Checking In from the Womb: I Kicked the Empress and Demon Venerable Out of the Womb

The content is quite exciting, that's the first part. I remember that the late emperor was Su Yu and the demon lord was Su Yun. How come the demon lord was Su Yu later? [Laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

It looked pretty good in the early stages, but I don't know if it will change in the future. I'll rate it again when the time comes. What are you writing about? Is there really no logic at all? If you drive high and go low, you should at least start driving!

Normally [scrolls][scrolls] If the system task cannot be completed, it will be erased. It feels like a puppet on strings...

I have read more than 80 chapters, let me tell you about my feelings. I wrote in a hurry, as if I wanted to write everything out, but the writing was a hammer. To be honest, the first few chapters were really attractive, but the more I read back, the more I felt that it was outrageous. The names or surnames were often wrong, and the body of a three-year-old went straight to a teenager. Let's just say that eating gold is not so outrageous. . It was clearly arranged to practice with the emperor, then jump out, but the emperor did not give a clear explanation, and arranged for a brainless female protagonist to appear. Well, I won't say anything. Although the marriage has been arranged, this inexplicable affection for the male protagonist made me scratch my head for a long time. I didn't even think about it; I don't understand the realm. At the beginning, the male protagonist's combat power is close to that of the master. Well, if this golden finger can't finish it, the male protagonist will be killed directly. . Shuangwen is not like Shuangwen. His cultivation is a bit fake. I really can't stand it anymore and gave up. .

The title of the book does not match the content. If you pick up girls at the age of 3, you are really smart.

If you talk about the realm, will you die? There are only a few levels. Just write down the level.

Didn't the author understand his own setting when writing the book? Not only the characters, but also the items obtained. The protagonist had obviously absorbed the Sky Eye that he grabbed. After a few chapters, he took it out of the storage ring and gave it to Su Yu who was confused about the character design. It was really outrageous. It was the first time I saw such a crazy person writing a book [awkward laugh]

This book is interesting at the beginning, but a bit...

The realm is too stretched, and the master's level is too poor.

After reading Chapter 104, I really can't stand it anymore. The level of strength is not explained clearly at all. The names of the two sisters are directly interchanged. Their backhand strength directly surpasses the master, and the master becomes the master. Anyway, the overall summary is that the writing is a bit messy. I feel like I just wrote wherever I thought.