Secondary 2************

I think the content of this book is novel and the subject matter is good. I think your way of writing a diary to present such extraordinary things is very good. But I think some plots are a bit far-fetched (I think the coin-tossing link in the secret realm is a bit far-fetched. But it doesn't affect the reading. It just feels like it was added on purpose.) And the setting of the heroine. I don't really like it. But the content is still very good. There are very few typos. The sentences are quite coherent.

Well enough. Overall. Quite exciting.

If in reality, I really have this kind of cultivation, I can't help but slap them for their self-righteous behavior of letting the male protagonist drive (▼盘▼#). Why do I drive for them because of my good skills? Cut

TNND, fire, why not fire?

Except for the part about my ex-girlfriend that I don't understand, it's pretty well written. I don't know why no one has it.

It's really beautiful, come on

Okay, pretty good-looking

The plot is exciting, although there are seams

Very magical setting, overall it looks good

Not bad, very good. I have already recommended it to my friends.

Why is the rating so low?

The first part is okay, but the second part is a bit borrowed from other novels.

A very good book

It's okay to look at it if you're bored

A very special book

٩( ´The world is boring, but you are there` )و

Very good, good luck to the author

Don't believe rumors, don't spread rumors, don't make rumors, everything is mainly official fabrication! Cause and effect, cause and effect, or cause and effect.

It's hard to say, it's hard to say

Very good, wonderful, wonderful, good looking, support