no cp and there's no emotional line.

Hello, I am waiting for the end of this book after all the hardships. I was reluctant to part with it but I was very lucky to have encountered this book and saw another world. Also, wouldn't the author consider adding more extra chapters? [Sending Hearts]