Then Let's Start by Living Together

When I first listened to it, it seemed to be okay, but the more I listened, the more strange it became. The development was very strange and somewhat inexplicable, especially the part where the heroine was drunk with tea. I was completely speechless😥, (Who would be nice to a person who vomited all over the bed? Feeling? And it's impossible to be drunk for so long! This person is still vomiting, my God! The logic is not good, the author can think about the logic, and it will feel better.

Small suggestions The plot was too cliche, and the heroine was not well established, which hurt her. He will swallow his anger and not fight back. The emotional lines between the male lead and the second male lead and the second female lead are not well written. The second male lead and the second female lead get together inexplicably. The emotional line between the female lead and the male lead is not obvious and there are many things that are not explained in it, such as the relationship between the second male lead and his brother's fiancée. The author needs to work hard and look forward to your next novel 😘

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