Ultra: Begins as Carmilla

To be honest, the author's subject matter is very good, and I personally like it very much anyway. However, I see that the current chapters can clearly describe various aspects in more detail. The author goes by too fast, and it is easy to get confused. It doesn't feel good yet, but it seems that many plots have passed, giving people a hydrological illusion. The above is just a personal suggestion. I say it because I particularly like your subject and the general direction of the plot. I hope the author can describe some plots in more detail [laughing] (don't criticize if you don't like it, thank you)

Let me tell you a fact. Nowadays, most boys have no desire to pursue girls. If you don't believe it, look around you. In fact, boys are happier when they play with other boys. Girls have various tempers and are unreasonable. Nowadays, apart from playing games and going to work, most of the extra time spent by men is playing with their brothers. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Is this book linked to the book "Ultraman: I Became a Black Dragon, I'm Panic"? ? ?

Keep writing, I found this theme outline is really good I regret it now. Starting from the 20th chapter, I wrote something that was extremely poisonous and all kinds of abuse.

Hope it can be Lily!

I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I give you 4 stars. [Laughing] Come on! I'm just tired of looking at lilies.

It's really hard to bear the burden of going out, but among Oku fandoms, it's really good. The book has only been updated for 50 chapters, and the author is the kind of person who can read the comments and know what's awkward. I can look forward to the future. I can only say, as for why I come back even though I've complained about it. I saw it because I saw the incredible book "I, Dark Tiga, Not a Holy Mother". The first 200 chapters are filled with water characters. The average score of the author's three books is 7.4, Which made me know that Ultra fans who don't have water characters but think about the plot (although it is also quite outrageous) are still worth reading. If you are passing by, you can really go and take a look at the book I mentioned. What is the lower limit of the entire website? You can pull the plot back and forth and make up the words to make money. I really want to give him a mouthful of spit.

Let's make the heroine Camilla, or else hehehe

It looks good, but is it a marriage story or a lily story?

I hope there won't be a male protagonist. After all, I started talking about Mayumi's plot, and the soul is the embodiment of a person. If there is a male protagonist, it may feel very awkward. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. I hope the author will consider it!)

If you don't recognize Camilla as your sister, you will become Dijia's sister-in-law.

Please, author, didn't you say you've changed it? You should at least read it again before writing [face covering]

Overall, this book is well written, but one chapter is too short, and the male protagonist's character needs to be improved. Finally, I hope the author can make one chapter longer and the book be a pure lily. [Laugh]

The content of the book is very exciting, I hope the author will update it soon. There is always a feeling of trepidation. If you like it very much, I will give you five stars.

Can we quickly improve the protagonist's strength? It will be very painful to see him slump. Yuanmeng next door is basically at T1 level.

If you like it, give it five stars.

I want to see Geed call the protagonist mother [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I give it five stars. I love the subject matter. I just want to ask, when will the sisters recognize each other? If it's soon, I won't raise them [laughter]

Hopefully it will be within 10,000.

This book is quite interesting to me personally. Although there are some unreasonable aspects in the writing, these problems that can be corrected are not problems. Moreover, as a new author, everyone can understand it. The more he writes, the better the quality will be. Emmm, it was written with emotion, how should I put it, very strange, giving people a very scheming feeling

The author is big, I don't like Lily, I'm single, thank you

Lily? Lily?

Very nice＾0＾~ Come on, author

Good-looking, good-looking, but you damn meow, don't break up with me...

Five-star support to start!

Good book, very beautiful

It's not enough to marry a humane.

Come on author, support you

What on earth is Baihe Wenai? I understand too

Oh, I forgot, I forgot to give five stars. I thought I gave it.