Want to know the history of Calradia? Let's take a look…
Karadog's usurpation... Nereitses' folly... Arenicos' proclaimed emperor...
Why did the empire break up? And why was it destroyed?
When did the Nords invade? Sturgia's fate?
With the rise of the Battanians, where will the southern desert countries go?
When Akers walked out of Zenda City, which he built with his own hands, he realized that he had witnessed its history!
Reader comments
Everything else is fine, the writing is acceptable, and the plot is good as far as I can tell. As for the fiancée princess, does it show that the male protagonist is a very controlling person? He cried because his brother lost. As a result, the male protagonist felt sour in his heart. Her father doesn't let her go out and is very strict with her, but the male protagonist actually thinks he's doing a good job? How insecure is this? She is just a fiancée and she already doesn't want her to go out to meet others. I only see this right now
Reality affects games, games are equal to dreams, true and false, this theme
The writing is good, but the setting is not good, a bit toxic. I was a soldier before rebirth, which is useless. After rebirth, most of the memories are lost. The setting is too strong, but it is useless. Fighting is no different from ordinary people. There is no use of hair. There is no feeling like losing ten times with one force. The setting of strong strength is also useless, and the character setting is not pleasant. To be honest, it is better not to write rebirth, or to rebirth directly after death. Now it feels like the human soul enters the computer to play games, which is very bad.
Damn it, the more I read it, the more excited I get. I really like this kind of horse-and-slash novel. It's very real.
The author writes very well, but it's a pity that few people have discovered this treasure. Come on
The writing is very good, but a bit, uh, literary?
A well-organized A-cut novel
It's well written, and the details are well described.
It feels average and very verbose. It always writes about the protagonist's heart, but I don't feel the protagonist's changes. In such an environment, if the protagonist does not change or adapt, I can only say that he is the protagonist so he cannot die.
There are so few people reading it. I just read a few chapters. The writing skills and the overall charm of the article amaze a lot of people.
So beautiful! Keep writing and if you are satisfied with the ending, I will give it five stars! Very exciting!
Fine
Please write less about the game introduction. Those who click here will definitely be fans of riding and slashing, and the various settings are clear. Even when passers-by come in, they won't be able to understand what you wrote.
It's too bad to fuck a few times [pouts]
It's very confusing. I can remember it for a while, but I can't remember it for a while. It's hard to do.
It's wonderful. I read it in one sitting. The writing is very good. Without a system to forcefully connect the protagonist's growth, there are basically no logical flaws in the protagonist's growth.
It's really good, very interesting
I read the first few chapters and it was great. Keep up the good work, author.
It's quite good. I feel like the author has dug a hole in the brain-computer interface and consciousness uploading similar to that of Musk, but I don't know how to fill it in the future.
Everything else is fine, the writing is acceptable, and the plot is good as far as I can tell. As for the fiancée princess, does it show that the male protagonist is a very controlling person? He cried because his brother lost. As a result, the male protagonist felt sour in his heart. Her father doesn't let her go out and is very strict with her, but the male protagonist actually thinks he's doing a good job? How insecure is this? She is just a fiancée and she already doesn't want her to go out to meet others. I only see this right now
Reality affects games, games are equal to dreams, true and false, this theme
The writing is good, but the setting is not good, a bit toxic. I was a soldier before rebirth, which is useless. After rebirth, most of the memories are lost. The setting is too strong, but it is useless. Fighting is no different from ordinary people. There is no use of hair. There is no feeling like losing ten times with one force. The setting of strong strength is also useless, and the character setting is not pleasant. To be honest, it is better not to write rebirth, or to rebirth directly after death. Now it feels like the human soul enters the computer to play games, which is very bad.
Damn it, the more I read it, the more excited I get. I really like this kind of horse-and-slash novel. It's very real.
The author writes very well, but it's a pity that few people have discovered this treasure. Come on
The writing is very good, but a bit, uh, literary?
A well-organized A-cut novel
It's well written, and the details are well described.
It feels average and very verbose. It always writes about the protagonist's heart, but I don't feel the protagonist's changes. In such an environment, if the protagonist does not change or adapt, I can only say that he is the protagonist so he cannot die.
There are so few people reading it. I just read a few chapters. The writing skills and the overall charm of the article amaze a lot of people.
So beautiful! Keep writing and if you are satisfied with the ending, I will give it five stars! Very exciting!
Fine
Please write less about the game introduction. Those who click here will definitely be fans of riding and slashing, and the various settings are clear. Even when passers-by come in, they won't be able to understand what you wrote.
It's too bad to fuck a few times [pouts]
It's very confusing. I can remember it for a while, but I can't remember it for a while. It's hard to do.
It's wonderful. I read it in one sitting. The writing is very good. Without a system to forcefully connect the protagonist's growth, there are basically no logical flaws in the protagonist's growth.
It's really good, very interesting
I read the first few chapters and it was great. Keep up the good work, author.
It's quite good. I feel like the author has dug a hole in the brain-computer interface and consciousness uploading similar to that of Musk, but I don't know how to fill it in the future.
So far, it's still a very good book