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Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not gorgeous The language is decorated with pure language, but it impresses readers with its ordinary true feelings. Statement Smooth and coherent, with perfect psychological portrayal and detailed description. Beautiful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials It is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, and the language is plain yet stylish. Pick. Concise and full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This book The novel shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary, and uses the ordinary to The sentences describe the hero's psychology very well. The ultimate, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. Art From a technical point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its The meaning is far greater than success itself. After reading this little book of yours After saying that, my heart could not be calm for a long time. How could this world be so peaceful? I can't believe my eyes that such a penetrating novel can exist eyes. You made me deeply understand that "there are people outside the world, and there are people outside the world". After reading the novel, I dare not easily comment on this sentence On the subject, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish the little people in this world. Some articles. But I still commented because I felt that if I cannot leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, That will be a lifelong regret of mine. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe this novel. Wonderful. So in the end, I just want to say: your novel It's so exciting, why not update it quickly?

Although the author doesn't know whether you can see it or not, I have some small opinions. 1. The protagonist is powerful but the elders are not as strong as the disciples (I personally suggest that the elders can be strengthened). You can't just strengthen the disciples and give them golden fingers. The elders also have needs. Otherwise, how can they lead the disciples? It's not good for the elders to rely on the level of the pill pile. 2. There must be an old monster in a family. The head of the house is strong, but if the head of the house goes out, no one in the family can control the situation. They have to rely on those weapons every time, otherwise they are afraid that the head of the house will kill their whole family. But in the real martial arts world, there will be no less evil forces. 3. Lin Langtian's protector is missing (This is purely a personal suggestion and I don't like to spray it by mistake)

It's so good to watch. It's the most enjoyable one among the family dramas so far. I hope the female lead won't be included. I support it🌹

The writing is okay. The strongest family system can create gold fingers for family members to use. As long as the family develops, they will become stronger. Well, the whole text can be regarded as a good article. The writing style is average, the logic is not very rigorous, and there are occasional sloppy words. But for those who like me, I think it is okay. I hope the author will take good care of it!

Overall, it's good. Tomato has a family story like this, which is much better than those puppet patriarchs. It's better for the protagonist to break through in cultivation faster. The higher the realm, the more book friends can read it comfortably. The cross-level battle is not the same concept as the higher realm. Is it to let the malicious score be earned? It's a bit low. The pace is getting faster, and the bright era is about to begin. Write about the person who works hard to become stronger, and the alchemy heel, Nirvana Bone, Take your time, calm down, read other novels, and learn from the sentences. I'm really looking forward to it. Don't finish it hastily.

The number of chapters is not enough to read. It is best for the elders and protectors to keep up. A family with only one strong leader is not enough. Every time a strong person comes out, the head of the family goes up. What's the point? It's better to be invincible until the end!

The writing is good, it is an innovation in family literature, and it is a refreshing article with a broad world view. I have just watched it and now I feel that it will be more and more exciting in the future. I look forward to seeing the geniuses of the Lin family competing with the geniuses of other imperial pilgrimage places. Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

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It's a very nice book. You can add more Supreme Elders, Alchemists, Weapon Refiners, and Formation Masters to improve your family's strength and heritage. You also need to add clan-protecting spiritual beasts. There must also be pages like the Trial Tower, and you can also properly arrange adventures in secret realms, opportunities, and so on. That's all for now. Let's give it five stars. After all, it looks pretty good.

This book is very interesting, the content description and the characterization are very vivid Overall, it just looks good. For example: Good-looking skin·the same Interesting soul·One in a million It doesn't really matter whether there is a heroine or not, it just doesn't matter if there is one or not, it all depends on the author. ~_~ ⊙_⊙

Too little. I saw the highlight, but it's gone... It's a very interesting book. I hope it won't be unfinished. It's best not to have a heroine. If it's not possible, I can accept a single heroine. Don't start a harem! Big cheers for the author!

The author's writing is very good and must be praised.

The author's idea is good. I wonder if a systematic time traveler suddenly appears and offends the Lin family, and then faces a bunch of idiots. Wouldn't it be exciting [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The most readable novel so far

It's ok, it looks good, but it's a little lacking. Let me add a follow-up review, some parts are not very detailed. Is it a sum of money, such as grabbing some resources, elixirs, etc. - Destroying the city to get the resources and then disappearing? Are you a little confused in some places?

It was quite enjoyable to read, and it didn't have the nauseating feeling of being deliberately overrated like other novels! I hope the author can stick to this! I would like to make some suggestions for the author's reference, so that the disciples can improve their skills. After all, you are giving others a golden finger, and you cannot let the protagonist fight on your own! It is appropriate to use disciple invincible to highlight the protagonist's character. I hope that the disciples in the clan can take charge of their own role as soon as possible!

It's good-looking, with novel subject matter. Just look at the title and you'll know that it's a unique one among the system family literature. The plot is pretty good so far, not too much matryoshka (I hope it will be the same in the future). The writing style is also good, and the combat power is okay (actually, the combat power is still a bit exaggerated, but it will be perfect if it is reduced a bit). Five stars take off~!

It's possible, but it's not detailed enough for someone like me. However, it is still a relatively good book. I recommend reading it if you have just read it, or if you like this kind of book. Author added 😎 useful

It feels pretty good, good luck to the author

Okay okay. . . It would be best if the owner of the family doesn't have to take action to kill the enemy, otherwise everyone will have it and the system will be wasted.

I'm convinced, just keep it updated at this speed. It's an incomparably cool article. Forget it if you are short and die [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [cry] [cry] [cry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

This is the first time I read a book of this type. There are all different types of protagonists. In the future, I would like to see more protagonists with golden fingers, less family heads, and just be a person who protects the shortcomings.

Not bad, it looks good, and it's fun to watch. , Just look at a yellow button. 👿

A great novel, I recommend you read it One more thing, don't do it yourself in the future. If your family has millions, you must learn to behave like a patriarch.

It's a theme that I generally like very much. It's great.

It looks great. The author would like to give it a try! Not enough to watch at all? Be careful, I will detain you! (▼ Plate▼#)

Non-toxic, not irritating... Jiazhu is very strong... Worth a look~~

It looks pretty good so far. I don't know if it will collapse in the future.

I... Don't know what to say, so just say it

The update is a bit slow, but the update is pretty good, but there is no reincarnation of the emperor or any strong person? It would be nice if there were some more invincibles