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I like this book very much. Please write more about the daily life between the heroine and the heroine. Please spread your love. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙏🙏🙇 🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇 You can write more stories about the heroine and the heroine, and the two of them going to various universes, and write about their interactions with Ultra Warriors in other universes, such as the Orb universe, the Max universe, the Ultraman Trigga universe, and the Zeta universe. This can make the story richer and more interesting. I hope the author can be satisfied🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏✨✨✨✨✨✨🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙌🙌🙌

It looks good, but the writing style needs to be improved. Also, can there be so many tool people under the protagonist's hands, can they not always be directly on the main body?

The writing style needs to be improved, and the description of the characters' actions, emotions, and details is not enough, so that readers cannot feel well when watching it. The author can try to highlight the protagonist through other people's words, You can also use the five senses: hearing, sight, smell, touch, and taste to describe some special characters and situations in detail. The description of the scene can also be more detailed, making it more interesting to read. In addition, the paragraphs can be divided into more points. This is not writing a composition, but a novel. The more paragraphs, the easier it is for readers to read. It is best to connect each paragraph with the action or expression of the character, such as: Xiao Lu caught a glimpse of a flash of red light in the distance and felt something was wrong, but he didn't pay much attention. Looking at the monsters raging in the city, he felt a little anxious and quickly took out the sublimator. But just when the sublimator was about to be lifted, there was a sudden pause, and then the sublimator was slowly lowered. He looked towards the other side of the city, his eyes gradually becoming dull. A black and red figure soaring into the sky was reflected in the pupils. He opened his mouth slightly and said in disbelief: "That... That's..." "Gilbarris?!!" ... However, the plot of this book is quite good. You deserve this five-star rating [laughing]

Very good-looking, very good-looking. I'm afraid you'll be proud. I'll give you four stars.

Chapter 15 is what I am excited about [licking the screen][licking the screen], and I give it five stars.

It's so cool. The protagonist is a man who traveled to the Ultra World and became the black dragon Gilbalis, only to become the heroine. Then he came to the Geed World and adopted the human body Xiaolu for 17 years. Just because of its arrival, it triggered a butterfly effect and the villain Tregear, who did not originally appear in the Geed plot, and the replica of Gilbalis and the golden man Big Taurus also came to the Geed world. It's a complete mess. It's a good book.

The writing is very good. I really like this kind of lily in my hometown [laugh][laugh][laugh]. Great support for the author! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

It's very beautiful. Please comment more to make this book come alive! Of course I hope I can give a divine review. If I don't say this, can the author do it? Let the protagonist possess SCP - the deus ex machina! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] If I can't, I'll cry for you [Grief]

I like it very much. This is the first novel I have reviewed, and it is also the first novel I have reviewed with five stars. I hope the author does not ask for quantity but quality, but it can also be a little watered down. Otherwise, the number of words in a chapter is too small and it will not be enjoyable to read. I don't like to keep books, so I will give a few power-generating gifts for love. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

I really enjoyed reading it, thank you to the author! Looking forward to your next masterpiece ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

The structure of this book is clear, and it is a lesbian novel that is reasonably integrated with the drama. The plot concept in it is novel, which made me see different concepts from other Ultra novels. The battle scenes and their appearance introduction are very consistent with the official plot. Support the author! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book is an original novel. Most of the chapters in the story were written by the author himself. The writing is excellent and the imagination is very rich. However, due to some force majeure factors in the later period, the story was hastily cut in half. The brother-sister relationship was well written in the early stages of the book, but it gradually faded away in the later stages (Xiaoluren did not appear in the finale or the extras), and then the emotional line was also relatively bland. I originally thought that the extras might include some family drama, but I didn't write it, which is a pity. In fact, one shortcoming of this book is that the plot of the story is a bit stiff. For viewers who have not watched a certain show, the appearance of some characters and the storylines they develop are a bit confusing. So maybe this is also the reason why many people didn't read this book. This was reflected in the early days of G&D.

Very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡This book is good ヾ ^_^♪It's just a pity that it ended too quickly and it was a bit unfinished!

It's very interesting, but this is the finale and I didn't get enough of it. The protagonist in the second part becomes Tregear and also the Time and Space Administration. I hope that the protagonist will meet the protagonist in the next book and the next book, preferably a second supporting role, and the appearance rate will be as similar as possible to the protagonist in the second part. [Smile][smile]

The storyline and characters in this book are my favorite

It's very good, but the ending is a bit sloppy. Also, I want to ask the author what his group number is [laughing]

Update soon! Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, hehe [laughing] (It's very interesting, the plots are intertwined, in a word, it's very interesting)

It's very good, but it's a little short. I hope the author will update it soon. Even the production team's cows don't dare to stop like this. The book is very good, but it's a pity that it's unfinished. I hope the author can sum up the experience of this book and write the next Ultra Lily novel as soon as possible.

This is a very interesting book. There are so many protagonists, Galatron, but why does it appear so rarely (I quite like this monster) [laughing]

I like it very much. It's true that the progress is a bit fast. I just finished listening to it. I hope the author will publish the third book soon.

It's good-looking, but even if you, the author, update it too little! [Cover face]

It's very interesting. Is there any similar book? I suddenly felt that this type of book is very interesting. [Like][Like][Like]

It's the first time I've found a book of this type, and I feel very good. It would be better if the update speed could be faster.

I will keep chasing until the finale. I hope the author can code the words quickly and write more. It is best to write until I die [exploration]

It's okay, but the author's emotional description is not very good, and the segmentation needs to be strengthened. However, the overall writing style of the book is very good, which makes people feel fresh and new. I suggest that the author strengthen the emotionality. Give it a four.

It's super good. I like it so much. This book is so good!

Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The content is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, but the writing style needs to be improved.

This book is only possible in heaven. The author has written it so well. I hope the author can work hard and write two to three million words. I hope you will be good, author.

Awesome, I love the Ultraman series of books, especially this kind of book