Qin Yi traveled through the parallel world, obtained the sign-in system and had a lot of wealth. He thought he would live a life of luxury and luxury from now on, but one day, he met the woman who changed his life...
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Dear brothers and sisters, uncles and aunts! I am the author of this book. Please give me free reminders and free small gifts. Your support is my biggest motivation. Thank you very much!
Finally, I will interject again, that... The negative comments can be less~
I don't even know what to say. It was really beautiful and very immersive. I cried several times. I really hoped that the protagonist could come back to life. The whole family is reunited. The author doesn't know, so can it work?
Alas, I couldn't help but shed tears after reading this book for 46 to 50 years. I hope you can update it soon. I just prepared the tissues and saw that they were gone. This is very uncomfortable. Don't cry every once in a while, okay? [I'm about to cry]
To be honest, I cried after watching it and I don't know why. The single-turn plot is not very logical. The writing style can only be said to be average, but it really made me cry, as if someone really did what the protagonist did and was known to me. It may be because I am more sensitive, so I was touched. However, this novel is indeed the only one that I have cried while reading in the past few years. I really don't know why I cried. The plot feels like it should be for men. The part where the heroine's remorse is mainly caused by hatred and then sensational is not written well enough, but the author did combine the supporting characters with the heroine's sudden realization. To be honest, there are still highlights if you read it without thinking. I gave it 5 stars because I sincerely feel that there is still room for improvement, but it did make me cry and I will continue to follow it. However, I still hope that the author can pay attention to the logic and improve the writing style. In the final email, um... It's okay.
Since I read this book, I cried why fate had to befall this great man. How I hope they have a perfect ending and that the protagonist can recover. This is the most touching novel I have ever read.
This book is really good. I have read many types of books, some of which are similar to this one. In fact, I have always had a regret in my heart. Whether it is on Tomato or other platforms, or a novel has been published, a good ending is one, and a twist is the other. I don't know whether the author only writes sad stories or sweet stories. I still hope that the author can write more sweet stories in the later stage, and he can also write as much as possible about the depressing parts in the early stage. But the key to depression is that after enough "stressed" emotions have been accumulated, too much foreshadowing will only make the reader feel tired of reading. There are many novels I have read before, some of which are better than your writing, and some of them are worse, but I gave up on them and turned to your novel for a reason, or maybe your writing is mixed between true and false. I just based on my personal feeling, especially I hope that it will not be unfinished in the later period. I have high expectations for your novel, the author.
I ran out of books to read, so I randomly found one. Then I came calmly, and then left crying [face covering] But I thought of a plot where the male protagonist's cancer is solved by the system, and then he and the female protagonist live a sweet life until they grow old together.
It's pretty good. As a grown man, I cried while watching it. Even though it has an open ending, I can never imagine the feeling in my mind without the author personally saying it. I have one thing to say: this system is of no use at all except teaching the male protagonist how to make money [smile]
This is my first rated book. I have read it for tens of thousands of hours on all novel platforms. It's my first rating. I'm not exaggerating. It's really good. Good luck, author. I hope there will be a follow-up.
The plot is good and the writing is also very good
Suggestion: It takes practice, work slowly and carefully.
It's very sensational, but there are many repetitive sentences, which affects the reader's potential emotions, because I have tried to write novels, and to be honest, it is very time-consuming. It takes two hours to think about the plot, so I know that you, the author, must have spent a lot of time. So these words may cause dissatisfaction, but I sincerely hope you can stick to it and continue to write some better works, come on ＾0＾~!
It's quite sad, but the number of pictures is too few, so I followed it slowly, and when I read the novel, the heroine's father always pronounced her surname as Jiang [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
To be honest, it is very interesting. Although there are many places where the time is not right, I have to say that it is really tear-jerking. Five stars is my evaluation of the plot development of this book. Unfortunately, I cannot give a higher star. I have to say here that the author writes well and does not ruin the book.
"Ding, it has been detected that the host is in a life crisis and is about to burp. The wealth sign-in system is offline. The most powerful enhanced system is officially online. The system is loading... 1%, 2%... 50%... 100%."
"Ding, the strongest enhancement system has been loaded successfully and has been bound. After detecting that the host will burp in ten minutes, do you want to activate the emergency plan? Do you want to receive the novice genetic enhancement gift package?"
The second novel that made me cry, author, come on, don't stop updating
It's really beautiful, I don't know why the rating is not high.
You have to take this book seriously. I cried when I read the novel for the first time. I won't say more. It's useless to say more. I hope everyone can support this book.
People who read this book are all people with stories. People who don't love will not read it. I don't know why the rating is only 8.8, Maybe because it is too short, but I want to say that this ending is the best. An ending without an ending can have more different fireworks. If you like this book, give the author a thumbs up [send a heart]
It's true that the author's writing style is not particularly good in some places, just average, but the emotion in his book is really heart-wrenching. The male protagonist in the book is really a gentle person, and the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is enviable to others.
I originally wanted to give it one star (for two reasons: first, I am selfish and don't want to share what I like with others. Second, I am afraid that others will feel uncomfortable seeing it) but in the end I gave it five stars. I finished reading it in one go. It was very uncomfortable. We are so in love but can't be together. Although it's not a good thing to have a place (everyone has no work and doesn't need to rest? From beginning to end), the debut is normal. I hope that I can give other characters good endings in the future (although the bad ending is very memorable). In the end, I feel that the author is a bit rushed. I hope that next time it can be slower, the speed can be slower, and the quality is higher (although it is painful to wait for it to be slow)
finally
Looking forward to the next book
The tear-jerking classic of the year, just finished taking antihypertensive pills! 🐮
Author, this book is really "healing". I have a "very good" thing for you. Can you give me your home address? [Smile]
Come on, author, I like it so much. Please pay attention to your health while updating. Come on, come on.
If you remove some things from this book, it would be a top-notch online novel, especially the open ending. Most novels are not as good as this, and there are very few such unfinished ones. As an online bookworm for 9 years, although the subject matter is not particularly novel, the works on the same subject are either deviant or poisonous. I don't know. Is Dao a foil for his peers or I was really moved to tears because of that chapter? Or maybe this novel is systematic, reborn, and has unreasonable numbers, but these did not interfere too much with the content of the story like his novels, which really made me feel refreshed. I have read a system article before. Like this one, it did not describe the system too much. Instead, it just said that because of the system, it has a lot of money and items, but the subject matter is different. I forgot the name of that one. It also made me read it. I found that a system article does not necessarily have to have such gorgeous functions, because readers do not like it. Instead of looking at the system, I like to see the rewards that the system brings to the protagonist. If I really want to write about the system functions, the system issuing tasks, or the system signing-in feel that the story is a bit too deliberate, but it has the opposite effect on the work, and there is a feeling of being led by the nose. Writing the system as a tool means that the protagonist can cleverly use it to solve problems. In other words, It is to encounter the problem first and then have a solution, rather than the system giving you the solution in advance, so that readers can guess the content behind it, and the ability to attract readers is gradually improved and reduced. After all, the current Internet writing is very different from the past. The writing style of the current Internet writing is a little worse than the previous Internet writing. However, the online writing is very enjoyable now. This also caters to this fast-paced society and is used to supplement the spiritual deficiency of me and you. However, this kind of reading is not that enjoyable. It's not the illogical one, like the cliches of web articles that appear on the Internet. In short, I am very optimistic about the author. The author I like seems to have stopped writing, and the book is just average. I met such an author again today. I hope you will continue to work hard. I am optimistic about you.
Alas, why are books of this type so tear-jerking? This book is even more tear-jerking, oh my god, I almost shed all the tears for him, but I didn't shed all the tears, because I still have some left to cry while reading other novels🌚.
I was so moved by the story book that I cried, so good, I look forward to reading it from you.
Dear author, your work is honestly beautiful and very contagious. I cried several times and felt unfair for them, so I want to say come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. I hope your writing will get better and better. There are just a few minor flaws. If you correct them, they will be perfect. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
It's really good. Although the story is old-fashioned, nowadays, developing the plot at a faster speed is basically a common method used by all mainstream authors. It is really good to be able to write such a touching story in such a fast plot. It is highly recommended. This is of course my personal feeling.
The only book that made me cry for a long time. I don't know why this book has such a low rating, but I think a good book does not have to have a perfect ending. The best fairy tale is not only the princess and the prince who are together forever, but perhaps loyal love will be buried in the long river of history.
This book is very good, and the writing is very touching. Everything in the beginning is a preparation for the following. If you don't understand it, don't criticize it. The three elements of the novel are the characters, environment and plot. This book is very well written. If you are impatient, I suggest you skip to chapter 44 and confess at chapter 44.
It's a very emotional book. I cried while reading it.
I only have one word "good" that is touching. I like it very much. I just hope that the male protagonist in the ending is still a male protagonist instead of a clone. Doesn't the male protagonist have a system and time travel? Will there be a twist later?
Dear brothers and sisters, uncles and aunts! I am the author of this book. Please give me free reminders and free small gifts. Your support is my biggest motivation. Thank you very much! Finally, I will interject again, that... The negative comments can be less~
I don't even know what to say. It was really beautiful and very immersive. I cried several times. I really hoped that the protagonist could come back to life. The whole family is reunited. The author doesn't know, so can it work?
Alas, I couldn't help but shed tears after reading this book for 46 to 50 years. I hope you can update it soon. I just prepared the tissues and saw that they were gone. This is very uncomfortable. Don't cry every once in a while, okay? [I'm about to cry]
To be honest, I cried after watching it and I don't know why. The single-turn plot is not very logical. The writing style can only be said to be average, but it really made me cry, as if someone really did what the protagonist did and was known to me. It may be because I am more sensitive, so I was touched. However, this novel is indeed the only one that I have cried while reading in the past few years. I really don't know why I cried. The plot feels like it should be for men. The part where the heroine's remorse is mainly caused by hatred and then sensational is not written well enough, but the author did combine the supporting characters with the heroine's sudden realization. To be honest, there are still highlights if you read it without thinking. I gave it 5 stars because I sincerely feel that there is still room for improvement, but it did make me cry and I will continue to follow it. However, I still hope that the author can pay attention to the logic and improve the writing style. In the final email, um... It's okay.
Since I read this book, I cried why fate had to befall this great man. How I hope they have a perfect ending and that the protagonist can recover. This is the most touching novel I have ever read.
This book is really good. I have read many types of books, some of which are similar to this one. In fact, I have always had a regret in my heart. Whether it is on Tomato or other platforms, or a novel has been published, a good ending is one, and a twist is the other. I don't know whether the author only writes sad stories or sweet stories. I still hope that the author can write more sweet stories in the later stage, and he can also write as much as possible about the depressing parts in the early stage. But the key to depression is that after enough "stressed" emotions have been accumulated, too much foreshadowing will only make the reader feel tired of reading. There are many novels I have read before, some of which are better than your writing, and some of them are worse, but I gave up on them and turned to your novel for a reason, or maybe your writing is mixed between true and false. I just based on my personal feeling, especially I hope that it will not be unfinished in the later period. I have high expectations for your novel, the author.
I ran out of books to read, so I randomly found one. Then I came calmly, and then left crying [face covering] But I thought of a plot where the male protagonist's cancer is solved by the system, and then he and the female protagonist live a sweet life until they grow old together.
It's pretty good. As a grown man, I cried while watching it. Even though it has an open ending, I can never imagine the feeling in my mind without the author personally saying it. I have one thing to say: this system is of no use at all except teaching the male protagonist how to make money [smile]
This is my first rated book. I have read it for tens of thousands of hours on all novel platforms. It's my first rating. I'm not exaggerating. It's really good. Good luck, author. I hope there will be a follow-up.
The plot is good and the writing is also very good Suggestion: It takes practice, work slowly and carefully. It's very sensational, but there are many repetitive sentences, which affects the reader's potential emotions, because I have tried to write novels, and to be honest, it is very time-consuming. It takes two hours to think about the plot, so I know that you, the author, must have spent a lot of time. So these words may cause dissatisfaction, but I sincerely hope you can stick to it and continue to write some better works, come on ＾0＾~!
It's quite sad, but the number of pictures is too few, so I followed it slowly, and when I read the novel, the heroine's father always pronounced her surname as Jiang [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
To be honest, it is very interesting. Although there are many places where the time is not right, I have to say that it is really tear-jerking. Five stars is my evaluation of the plot development of this book. Unfortunately, I cannot give a higher star. I have to say here that the author writes well and does not ruin the book.
"Ding, it has been detected that the host is in a life crisis and is about to burp. The wealth sign-in system is offline. The most powerful enhanced system is officially online. The system is loading... 1%, 2%... 50%... 100%." "Ding, the strongest enhancement system has been loaded successfully and has been bound. After detecting that the host will burp in ten minutes, do you want to activate the emergency plan? Do you want to receive the novice genetic enhancement gift package?"
The second novel that made me cry, author, come on, don't stop updating
It's really beautiful, I don't know why the rating is not high. You have to take this book seriously. I cried when I read the novel for the first time. I won't say more. It's useless to say more. I hope everyone can support this book.
People who read this book are all people with stories. People who don't love will not read it. I don't know why the rating is only 8.8, Maybe because it is too short, but I want to say that this ending is the best. An ending without an ending can have more different fireworks. If you like this book, give the author a thumbs up [send a heart]
It's true that the author's writing style is not particularly good in some places, just average, but the emotion in his book is really heart-wrenching. The male protagonist in the book is really a gentle person, and the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is enviable to others.
I originally wanted to give it one star (for two reasons: first, I am selfish and don't want to share what I like with others. Second, I am afraid that others will feel uncomfortable seeing it) but in the end I gave it five stars. I finished reading it in one go. It was very uncomfortable. We are so in love but can't be together. Although it's not a good thing to have a place (everyone has no work and doesn't need to rest? From beginning to end), the debut is normal. I hope that I can give other characters good endings in the future (although the bad ending is very memorable). In the end, I feel that the author is a bit rushed. I hope that next time it can be slower, the speed can be slower, and the quality is higher (although it is painful to wait for it to be slow) finally Looking forward to the next book
The tear-jerking classic of the year, just finished taking antihypertensive pills! 🐮
Author, this book is really "healing". I have a "very good" thing for you. Can you give me your home address? [Smile]
Come on, author, I like it so much. Please pay attention to your health while updating. Come on, come on.
If you remove some things from this book, it would be a top-notch online novel, especially the open ending. Most novels are not as good as this, and there are very few such unfinished ones. As an online bookworm for 9 years, although the subject matter is not particularly novel, the works on the same subject are either deviant or poisonous. I don't know. Is Dao a foil for his peers or I was really moved to tears because of that chapter? Or maybe this novel is systematic, reborn, and has unreasonable numbers, but these did not interfere too much with the content of the story like his novels, which really made me feel refreshed. I have read a system article before. Like this one, it did not describe the system too much. Instead, it just said that because of the system, it has a lot of money and items, but the subject matter is different. I forgot the name of that one. It also made me read it. I found that a system article does not necessarily have to have such gorgeous functions, because readers do not like it. Instead of looking at the system, I like to see the rewards that the system brings to the protagonist. If I really want to write about the system functions, the system issuing tasks, or the system signing-in feel that the story is a bit too deliberate, but it has the opposite effect on the work, and there is a feeling of being led by the nose. Writing the system as a tool means that the protagonist can cleverly use it to solve problems. In other words, It is to encounter the problem first and then have a solution, rather than the system giving you the solution in advance, so that readers can guess the content behind it, and the ability to attract readers is gradually improved and reduced. After all, the current Internet writing is very different from the past. The writing style of the current Internet writing is a little worse than the previous Internet writing. However, the online writing is very enjoyable now. This also caters to this fast-paced society and is used to supplement the spiritual deficiency of me and you. However, this kind of reading is not that enjoyable. It's not the illogical one, like the cliches of web articles that appear on the Internet. In short, I am very optimistic about the author. The author I like seems to have stopped writing, and the book is just average. I met such an author again today. I hope you will continue to work hard. I am optimistic about you.
Alas, why are books of this type so tear-jerking? This book is even more tear-jerking, oh my god, I almost shed all the tears for him, but I didn't shed all the tears, because I still have some left to cry while reading other novels🌚.
I was so moved by the story book that I cried, so good, I look forward to reading it from you.
Dear author, your work is honestly beautiful and very contagious. I cried several times and felt unfair for them, so I want to say come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. I hope your writing will get better and better. There are just a few minor flaws. If you correct them, they will be perfect. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
It's really good. Although the story is old-fashioned, nowadays, developing the plot at a faster speed is basically a common method used by all mainstream authors. It is really good to be able to write such a touching story in such a fast plot. It is highly recommended. This is of course my personal feeling.
The only book that made me cry for a long time. I don't know why this book has such a low rating, but I think a good book does not have to have a perfect ending. The best fairy tale is not only the princess and the prince who are together forever, but perhaps loyal love will be buried in the long river of history.
This book is very good, and the writing is very touching. Everything in the beginning is a preparation for the following. If you don't understand it, don't criticize it. The three elements of the novel are the characters, environment and plot. This book is very well written. If you are impatient, I suggest you skip to chapter 44 and confess at chapter 44.
It's a very emotional book. I cried while reading it.
I only have one word "good" that is touching. I like it very much. I just hope that the male protagonist in the ending is still a male protagonist instead of a clone. Doesn't the male protagonist have a system and time travel? Will there be a twist later?