Online Games: the Only One with a Poor Start Is the Novice Wooden Sword

This is a slow internet article from the old days. It is a passionate legend who sadly retired. It is undeniable that the author's handling of details is not in place. Wenzao is not gorgeous and beautiful either. But I still look forward to the continuation of the story. Five stars are given, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's not a cool novel, it's not a novice novel, it doesn't have a bad word count, and the characters are thoughtful. The relationship between the characters is barely interesting, and some details are also not handled well. It is even less popular than Lost Leaves' Zongheng and Wushuang, but at a time when tomato novels are everywhere, this is a good book. I hope that the foreshadowing ahead will make the pie full, and please update as soon as possible. Nowadays, I still read a lot of cool articles. You can tell by the number of chapter reviews. It doesn't matter whether you have a brain or not. Just do it for fun. It's too impetuous. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

One star is missing because of the female protagonist. In the introduction, the landlord is mentioned separately, so she should be the female protagonist, while in the game she is a friend (personal understanding), but the writing in the article is a bit off. . Well, it could also be a double heroine. Personally, I think a single heroine (landlord) is better, and the other one can give a good result, (don't comment if you don't like it), eh. . The author's writing is generally good, keep up the good work💪!

The writing is pretty good! He was chased by others before he came up. The supporting characters are also quite distinctive, but they are a bit slow to warm up. Everyone, take your time and watch. Great support for the author [please update]

Writing about fighting monsters is a bit boring. Try to avoid the visualization of some data-based and procedural text. It is recommended that the text be slightly focused on the expressiveness and visual refinement, that is, to improve the quality of writing, you can use literary language; All other aspects have their own shadow of the above-mentioned problems. For example, emotional scenes can be more delicate, funny passages can be more humorous, and contrast and other expression techniques can be used more; Generally speaking, it is much better than similar novels, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. You can refer to some literary writing methods, or refer to some well-written online games and online articles, and the fighting plot can be more vivid; I have always believed that online novels are also an important form of literature. The author has a great writing spirit. I just hope there will be more unexpected plots and wonderful images. The author must work hard to improve and look forward to excellent works.

It's a rare writing method for traditional online games nowadays. It's really good.

The writing is very good, and it has the same feeling as the previous game articles. I am tired of reading the current game articles, and I can't find the previous ones (I mainly forgot the name). When I read this book, I felt like I was reading a game article for the first time. Overall, it is a combination of reality and games. There is no sense of déjà vu when writing about games, and the daily writing is okay. Mainly, two couple sets, three people. This setting is indeed a bit annoying to me. Apart from this, I can't find any faults in other parts that make me uncomfortable. The plot is still very attractive. Come on, author.

Come on, I believe you can write better and better (I accidentally stayed up late and read more than 100 chapters [face covering])

It's well written. Most online games these days are invincible at the beginning with SSS. Personally, I don't really like them. This type of writing is still very good, but the first few chapters are a bit unsmooth, but it doesn't affect the reading. I just want to know what to do with the two female protagonists? It all feels pretty good, and the emotional line is pretty good. Just hope it doesn't break down! Come on author! ! !

It's very interesting, and the writing is to my liking. It's hard to find such comfortable online game writing these days. I hope I can finish it. Come on💪

A very excellent traditional online game novel with vivid and delicate characterization. It is an online game and also about life, it is a refreshing article, and it is also a growth article. The author's writing style and experience can be seen. There are not many good traditional online games left. Take a look and cherish it! Children.

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The author's writing is very good. I have also read other online game articles. They are either reborn or the system or the very outrageous talents given at the beginning. The male protagonist fights a guild alone while others are still playing silver. The male protagonist has already made diamonds and deals with NPCs all day long. It seems very enjoyable (and very brainless), but there is no such thing as the life-or-death passion between guild wars.

So far, it's pretty good. Compared to other novels, the logic is clear. The numerical values, skills, and economic control in the game are pretty good. The IQ of the supporting characters is pretty good. There are four stars. Giving one more star counts as encouragement.

It's good to watch, it's data flow, it's slow to build up, it probably needs a few million words to finish, there's a lot of foreshadowing, the protagonist hasn't changed jobs yet, the national war hasn't started yet, maybe level 100 is a new beginning, it's really comfortable to watch, much better than those online games now

Although there are many shortcomings, it is not difficult to see that the author is trying hard to show the game world in his fantasy. In this era of popular fast food articles, it is really rare that the author did not choose the same routine as them. Although the overall quality so far cannot be rated as five stars, in order to support attracting people, this five stars must be given.

This is the first time I give a full score. This book may be more suitable for people like me. It is very comfortable to read. The game aspect is not as exaggerated as other books. It is more gradual. I personally think it is more interesting. This is just my impression after reading Chapter 152. I hope it doesn't break down and the author continues to work hard!

Dear author, the content of the story you wrote is very novel and more realistic. I love so much! Many of the plots are what I hope for and are deeply rooted in my heart. Sigh... I hope you don't give up. I hope everyone can take a look when you have time and support the author.

The writing and rhythm are both good. I like this feeling. The data should not be too game-like, as it is too complex and difficult to grasp. It's just that the opening game article needs a sense of immersion to make it more interesting and the audience will be smaller. Come on, author!

It's great. It's the best book I've ever read. The plot is very detailed. It's not invincible and one big version ahead of others. It's enjoyable to read, but it's not that exaggerated. The descriptions of the characters are very detailed and thoughtful. Each character has his or her own characteristics.

It's a very good article, but I don't think many people read this style nowadays. Overall, it's better than those old online game novels and worth recommending. It is normal for this kind of book to be slow in pace, so can the author give more details? [Laughing and crying] As far as this subject matter is concerned, as a reader, I hope that the book will be fatter before I start killing it. However, with the current situation of this book, I am afraid that I will not survive long if I don't pursue it... [Laughing and crying] Come on, author.

It is a large-scale virtual world online game with two female protagonists. It does not follow the plot of other netizen novels where the protagonist is overwhelming and invincible, and the guild leader provokes trouble. The plot has no poisonous points. The transition between the two female protagonists is very comfortable. A large group of brothers work hard in online games. The data of online games are very realistic. It contains rich traditional Chinese Shan Hai Jing, mythology system, ancient Taoist culture, and a little knife.

Nice. I just want to ask the author who he chooses as the heroine. I really care about it. In fact, the author has written it to this extent and it is a pity to choose whoever he chooses. Having two female protagonists is okay and acceptable. I think this is a fly in the ointment. There will definitely be regrets in an excellent novel, but why not make it have a better ending? Their fate is in your hands. When will Sword Immortal be finished? I really can't wait [crying]

I really like it. At least it feels more real than those online games. Although the protagonist has some minor bugs, I can't fight the BOSS alone. I can't stand it if I fight alone. I like to play online games (mainly World of Warcraft), so I feel immersed in online game novels. . . Those who always hide their professions and missions and their heaven-defying equipment seem disgusting to me. This one is quite good. The teamwork and the plot are relatively reasonable. It's worth watching [laughing]

Overall, it looks pretty good. Although I haven't finished it yet, I can't help but want to comment first [smile][smile][smile] It would be better if the author's writing style was better. If he can't write the emotional drama, he doesn't have to write it. At present, it seems that the relationship between the male protagonist and the second landlord is just a meal friend [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Especially the food is cooked by the second landlord and the bowl is washed by the second landlord [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Although I have always said that I can give more when the rent is paid, but it always feels not very good. Also, could the character description be better? I still can't imagine what the protagonist looks like in my mind. Aside from the love story, it's quite interesting. I've caught up to the latest chapter now. The biggest failure of the love line is that the author didn't write it well and it was very abrupt. Just like Linglong's family background and good looks, she must have met a lot of outstanding members of the opposite sex. She had an inexplicable liking for the male protagonist from the beginning. And why is Haotian willing to succumb to others? I don't understand[think][think][think]

The writing is okay. Either the protagonist can finally defeat all bosses alone, or sometimes there are too many introductions to the equipment. The two heroines are indeed slow to get started. They are both promoted level by level. Instead of starting with a bunch of artifacts and endless hidden tasks every day, the rankings are also ranked higher and lower. It's great to find a normal male protagonist. The BOSS is also fought by the main team, which is good.

Come on author, I wish I could see this book being written perfectly and not being a eunuch halfway through. *^_^*👍👍👍

Come on! Come on! I finished it in one go and it wasn't enough.

It feels like the first time I watched an ordinary online game. It feels very similar to the online game Lost Leaves. I hope the author can work harder and update it [making a face] Brothers, please comment more and give 5 stars to support the author. The higher the rating, the more people will read it. The more people who watch it and the more people who like to read it, the more money the author will receive, so that he can update more. Please support me, brothers.

Very nice. I read it after reading a lot of other online game articles, which is really good.