Ye Luo******

This book is most suitable for having two male protagonists

I have to give it five reviews. From now on, it's really good to watch. The plot, logic and techniques are all good. Come and check it out.

Not bad, the highest rating I usually only say it's pretty good, but I won't say it's pretty.

Big boost to the author 💪

Not bad, but the advantage of the male protagonist as a time traveler can be used to a greater extent. After all, the only thing he can show now is that he is a little more mature than his peers. When encountering things, he will inevitably regress to the stage of his peers.

I hope it doesn't stop reading or eunuch. Ye Luoli doesn't have many children's books at the moment, so she relies on this one.

There are more harem heroines, author, come on!

Finally there is a book for boys, come on. When will the hero's power increase? You can't let it be lower than those of your companions. He is the male protagonist after all, so he must be better than the others. Come on, author. Come on, come on, come on, work hard

Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with its ordinary true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are perfect, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, and the language is plain yet elegant. Concise and full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This novel shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It depicts the psychological description of the hero and heroine to the extreme in plain sentences, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. After reading your novel, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the novel, I dare not comment easily, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still commented, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe the wonderfulness of this novel. So at the end, I just want to say: Your novel is so wonderful, why not add another chapter?

I hope the author can continue writing and not stop updating. This is one of the few books by Ye Luoli that I have seen that continues to be updated.

Excuse me, I am a boy and I feel pretty good-looking. Is this normal?

Rare, really rare

Keep up the good work, author

It's very beautiful, come on!

There are really few male protagonists, I like it The author will continue writing! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting. This book tells us that our wives should start from the baby 🉑🉑💗💗( = Ф 王 Ф = ) Wow

This is the best novel about Ye Luoli that I have read so far! I don't know about other people, (it's to my liking anyway) Come on, author! Super exciting, support you! ! !

Yes, this is the only article I have read where the main character is a boy and he gets a fairy. The only flaw is that there are too few updates and it is not enough to read.

That's great, cheers to the author!

Don't make the protagonist too invincible

Author, do you follow the plot, or do you want to change some of the plot?

The novel is wonderful, but a little creativity would be nice. The writing is also very good, and the character descriptions are unfortunately good. Still quite good at writing. I hope the author doesn't have to get too hung up on the plot. Create your own novel. It's still great, keep it up To be honest, the author really wanted to run away. But I never expected that the volume would be destroyed before I could write it again. In fact, what he wrote is really good. I hope the author can continue writing it. If you write 300,000 words and give it a perfect ending, I won't say anything. I would say it's all about making money. Authors also need a life. If I ask you to write a short story of 300,000 words, you will be finished. I won't say anything, if this one is no longer popular. Just give it a finish. If this book remains popular, it will continue to be written. I know I really can't write anymore, and I've finished scratching, so I won't write anymore. Just give it a finish. Isn't that great? Isn't the author taking the college entrance examination? Time is gone, I should be taking the college entrance examination.

Finally there is a fan novel about Ye Luoli who is not a female channel. Come on, author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Why isn't the hero's fairy Bai Guangying?

Great No loss in investment This should be my favorite Ye Luoli fanfic

Very innovative. One of the best things I've ever read.

The author writes very well and can be read by people with sensitive skin.

Big cheers for the author!

The heroine should think about it and think about it [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Can you tell us more about the background of Ethereal Fairy?