Ex-Aid: Obtaining the Build Driver from the Start

I would like to give you a suggestion: if you know what you are not good at, just learn it. Don't mention it in the book, otherwise it will make others resentful.

It's both fake flour, so why not give it five stars? Although the writing style is a bit immature and there are quite a few parentheses at the beginning, it is still acceptable. Next, I will make some suggestions. First of all, don't collapse your character too much, as it will be easy to lose it. Secondly, the heroine's character should be given to the protagonist first. It should not be a popular character, but it should not be so abrupt. The third thing is that some of the inappropriately described passages can be imitated from similar passages in other books. Of course, don't imitate them all, just 20 to 30% is enough. Fourth, don't show the male protagonist in the early stage. What I mean is don't show the male protagonist in the early stage. That would be too abrupt. Fifth, you don't have much confidence in the early stage, so don't write emotional scenes. Otherwise, it will be awkward to write, and you will not be able to take it back later. Sixth, the word count can be high, but it must not be easily seen by everyone. Finally, the sign-in process needs to be presented smoothly, preferably in some details. Parentheses are always not good. I have only read the first few chapters. Maybe I have said too much in some of them, or you may have corrected some of them, or there may not be any of these problems at all, but I still hope you can read this comment, Ciao~

I am actually the first to review this book.

Dear author, this book is very well written, keep up the good work! 💕💕💕

You may not believe it, but I once again aroused the idea of ​​writing a novel by reading the novel written by the author, and I became a lot more confident... The five stars are considered to be a thank you to the author.

This work is better, keep it up₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

This book is quite nice.

How can I say that your novel as a whole is written around a parallel universe. If you also play Genshin Impact, you can add the number of worlds. In other words, adding a special building one by one, and then each thing inside becomes a universe can be written like this. Then, as a fan of Carmen Leda, the overall novel is still okay, but the brackets in the content of the novel are a bit too much. You can just use ordinary brackets so early. You can directly write a general introduction about how to describe this skill or a general introduction about a character. Your brackets are a bit too much. Then what do you think? You should probably write an outline on a sticky note and then do this. Otherwise, it will be uncomfortable for you to read and listen to. In this case. And what about your system? Your system is a bit troublesome. I suggest you read more articles about the system. Also, your nonsense is a bit too much. If you are like me, my article is close to 4,000 words, so I will calculate it as 3,000 words. Then you wrote about 30 pieces, which should be about 90,000 words or even close to 100,000 words. You only wrote 40,000 words for this one. One article is a bit too little. You need to add some content, or you need to think about the content for a month or two before writing it. Just like what I said in my first article? I thought about it for a month or two, and then I decided to continue writing. You think about it first, you think about it first, and then you develop it after you finish thinking about it. Otherwise, if you just think about it and then write it, it will be too confusing no matter how you say it.

Hey ;-), come on, author!!!

Emmm... How to evaluate it? Very good