Collapse, the Son of Tree and Sea Comes to the Original God!

Author, I'm just staring at this book. I'll read a chapter when it's updated [laughs crookedly]

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] I'm very optimistic about you, author. Things after 20 pictures are really to my liking.

Mhy, Honkai Impact III can really make me cry. Thank you, the author, for making Honkai Impact III sweet.

Emmmm…… The plot is generally okay, but there are some parts that I don't understand, but I feel like I understand it. And judging from these short 38 pictures, the author has great ambitions, and he wants to satisfy himself and make us happy. However, I still have to say that you will finish it very quickly. You are only 38 pictures now, and you are already on your third game. If it is too fast, it will be unstable and it will easily collapse. Slow down and consider the plot. Moreover, some people who read this book may not play these games or only play one or two. You still need to give them an explanation. The above is my understanding. First, try to write it slowly. You are too fast. Those of us who play these games can understand it, but sometimes we are confused, and some people can't understand it, so please take your time. That's probably it, I'll continue to wait and see, so go for it! Saonian, I'm optimistic about you! [Learned]

This stuff is so well written. From the first time I watched it, my lips dropped.

How should I put it, the setting feels confusing, there are too many world wills, the world jumps too fast, and it looks confusing. The integration of worlds is more difficult for newcomers, and a single world is much easier to write than multiple worlds. Too many related worlds will make it difficult to control, and the plots, characters, and world views of each world will be difficult to integrate. In the first chapter, it is completely possible to expand a book of captains to "exchange lives of equal value" for each Valkyrie, and finally use his own existence to make the final exchange when Otto becomes a false god. Not only can you practice your writing skills, but you can also try to write the emotional line of Valkyrie. Although the plot is old-fashioned, it can still attract some loyal readers. Then open another book to fill in the previous holes and knives, so that readers of the first book will naturally continue to read the second one. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. Come on.

It's a dream come true, um, it's very well written. I just feel that the setting (the one similar to personality switching) is a bit too much, and I hope the author will stabilize and stop adding it like this.

Not bad, sweet! I was numbed by mhy's knife recently, and I finally have a sweet one. It's not easy!

Super exciting. As for the content, it is absolutely wonderful. I still hope that there will be beauty and happiness in the back of this book. The characters are still alive. I hope that the author's description of emotions is definitely based on the content. There are also several extra chapters in the work. It's great if you don't stop updating. At least you'll be in good health and everything will go well!

It's a good book. Even I can't help but tilt the corners of my mouth upwards [smile][smile][smile]

It's a very good book, but one hero has been forgotten, and it's you, Weiwei [laughing evilly]

Damn it, this kind of book should not be given to captains, travelers, and doctors. Recommended Recommendation If there is such a book, I must recommend it. I finally found a book to vent my inner emotions. It feels so good to lose. I was really happy to see the part about Big Viagra. Let you shoot knives all day long. Good guy, someone is here to sanction you.

Ah, I wonder if the author would mind telling me his home address? If it comes out, I will send souvenirs to you tomorrow, unless it is updated

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Those behind follow the team.

Honkai Impact, Ark, and the Three Chefs of Genshin Impact are ecstatic.

4 Stars: I tried my best, but this is still the case where all the Valkyries are not dead. Overall, it looks like a giant baby novel with nothing else. There is no plot or story. It is forced to move. It is good to write it like this.

I'm so high

It looks good, but the time span is a bit long. Note: This is real time

Youth is the ability to face reality and imagine, rather than deceiving oneself according to other people's imagination - "The Shackles of Life" Maugham

Is there a book club? I didn't think it was that great when I first read the title, but after reading it I couldn't stop! It's very exciting, but now I seem to have only written about Sanbengzi. It has buried a lot of holes, but I should be able to fill them in.

So wonderful Good, good book, super exciting

Thank you. The good one out there talks about solutions. It's so damn lazy. I don't even know how long this book has been out of date. I really like reading this. Thank you so much. The good one out there talks about solutions. It's so damn lazy. It's been three or four months since this book was discontinued, right? He didn't preview the data. Did something happen? Or was it written by someone else? Send it to us. The author is not here and he doesn't update. I don't know where he is. The author is still in college and has no time to write. If so, you can tell me. It's not that you don't understand me. He is just a high school student.

I like the author's books and I also like the author's books. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , . Extra

Quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on! Update!

Big cheers for the author! Pay attention to when your body will be updated again.

Well, a magical book, a magical author, and magical update times So, the update time is not fixed? Ps: What about the group? It says in the chapter that there is a group. Here's the group number! !

In order to thank the author for stabbing me secretly when giving us candy, I specially copied a paragraph Listen to me👂👂👂Thank you🙏🙏🙏Because you👉👉👉warm the four seasons🌈🌈🌈Thank you🙏🙏🙏Thank you👉👉👉The world is more beautiful🌏🌏🌏

Damn, it's so beautiful. Even if I haven't watched Honkai Impact 3, I still enjoy watching it. This car is really fast! And this subject matter is good to think about. I want to write the main principles written in the first two chapters into the composition. Come on, author. For me personally, I still don't like reading extra chapters. [Shy]

Author, why haven't you updated yet? It seems that your interruption since May 29th is now July 17th. Why haven't you updated yet?

Suddenly I realized that many of my favorite books didn't have stars.