"Sister Bardos~ This is the chocolate wonder house I just made for you. All the toys in it are edible!"
Broly looked at Bardos with a happy face, and just when he was about to show off to her, a purple ball of flesh whizzed by: "Wow hahaha~ There are so many delicious chocolates, Broly is really thoughtful!"
"Xiangpa~~~"
Seeing the house of wonders being smashed to pieces by pigs and cats, Broly's heart was broken...
(The author is a pseudo-Dragon Ball fan, so please bear with me if there are some mistakes! This article is light-hearted and daily-oriented. Friends who need passionate articles may be disappointed!)
Reader comments
The shameless author is here to guard the building [star]
[Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Broly is a legendary Saiyan. Even if he doesn't practice. His Qi also doubled every year. You didn't write this down at all.
The writing is average to below average and the plot is above average. The timeline is messed up in two places in the book, which does not affect the outline. The book is considered to be above average. The main word count is too few. I would give it 4 stars if I recommend it. It is worth reading.
It's really interesting to write. I hope the author will do more work [laughs][laughs]
It looks good. If you look at it on a daily basis, it looks good.
A perfect book, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the description is delicate, and the taste is moderate. It's good [like]
Very interesting writing
I feel so hungry while reading this novel
What's not bad is that Broly is a legendary Saiyan with blood suppression on ordinary Saiyans, as shown in Dragon Ball Theater.
I hope the author can keep writing
Personally, I prefer stories with multiple female protagonists. The author knows how to arrange a few more [smirk] [smile] [smile]
Niubi, so good
Very nice. I hope the author can write about it.
It is often recommended to buy an extra book
Very nice, quite interesting
It's really nice, but the ending is a bit hasty.
I hope the author can publish more Dragon Ball books
It's been a while since I've seen such good Dragon Ball novels. It's just a bit lacking.
Not bad, especially during the special training, it was very exciting!
Come on, author, hehe, it's very beautiful. Write less female protagonists.
The content is fresh and happy😊. Come on, author, write more good books.
Very well written and wonderful
Why doesn't Bulma accept it?
Few exquisite products
You wrote it very well, but it's too bad. I wish the author good health and all the best
It's beautiful, but it's a pity that it ended
Good! Five-star support! I hope the author can write more. After all, the author said at the beginning that he only planned to write a short story...
It's great and smooth when viewed as everyday writing.
This book is pretty good
It sounds good. I will write a good one next time
I am Yun Longzhu. I have only read the first few episodes of Dragon Ball and the manga version of Buu. I read a lot when I was a kid, but I have forgotten most of them. This book is good in my opinion. The author's writing is very good. Come on.
The shameless author is here to guard the building [star] [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Broly is a legendary Saiyan. Even if he doesn't practice. His Qi also doubled every year. You didn't write this down at all.
The writing is average to below average and the plot is above average. The timeline is messed up in two places in the book, which does not affect the outline. The book is considered to be above average. The main word count is too few. I would give it 4 stars if I recommend it. It is worth reading.
It's really interesting to write. I hope the author will do more work [laughs][laughs]
It looks good. If you look at it on a daily basis, it looks good.
A perfect book, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the description is delicate, and the taste is moderate. It's good [like]
Very interesting writing I feel so hungry while reading this novel
What's not bad is that Broly is a legendary Saiyan with blood suppression on ordinary Saiyans, as shown in Dragon Ball Theater.
I hope the author can keep writing
Personally, I prefer stories with multiple female protagonists. The author knows how to arrange a few more [smirk] [smile] [smile]
Niubi, so good
Very nice. I hope the author can write about it.
It is often recommended to buy an extra book
Very nice, quite interesting
It's really nice, but the ending is a bit hasty.
I hope the author can publish more Dragon Ball books
It's been a while since I've seen such good Dragon Ball novels. It's just a bit lacking.
Not bad, especially during the special training, it was very exciting!
Come on, author, hehe, it's very beautiful. Write less female protagonists.
The content is fresh and happy😊. Come on, author, write more good books.
Very well written and wonderful
Why doesn't Bulma accept it?
Few exquisite products
You wrote it very well, but it's too bad. I wish the author good health and all the best
It's beautiful, but it's a pity that it ended
Good! Five-star support! I hope the author can write more. After all, the author said at the beginning that he only planned to write a short story...
It's great and smooth when viewed as everyday writing.
This book is pretty good
It sounds good. I will write a good one next time
I am Yun Longzhu. I have only read the first few episodes of Dragon Ball and the manga version of Buu. I read a lot when I was a kid, but I have forgotten most of them. This book is good in my opinion. The author's writing is very good. Come on.