Nine Turns of Burning Heaven Technique

The book is very good! There are just too many typos, keep up the good work

The writing is good. Why didn't the protagonist go back to see his mother for so long? I hope it can be improved.

Well written, I hope you can continue to work hard and write better works.

This is what I wrote very well. As we get older, our family relationship is very satisfying.

So wonderful, so beautiful