Prehistoric: Reborn in Prehistoric Times, I Am the Beginning

A newbie writing a book for the first time! If there is something poorly written or wrong, you can help me point it out and I will try my best to revise it and make progress while writing! If there is something that cannot be changed, I will try my best not to make the same mistake again in the future! The prehistoric plot in this book was set by the author himself, and it is very different from other novels! If a book friend finds it unacceptable, please try to be merciful, because a bad review from you is likely to make the author uncomfortable for a long time! In addition, I would like to state that the author's cultural level is limited and he will definitely not be wordy. Basically, the whole book is written in vernacular. Please be considerate!

A suggestion, don't always jump back and forth between third person and first person, it will seriously affect the reading experience.

The original disciple will not die because of the list of gods. It is recommended to modify it.

The previous plot feels okay, but I don't like stallion stories. I can only give ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Yes, but the protagonist does not reflect the original calculating character. It is suggested that the author can improve it in future creations. (◦˙▽˙◦)

Super pretty! Keep up the good work and write more! Updates are best as soon as possible

The original one I used

It's pretty. Come on.

Not bad, a cool article. That's it, what kind of bike do you want?

It's very exciting, but the chapters are a little short, and it's not enough to read.

Well written, you can read it

I give you a five-star rating

Yes, this is how it should be written in the prehistoric world

To be honest, this book is well written. From the beginning, it is really good. Five-star praise. Just finished reading

The ideas are clear, and there is no messing around like other ancient novels. It is very smooth to read.

Red and fiery, in a trance

Already well written

There's not much to say, it just feels great

I like how the author writes whatever he wants and does whatever he wants

It's great [like][like], I should write another one about Yuanshi [like][like]

The whole thing looks great, please like it👍🏻💯💯💯👏👏👏Excellent

It's already good, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Not bad, you can take a look

The author is awesome! I have never found such a beautiful story about traveling back to the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty.

Not bad. I don't know why the rating is low, but I still like it very much. Although I didn't want to watch it when I saw the original character as the main character, I felt pretty good after watching it.

Come on and update, I'm really enjoying it. Updates suddenly stopped.

It was good, but it ended too quickly and was too short.

Very good, very exciting. Looking forward to your new book.

Very good worth seeing

Very good novel