Kuaiwen: It Doesn't Matter, She Will Take Action with the Beautiful Female Partner

The writing is very beautiful, I really like reading this kind of article! But how to say it? Isn't the title called Heartthrob? Isn't the emotional line a bit lacking? The interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist and supporting actors feels so little compared to the career. There are a bit more career lines, it feels like they account for 2/3, and how should I put it? I don't mean to say that the author's writing is bad, I just want to make some suggestions. The author's writing style is still great, and the transition of the plot is also very good. That's it... The career line gave me a feeling that it talked about something, but it didn't seem to say anything at all. After reading it, it felt like it talked about career, but in fact it didn't say much about career. I don't know how to talk about it, but that's the feeling anyway. Are some places, such as the appearance of the heroine, the description of the environment, and the description of the scene, a bit too much? Perhaps this kind of description is interspersed in the plot too much, and it feels as if nothing happened. Although there are many words written, there is a feeling that I don't know what was said. But the author is really great! Superbly written! I hope I can finish it! Come on! Great author! I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after all, such good writing is rare! Gotta cherish it! Let's give five stars to encourage the author!

Don't give up! [Sending Hearts] The author is great

It's really beautiful. I shouldn't score it this way. Maybe it's because the first plane is too long? Or maybe it's the title of the book that doesn't quite fit the bill. However, no matter how depressed we are, the heroine's inner activities will tell us that we are the ones in control of the overall situation [learned] Well, if you want to read a mindless and cool story about sisters like the heroine beating up Mary Sue Bailianhua, you can quit, because this is really not a cool story. It can be said that there is no Mary Sue Golden Finger, and the system only has auxiliary functions. Then, I think sisters who are taller than the first one can take a look at the second plane first. After all, the second plane is considered he, and the others seem to be beautiful, strong, and miserable. (And by the way, I am quietly looking forward to it. It seems that the first and second planes can be published as separate novels. What can I say, I am actually quite looking forward to a novel with a western fantasy magic background [shy]) In short, this novel is really to my liking. I hope the author will work hard [Like][Like][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's amazing. I really feel like I'm reading a complete novel in each plane. I don't like long planes because the longer they are, the more boring they become. But this novel made me break this idea. The plot is really novel and vivid, although I only watched the Western Fantasy Plane. I'm sorry that I discovered this treasure novel so late. The writing is also very good. It is currently the only novel with good writing that I recognize. It's great.

I feel that the author's writing style is not the best among the fast-travel novels I have read, but it is still really great, and I have a desire to keep reading. It is very attractive, and the plot is not too cliché. It just makes my eyes light up. Of the several small worlds the author has written so far, I like the apocalyptic one the best. Firstly, because I particularly like reading apocalyptic novels. Secondly, I think the setting is very interesting. Then, I prefer the Western fantasy plane. Not many people write about Western fantasy, and even fewer write it well. It's strange to say that I get annoyed when reading novels with a romantic line and a male protagonist, as if I want to read more plot. I don't know how to describe it, maybe I don't like the female protagonist's romance. But novels without emotional lines and pure plots seem to be missing something, and I especially want to do CP. So I saw the type of novel written by the author in big words... It seems to have stepped on my point. I really like this kind of novel with emotions but no CP.

Heehee I like it so much [shy] [love], the heroine setting, the plot line, the lack of a fixed male protagonist, the writing style... Everything is excellent, author, go for it ~ give your full support hehe [blowing kiss] Why isn't it popular? What if (just what if) the author doesn't write it [crying]

The writing is wonderful! The writing is very smooth, there is no uncomfortable feeling when reading, and the characters are well developed. I am currently reading the first world. There is no special Mary Sue or too embarrassing descriptions. Moreover, the author will set up foreshadowing and the descriptions are not as bland as ordinary novels. Maybe it's because I haven't read many chapters. I don't know much about the heroine's character creation. The article focuses on the story and is worth reading. The reason for commenting so early is because there are not many people commenting, so I am giving the author a lot of praise. Don't be discouraged because no one is reading it. The writing is already great, and it can even be even better! Come on update! Our readers will always support you. [Laugh][smile]

You! Yes! I! Of! God! The writing style is very good, and the content is also very detailed. It should be a slow-travel novel, with more than fifty chapters in one world. The first one is the Western European world, which has a grand world view. I really love it! ! ! The second one is an e-sports girl. She fell from the altar, but got up and counterattacked, absolutely amazing! ! ! The third apocalyptic novel that I also love! ! ! The heroine's superpower setting is really interesting! ! ! I haven't read the fourth era novel yet, but it must be very interesting! ! ! This book is my god! Author, never give up! You will definitely be popular! ! ! ⌓‿⌓

It's very good, but there are too many plots. Can you simplify it a bit? Thank you! Furthermore, the impostors in the first world looked so aggrieved! They are all fans, so it should be smooth sailing! I want to read cool articles! [Eating Melon]

Overall, this novel is okay. The first world is really a masterpiece. It can be said that you can write a novel just by picking it out. The overall story is very nice, and each person's story line is also very rich. It can be said that the author's wife is really delicate. The heroine and the overall story have no flaws at all. (I feel that those who gave low scores are because the first story is too long. If you don't have the patience to quit, it's fine. There is no need to give too low a score.) Also, please do your best, the author's wife.

The story of the indelible white moonlight green tea powder has ups and downs and a compact plot. It is the white moonlight in the heart and the unforgettable cinnabar mole. ][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love] Love, it's so beautiful, how could you not like it? The twists in this book are so unexpected that you can't guess what's going on? ⊙_⊙

How should I put it? As a fast traveler, I feel that the world is too long, and there is also the impostor in the middle, which makes me a little uncomfortable. But the author really writes it so beautifully. Also, the system that the heroine is bound to is a bit useless?

It's pretty good, come on

Come, come, support, support! ! !

I am currently watching General Cousin and Doomsday Wen. First reading experience. The story is very exciting. The female protagonist sets up the game, and the male protagonist and male partner are all important parts of the game. The plot keeps hooking you on why the heroine is doing this and what she is going to do, which makes you want to stop. Most of the characters who need to be conquered end up being dazzled by the heroine's intelligence and character. The heroine used herself to prove to us that aside from beauty, the most attractive and important thing in a person is ability. Of course, the excitement doesn't stop there! . . . Cousin General, The End of the World, these two worlds are absolutely beautiful to watch (I haven't seen the others), and you won't lose money by investing in them. It would be too exaggerated to say that a book is a masterpiece (of course there is no such thing in this book🤪). After all, masterpieces need to be read several times to get a feel for it, but it's not like my wife's novel has such a low score of zero (that is, why is it so low😕). Sure enough, the ratings of Tomato novels are too high to be believed. Dear sisters, come here!

It's pretty good, but due to some personal reasons, the more I read, the more I feel it's not as good as before. It's so confusing that I don't even know what the whole text is about. Before giving up, I'll give the author a five-star review. That's all. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better as he writes, and good health😀😘🤗

This book is really good and I can't help but indulge in it. I really like the end of the world. I hope the author will not give up. I really want to see this book end. Please support the author. We will always support you [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

The author writes very well, please work hard

The author's writing is quite good. The heroine is not a love brain, she is strong and logical, and her writing style is also good. She is not limited to love and love. Who can read it without saying a word about the big picture [laughter] I don't quite understand why there are so many good-looking quick travels, and when the final mission of returning to my own world becomes much worse than the previous small world, it really ruins my good impression.

It's just a good read, but I need to say something to those who don't like reading this book. You can choose not to read it and skip it, but there is no need to give a low score...

The author's writing is really good, but it's just not enough to read o(><)o😭😭

The first story, listen to me in detail: There is a kind of shamelessness, which is to burn the people who used to protect you in times of crisis with fire; There is a helpless hidden inheritance, which is a simple desire to live; There is a resentment, a painful struggle floating outside the two races; There is a kind of gratitude that you protect the last barrier of this holy city; There is a kind of addiction, which is the right that cannot be let go (Old Bu Shit); There was a feeling of sadness and speechlessness, the wings turned into burning chicken wings, no, after a few more times, they almost turned into charcoal burning; There is an obsession that has lasted for three thousand years. The people I am forced to kill are indeed the people I want to save at all costs; There is also an obsession, the search for salvation in the heart of the elf; There is a kind of love that makes people regretful. I use my soul to wait for your final clarity, but after you recover your memory, it still disappears with you; There is a kind of suffering: a human being without dark attributes is eaten by demons; There is a kind of liberation by the spell of light, the soul is no longer suppressed, burned and tortured, it is like a meteor flying into the sky; There is a human tragedy, being reduced to livestock, mother and child separated, and the child being eaten; There is a kind of slave who struggles to escape but is trapped in a cage; There is a kind of righteousness that is fearless in life and death, that is a struggle with all one's strength, that is the call to freedom, that is the temptation to go home; There is a kind of plainness, which is that as a monster, it does yearn for human beings to have food and clothing; There is a kind of luck, which is the long-term love between different races, and then there is a cute little monster; There is a kind of mother's love that knows that you will embark on a lonely road to become a king, but it gives you the power of light to make sure you have a safe way out; There is a kind of sadness called "babysitting and taking care of the baby". What is the point of taking all the trouble, other than trying your best to gain a good impression? There is also an obsession, wanting to resurrect the warmth of childhood, but I really don't know that the person in front of me is the person in my heart; There is also a kind of entertainment that uses all living beings as bets and human nature as a tool for pleasure; There is another one with a different concept... There are too many, just take a look for yourself [shy].

"Do you know what will happen to a kite after its string is broken?" "Will it be free to float far away with the wind?" "No" "When the wind discovers that the string holding the kite is no longer there, it will play with it for a short period of time and then throw the kite to the ground like garbage."

I like it, it looks great, but why is the rating so low? It feels like it's more than that. If you score it this way, I feel it is 9.7∽9.6. Definitely more than seven o'clock. The plot is exciting and content, alas, it's just good to watch anyway. What's going on? Did someone maliciously rate this rating?

It's so beautiful, why is it only 6.7? [Cry][cry]

It's super beautiful, please give it a thumbs up! ! ! As long as you work hard, you will definitely become popular. I believe that if you don't give up, as long as you work hard, you will definitely succeed!

The author writes very well

Another treasure book was discovered

Author: You are the most beautiful and handsome! Please update more pictures!

It's really super pretty! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The author needs to write more [I'm about to cry], okay? It's not enough to read [currently working on the manuscript] [please update]