Country**

It's very interesting. I should write more finished novels like this. It's even more difficult to follow them every day [Learned]

This book is comparable to other authors, and its structure is already good. It can be regarded as a complete "martial arts novel". It is based on a certain reality, but it is not based on reality. The country is helpless. I think the country is like the country, but I don't know that the dynasty has different plans. Well, as for what the review said, intrusion (1. Intrusion of poetry), there are no such poems in the other world, so it is not considered intrusion. The author also modified the poems, because it is impossible for people who go to other worlds to memorize all the poems, because it will not fit the situation, so it is understandable to make certain modifications. 2. Firearms The use of firearms does not actually count. Those who have read Jin Yong's works also know that in some aspects, firearms are actually used. The author did not make too much intrusions, but used them normally. And don't think that machines were not used in ancient times. Those who have learned it should know that the Qin Dynasty had car tracks. 3. The problem with the harem is that if a person who travels to another world does not find a few wives, you will know it if you look at ancient China, let alone this kind of martial arts. 4. As for the foreshadowing and the things that the author did not notice, there must be some incomplete writing, otherwise we would not be able to explore it.) Since I am writing a book, it does not matter if it is lacking.

Another stud story, not my cup of tea

Finished reading. I think this is a good book. Temples and martial arts, science and martial arts, all fit together very comfortably. In addition to the attractive content, the portrayal of the protagonist's character is also a masterstroke. The protagonist seems to regard this period of life as a game. Although there is a lot of true feelings revealed, he does not really care. I was a little confused while watching it, but I gained new insights after watching it. Hope to see other works by the author.

I don't know why this book has such a low rating. In my mind, this book's rating should be around 9.1. The ending of this book could have been more substantial, but maybe the author had something to do and ended it in a hurry. Finally, I want to say to the author, keep up the good work!

It's really good, the most important thing is that he is finished!

First of all, this book does not have too many cheats or invincible martial arts! It all depends on the protagonist's wisdom and emotional intelligence to upgrade! This is very rare! Secondly, the author reflects loyalty, whether it is to the emperor or the promise of guarding! Until death, you always want to protect the other person! You don't let me down, and I don't let you down either! The author is a person with great love in his heart! There are also shortcomings in this book, that is, the details are not detailed (positive energy should be described more), and when it should not be detailed, it is a lot of nonsense! Anyway, this book is still very good! There are so many perfections in life, freedom is the most precious!

I think it's quite interesting. Isn't this just the normal thinking of normal people traveling through the past? I wish the author a big hit! ! ! I want to watch the second part. I wonder if the author has any ideas for a sequel [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Very good, wonderful

The writing is wonderful. I don't understand why no one has read it.

A very interesting book. There is no perfect life, only moderate choices. I look forward to the author's new work!

I give it five stars. I watch it for two hours every night and sleep well😊 The writing is good, the plot is twists and turns, and the aftertaste is endless. I will try to write two more books. I will continue to follow you. Come on😊

Not bad [what] [what] [what] but the ending is not as exciting as imagined

Now that I have read more than 100 chapters, the reason for the low score is probably clear. The main reason is that the positioning is not clear. If you want to write a good article, you will enjoy it to the end. If you want to write a rigorous article, you should pay more attention. It is quite difficult to do both. The author writes very well, but it's a pity that he didn't pay attention to the readers' preferences [awkward laughter]

Very wonderful novel.

I am the author, I finished the book early, and it was only recently published on Tomato. You can read it and comment on it as you like [Send your heart][Send your heart]

This is the only book that makes me feel like it could be made into a TV series. It's really good, but some details are a little bit a bit uninteresting, and it's not perfect. But it's really good, no matter the ending or anything else, it's all good. It's just that conquering Qin is too simple and a bit sloppy. Hope there are better works! In fact, some details can be strengthened. The idle enemy is very weak, but if the opponent is very strong, then the details of the pig's feet can make a comeback. I feel it will be better. This book can get 9 points by strengthening several key links. The writing of the seven major families and Chen Guo's negotiation to conquer Qin is sloppy. However, the whole book is really good. I like it quite a lot. It is not that perfect.

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

Not bad, a bit loyal and filial.

What a great book!

If the author has other works, please recommend them.

This is the most wonderful novel I have ever read

Very beautiful and worth watching. A bookworm's perspective, first time commenter

It's great. I've finished watching them all.

It's okay, it's good on tomatoes

Very interesting this book

I almost missed a good book

Not bad, very calculated

It's really good

Perfect, the ending is good too